Lola.avi

Hey there, I'm the original writer for this Loud House 'creepy'pasta. I wrote it on Deviantart sometime in May 2017 in three parts. I attempted to be scary and 'subvert' expectations, though obviously I failed at that. I currently have no intentions to return to Deviantart, so I'll be archiving this pasta here. I have been writing some other stuff since this, though not as often. Feel free to insult this as much as you'd like, I encourage it. - Ashley

Part 1

Last week, my computer was hacked by a anonymous Devientart Hacker, I clicked a link he sent me through a note to open it, but it was a virus, but today I now have full control. But I noticed a notepad file that was open for me...

"Please watch the lola.avi file I have downloaded as a apology, thanks."

I was confused, but he seemed to be serious about it, so I opened the file, and watched through...

It was a Loud House episode! The Loud House has to be my favorite TV show, so It's pretty excited when I opened it, but the opening was.... off

Lola was nowhere to be seen, not even in the "1 Boy, 10 girls" Shot, but in a last few seconds of the opening, Lola was there,but she had cuts and scars all over her face, black, droopy blood dropped down her eyes, she had no arms, and her eyes where completely black, with only dark red circles in them. And the episode begins...

The name of the episode was "A Loud's Torment" I admit, I was a little sunburned up by the title, anyways. The title card showed the loud kids (except Lola like the opening) in darkness, with dark red eyes grooming over them, much similar to Lola's eyes from the opening's ending.

TO BE CONTINUED

So last week, my computer was hacked by some anonymous guy, I clicked a Devientart link, which was actually a virus . But today, I was able to go back to control, but when I got on, there was a Notepad file open...

"Please watch the lola.avi file I have downloaded as a apology, thanks."

I was confused, but

Author's Note: No, that wasn't an error. An earlier version of the first part of the pasta was copy-pasted at the end of Part 1 for whatever reason

Part 2

The episode opens with with the Loud family's house, as it slowly zooms in on Lola and Lana's room, Lola was sitting on her bed, doing her makeup, as usual, Lana was also there, playing around with Hops the Frog. Lola spoke up, saying "Lana, may you please give me that mirror please?", "Um... why can't you?" Lana confusingly asked, "hmm, well, I guess I will use the reflection from our window... GASP, oh wait... somebody broke it!" Lola answered to Lana. "Sigh... okay..." Lana disappointingly replied, as she went to the hallway to get her mirror.

Just then, Lincoln whispered to Lana, "Hey Lana, come here for a sec" he said, as Lana came in. All the Loud Sisters except for Lola, we're in Lincoln's room, "alright, so you guys are most likely upset about Lola , right?" Lincoln asked his sisters, as they agreed to him, "I have a plan to stop this but be careful, it might be a bit.... messy" I was extremely interested in Lincoln's plan, we're they gonna attempt to ruin Lola's dresses? Who knows!

Lincoln, Lynn, Luna and Lucy sneaked to Lola's room, as they catched Lola and pinned her to the floor, "Ugh! Guys! What are you doing!" Lola asked angrily, "Something we should'be done when you were born!" Lincoln awsnered. That made me uncomfortable, but I continued watching.

Lana came from the backyard and grabbed a shovel, as she went and completely stabbed Lola's left shoulder, I was utterly surprised, all that could be heard was Lola's blood-curttling Screams, as Lana stabbed her right shoulder, as both arms fell off, and blooded shot out from Lola's arms.

Lisa went and got a needle, and filed it with some sort of brown liquid, and stabbed her eye with it, if Lola's screams weren't loud and terrifying enough, nothing could be compared to THIS, Lola screamed for mercy, as she attempted to escape her fromcbeing pinned to the wall, as Lisa went for the next eye.

Lola's eyes went black, as her pupils became a dark red, Luan grabbed Lola by the neck, and pressed her neck extremely tight, as Lola coughed and coughed, her neck was bleeding heavily, and Luan dropped her, as Lola was slowly dying on the floor, the last words she heard was, "you were always hated apon , no matter what" from Lincoln, as Lola lied on the floor, dead, as a pool of blood leaked out of her eyes, neck, and legs

TO BE CONTINUED

Part 3

I was in shock, what kind of sick person would create something like that? Anyway, I still had a few minutes of the video left, so I decided to watch the rest.

The screen faded to black, as the words "The Next Night" appeared in the screen, as it faded to the backyard of the Loud's House, with a small dirt patch which was where I think the Loud Kids buried Lola's corspes, the camera rested on the patch for a full minute, before Lola's Hand was raised from it, Lola's arm was crystal Clear, with only and see-through gray was colored on it, the rest of Lola's body was raised, she had the same black eyes and red pupils on her eyes, as well as 2 ghost hands, Lola grabbed the shovel next to the backyard's door, and entered the kitchen while dragging it.

she entered Lisa and Lilys room, as Lola carried lily to the floor and bashed her head open with the shovel, killing her instantly, it made a loud Bang sound, waking up Lisa; Lisa had a shocked expression, "L-lola? I thought we killed you!" Lisa gasped, "oh... you did..." Lola grabbed the same needle Lisa poked her eye with, and stabbed it in Lisa's eye.

"OH MY GOSH, HELP! LINCOLN! LUCY! L-LENI!" Lisa screamed as Lola grabbed her glasses and broke them, picking up a handful of the shards dropped, Lola stabbed and stabbed Lisa with the shards, spraying tons of blood on her bed and the floor, as Lola left Lisa to die.

Lola entered Lana's room, Lola mutalated Lana's pets, until a big pile with animal corpses was make, blood was everywhere, Lana waked up from all the noise, with a terryfied expression on her face, "Good morning Lana!" Lola told Lana, as she took one of Lana's dead Snakes and made it bite her neck, as Lana was slowly dying, "And good NIGHT!" Lola laughed.

Lola entered Lynn and Lucy's room, Lola picked up Lucy, and banged her to the lamp, as Lucy's face slowly burnt off, "Gee, Lucy, you really needed to get some SUNSHINE!" Lola grinned as Lucy's face was completely melted, and all that was left of her was her skull. Lynn woke up from the racket, "Lo-Lola? O-oh go-od" Lynn shivered as Lola slowly walked up to her, "Sweet dreams, Lynn!" Lola laughed as she banged her head on the wall until her brain was clearly exposed.

Lola entered the next room, which was Luan and Luna's, Lola carried Luan, and threw her off the window, breaking Luan brake many of her bones, kiling her instantly, Lola grabbed her Shovel and Luna's Guitar as she made Luna stand up straight, and squished her head with them, teath and blood shot out everywhere, makeing a big mess.

Lola then entered Leni and Lori's room, Lola waked up Leni, "L-lola? I thought you were dead!" Leni said to Lola, "OH! It was for our movie in 2020!" Lola awnsered Leni, "Come on, I need to show you the Director's room!", "O-M-G! I'm so EXCITED!" Leni cheered, as she followed Lola to the kitchen, Lola grabbed a knife, and stabbed her eyes, neck, and stomach, instantly killing her, Lori walked in to see what happened, Lori was terryfied, she attempted to run away, but Lola was faster, she stabbed the back of her head, as she left Lori to die.

Lola went to her final victim's room, Lincoln, as she slowly went up to a Sleeping Lincoln, and raised her Shovel up and smashed him, just then, my computer crashed, I restarted it, and everything seemed normal, however, something terryfying was there.

My wallpaper was a stage with Lolo, who had the same dark red pupils and no arms, with all of her Sisters and Brother hung up on the stage, I went to change it to my Funtime Freddy wallpaper, but for some reason, I could not...

Let this be a lesson for you all, when someone anonomus sends you a video, NEVER open it...

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