The Loud House: Commuting Suicide

Surely You've Watched Or Atleast Heard Of The Cartoon The Loud House.

If You Havnt, I'll Just Fill In The Basics. The Show Revolves Around An 10 Year Old Named Lincoln Loud, Or Maybe 11. Lincoln Lives With His Mother And Father In Royal Woods Michigan, Along With His 10 Sisters, Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy Lola, Lana, Lisa, And Lily. Chris Stavino Had A Darker Plot Planned For Episode 34.

One Morning, I Went Black Friday Shopping With My Mother At Walmart. While She Went To Find Some Things For My Newborn Cousin While I Was Looking For Some Videos I Might Like. There I Found Things Like Mickey Mouse DVDs, Does The Explorer DVDs, Spongbob DVDs, Thomas The Train DVDs, When Something Caught My Eye. It Was A VHS With A Red Sticker, Reading The Text, The Loud House In Marker, And A Porly Drawn Picture Of Lincoln And His Siblings With Black Voids For Their Eyes. It Sent A Chill Down My Spine Because It Reminded Me Of That Haunted Max And Ruby DVD Witch I Heard Story's About. I Decided To Ask My Mother If I Could Purchase It Along With 5 DVDs. She Agreed.

We Bought Everything We Found. Afterwards, I Brought The VHS And DVDs To My Room. I Had An Old VCR In My Room. I Put In The VHS And It Show Promos For Thomas The Train Movies, Spongbob Episodes And DVDs, The Amazing World Of Gumball Episodes And DVDs, Garfield DVDs, You Get Me. It Got To The Main Menu With Two Options. Play Episode, Or Self Destruct. I Chose Play Episode And The Intro Started. The Opening Was Normal At First, But Then Towards The End Of The Song, The Voice That Usually Says Duck, Dodge, Push, And Shove, That's How We Show Our Love Said Something Disturbing Instead. "Your Friends Can't Save You From Death, No Matter How Many You Have, No Matter What You Do, You Will Die The Same Way As Everyone Else, Then Your Forgotten. Well, That's Just Dark! I Said To Myself. The Title Card Popped Up, It Said "Commuting Suicude" I Was Confuesed But I Never Thought Such A Happy Show Would Have An Episode With Such A Said Title. I Stupicky Brushed It Off, Thinking It Was Some Special Episode

The Episode Started With Lincoln In His Room, The Weird Thing About This Scene Was For Part Of The Scene Lincoln Just Had Black Circles For Eyes Without A Nose Or Mouth. The Screen Faded Out And Then Lincoln Was Normal Again. He Was Looking For His Stuff Rabit Toy, BunBun. Then Lincoln Went Into Lori And Lenis Room. He Said "BunBun, Are You Hiding" No Answer. He Went In To Luna And Luans Room And Called For BunBun Again. "BunBun, I'm Gonna Find You" He Went To Lynn And Lucy's Room, Again, No One Was There. No One In Lola And Lanas Room, Lisa And Lilys Room, Or Rita And Lynn Sr.s Room. He Proceded To Go Down Stairs To The Abandonded Looking Living Room And Kithcen. What Was Real Unnerving Was That The Furnature Looked Like They Had A Bite Taken Out Of Them. He Left The House And Searched For His Friends. He Didn't See Anyone In Clydes House Or Liams, Or Stellas, Or Zaks. Passing The Nearby School House He Went So Far As To Going To His Grandparents Senior Centure And Even Ronnie Anne's Apartment, But Still Nobody. He Went To The City Park, Witch Look Like The Background Of The Slendytubbies. The Next Scene Nearly Made My Puke. Everyone That Went Missing Was Hanging From Trees. Lincoln Began Turning A Dark Black Color With White Eyes With No Puples. He Began To Cry Over The Death Of His Family And Friends. Then Noticed A Rope Hanging From A Tree With Nobody On It. He Hanged Him. The Tape Ended With A Picture Of Lincoln Now In His Normal Color With No Eyes Or Legs. Blood Everywhere With The Most Scary Detail, Lincoln's Face Looked Like It Was Drawn On. A Porly Drawn Smily Face.

I Took The Tape Outside And Smashed It On The Ground As Much As I Could, Then I Through The Broken Pieces Into A Bondfire I Made. As The Remains Burned I Said I'll Never See You Again Lincoln! To Myself. I Called Chris Stavino About The Episode And He Said "That Episode Was Made By A Phyco At My Company But I Fired Him!" I Went Outside To Water My Plants The Next Morning But The I Saw The Exploded Corpse Of A Dog. But Not Just Any Dog, Lincoln's Dog Charles.

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