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I was walking home one day thinking to myself. Man have have I screwed up my life. I screwed it up by smoking, doing drugs and letting my anger towards bullies get the best of me. I was so fed up with my life that I was thinking, I hope god kills me. Since I don't have the guts to do it myself I wished of it. So on my way home feeling depressed and angry. A black cloaked figure comes toward me. It is 12:00 a.m in the the morning. Feeling scared I walk faster to avoid this entity. Than it disappeared staring at me in the mist. I'm thinking to myself, "It must be my imagination". I than half way down the block of my neighborhood of hiddenHidden hollowHollow driveDrive. Just passing the woods, I see the figure again. It than appears right in front of me and starts speaking, saying these words. "You wish of death and iI will grant you it child". I frozen stiff lie to the entity, "No I would never!" The entity than replies, "we will see child". Than it disappeared into the darkness of the woods. The whole way home I felt terrified so I ran home. Ran in my room and locked the door. Wishing my parents and my three sisters were home to comfort me. I was alone at now 12:30 a.m. alone...
 
I was walking home one day thinking to myself. Man have have I screwed up my life. I screwed it up by smoking, doing drugs and letting my anger towards bullies get the best of me. I was so fed up with my life that I was thinking, I hope god kills me. Since I don't have the guts to do it myself I wished of it. So on my way home feeling depressed and angry. A black cloaked figure comes toward me. It is 12:00 a.m in the the morning. Feeling scared I walk faster to avoid this entity. Than it disappeared staring at me in the mist. I'm thinking to myself, "It must be my imagination". I than half way down the block of my neighborhood of hidden hollow drive. Just passing the woods I see the figure again. It than appears right in front of me and starts speaking, saying these words. "You wish of death and i will grant you it child". I frozen stiff lie to the entity, "No I would never!" The entity than replies, "we will see child". Than it disappeared into the darkness of the woods. The whole way home I felt terrified so I ran home. Ran in my room and locked the door. Wishing my parents and my three sisters were home to comfort me. I was alone at now 12:30 a.m. alone...
 
 
 
 
I than look behind me and I see this black mist. Than the entity appears again. This time I new I wasn't dreaming or going crazy. This was real and I newknew it. staringStaring at the entity terrified, it than begins to speak again. "I know you seek death and therefor iI will grant it to you." This is your last chance to make your choice." I replied, " whatswhat's your name creature"? It than whispers in a dark deep voice. "I'm god". I than at first came to my senses and new in my heart that this wasn't god. So I said no. It than said, "if you do I will give you all of the gold you could ever wish for". "All of the power and desires if you only worship me the true god"! I than reply. "Sounds amazing"! It than replies we will see. It than vanishes. I than so filled with excitement of getting my wish. Go to sleep hoping to wake up in my wish. I than went to bed than i got awoken by loud screaming. I opened my eyes and saw the creature again. It than disappears and iI start to see fire. I could feel the flames and than hands dragging me down into the ground. I get dropped into this dark pit and all I see is horrifying creatures. With bloody faces and no eyes and gold was carved at sewed into there bodies. sinkingSinking them down into a bloody pit of gold. Than envy was branded onto theretheir skin by the same black entity. It than looked at me and said, "your next child."
 
I than look behind me and I see this black mist. Than the entity appears again. This time I new I wasn't dreaming or going crazy. This was real and I new it. staring at the entity terrified, it than begins to speak again. "I know you seek death and therefor i will grant it to you." This is your last chance to make your choice." I replied, " whats your name creature"? It than whispers in a dark deep voice. "I'm god". I than at first came to my senses and new in my heart that this wasn't god. So I said no. It than said, "if you do I will give you all of the gold you could ever wish for". "All of the power and desires if you only worship me the true god"! I than reply. "Sounds amazing"! It than replies we will see. It than vanishes. I than so filled with excitement of getting my wish. Go to sleep hoping to wake up in my wish. I than went to bed than i got awoken by loud screaming. I opened my eyes and saw the creature again. It than disappears and i start to see fire. I could feel the flames and than hands dragging me down into the ground. I get dropped into this dark pit and all I see is horrifying creatures. With bloody faces and no eyes and gold was carved at sewed into there bodies. sinking them down into a bloody pit of gold. Than envy was branded onto there skin by the same black entity. It than looked at me and said, "your next child."
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