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There was a small detail while saving, that James had only sub-consciously noticed.
 
Instead of the usual warning not to turn off the game, there was another message:
 
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Todd: "Dad, look!"
 
Father: "That's an ugly looking…Islooking...Is that the Pokemon game?"
 
Todd: "Yeah, it's Pikachu's face!"
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Todd turned to James, his expression sincere. "I didn't play it, I just wanted to see what Pokemon you had."
 
"You threw the damn thing, too." His father added, "Give that to your brother and leave his game alone from now on."
 
"Look at this," Todd said, showing James the screen.
 
James looked down at the screen.
 
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The room suddenly erupted with sound
 
 
"IT'S COMING FOR YOU!!!" James heard a voice bellow in a binary/computerized sounding voice.