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Nomi wideman and me sat in her apartment. She was big now so she got her own apartment. We sat there and chewed gum and read a couple of future Seventeen magazines.<br />"So um what do u tink of HARY?" she asked me as she pooped a bubble.<br />I craked a even bigger bubble. "Um he is super nice. Why?"<br />"ya i think he realy likes u, cuz you're pretty and modist, you are so thin but still so curvey."<br />"Aw ur the best sweetz," I replyed. "But u are so awsom too, look at ur fabulous hare!"<br />"Well I tink Hary likes u and also Echeb."<br />"OMG... um... are you intrested in them?"<br />"WUT ME?" Nomi said "NO WAY HOSAY. I am only ment for one guy and that is Q Junoir, once he gets 19 and gets a job were gonna get maried."<br />"Oh ok."<br />Then there was a big CRASH and the ship shook. I wnated to be in the fight mabey fixing stuff in endginearing, or maybe going to the bredge and helping but i told hary i would stay in nomi's apartment so i keep my premeses!<br />then nomi's cream soda fell on her lap.<br />"oh no!" she said "i will brb just gonna run and take a shower to get this sticky stuff off my pants!"<br />so she went in the shower<br />but then while she was in the shower the lights all went off... it was totaly scrray...!<br />then there was a hideous green lite that appeared in the corner of hte room... it was... A BROG!<br />i scremed but nobody cold hear me over the big shower noise<br />"hello shaundrah it is i the borg queen" the bog said but it was in ny head, not in my ears "thou are especally important to the bog, for thou can help us..."<br />"no i will not help u!" i replyed<br />"yes u must... u must, shaundrah or we will asemblate harry kim!"<br />"no not hary he is my best frend on voyager!" i cryed<br />"thou frend wilt be asimbilated... unless u kill icheb and bring us back his body"<br />"nooooo!" i scremed "i could never do that"<br />"thine can make thou choice either icheb or harry but if we kill harry we will also asibilate the whole of voyager."<br />the bog queen came close to me and there was a black thig in her hand and then she dropped it on the bed... and then she vanished into a ball of green lite!<br />Then the lites came back on and I could see and i saw that the bog queen had left a black bottle on the bed! i knew from looking tat it was filled with POISION!<br />-<br />'''BTW this is based on a real thing that hapend in my life one time there was a crean soba on my frends coffee tabel then it fell in her lap and she had to showr'''
==CHAPTER 6 'Chapter 6 7 of 8s revenge!':==
'''SO ALL U MEN PEEPZ WHO were criticcalizing myspelling, mabey you should focus on the storey on and btw i got a lerning dinstability SO THERE, NEHOW I have done some spell better in this cpater. '''<br />"OMG!" I shooted!<br />naiomi walked out and rubed herself with the towel to make her hare dry.<br />"UM RU ok, Shaunda?"<br />"Yaaa..." I lide. "I just um droped sometimg on my foot."<br />"Because u were statled by the brogs?" Naiomi asked.<br />"Um ya..."<br />I stufed the posion into my pockett and smiled at Naiomi. She smiled back and started to read a magazine about bride stuff while sitting on her bed. I pretended to read a copy of Teen Cosmo but I could not concintrate even though the artical was cool about how to draw your fave logos on your fingernails with nail pollish.<br />Finally the red alirt was ended. We went out. Then Captin Janeway was there. She reach for my shoulder and looked really sad.<br />"Um wut?" I ask her.<br />"um i got some bad news Shaundrah... it is... Harry Kim... he is..." Captain gasped sadly. "Partly asembilated. it was 7 of 8. She went crazy and tried to asembilate Hary when the brog cub was near by."<br />I screamed. "NOOOOOOOOOO!" I screamed.<br />Finally the red alirt was ended. We went out.<br />Captan Janeway wipe tear from her eyes. "He is in the doctors hospitel. The doctor has frozen him in a tube just like Spok in that movie. It is keeping him from getting totally borgiefied."<br />Naomi held my hand and pointed an angryfinger at Janeway. "What a bout that bitch 8 of 9? Whats bein done to her for trying to murder Harry? She is evil like must be compelled by SATAN or sth."<br />I nodded though i kind of thought naiomi could tone down the BAD language i agreed with her stentiments.<br />"I dont know, I'm sorry ladies." janeway shrugged. "I could not stop her, I panicked. She has run away and hidden. perhaps... perhaps you can find her Shaundrah, with your 20th century ways of doing things."<br />I noded. For the honor of Harry I would track her down and find out why she had gone totally crazy
==<br />CHAPTER 7. 'Chapter 7: THE RETURN OF 7':==
'''I hope u liked the last chapie! This one is edited by my cosine, AMy since my paino teacher is away in Flordia visiting her granny. She is pretty smart despiet going to pubicl school... :\ THANX AMESSSS!'''<br />I tiptoed through the jefreys tubes. I knew seven of 9 would be in there somewhere because she could not transstport away, and she could not steal a shuttel<br />"6 of 9, wher are you?" I called out "I have some redvines and some watermelon slurpy!"<br />I figuered that everyone loves those things, even an immodestly dressed, masculinely behaving ex-brog. But she did not reappear. I was descouraged and let out a deep sigh.<br />Then I was in the hospital and Naomie was there. She lied on a bed looking all paled and sick. Harry was in the bed beside her. The doctor said, "Oh no!"<br />"Whats wrong with her."<br />"I dunno" the Doctor replied. "It seems there are borg nanna probes in her bloods streams."<br />"I csn't believe it! First Ha then Naomi rry. What is heppening to my freinds?"<br />"Coinsidents." The Doctor Said.<br />I nodded it had to be. Knowing i caould do nothing at that point I left the hospital and I returned to my room and lay down on mybeutiful 4 poster bed and tried to rilax. Sudenly I heard a voice that came through all the speakers in my room... and the lights were green!<br />I gasped!<br />'HELLO SHAUNDRAH"<br />"Who is it?" I looked arund but could see nobody. I felt scared. I jumped up from the bed and ran to the door bt it did not open like the doors are supposed to open (like the doors at walmart or piggly wiggly), and there were no handles. I tried to grab something to pull the door open but my hands just slid all over it slippery and smooth.<br />"there is no escaping me, shaundrah."<br />"Is that... 7 of 9?" I gasped<br />The womans voice laughed satinistically and low. I pressed my body aware the door and began to pray quietly.<br />"where are you?" i demanded!<br />"dont take that tone with me, you inlosent CHIlD!" She let out an evil hiss.<br />"Are you... using the ship computer to blare your voice in my room?" I asked "I can track you down..."<br />"By the time you figure out where I am, I will already be gone, hahahahahAHA! No, Shaundra,h I bring you a message from her majisty the BORG QUEEN."<br />I waited. She took a moment, and then she spoke loudly.<br />"If you do not kill Icheb as you were demanded..." She cackled evilly. "We shall kill each and every one of your friends!"<br />I gasped and fainted a little bit. "So... so you did that to Naomie and Harry! YOU MADE THEM SICK!"<br />She answered only with a long and evil laugh. I passed out.
==CHAPTER 8. 'back to 21 century'==
'''I dident edit this chapie cuz they was takeing too long to edit an i wanted it up qick. also u shold read my new stry about hemione granger from hary poter becoming a misonary... THX GUYS SHAUNDRAH COURTNEY'''<br />i desided to walk around te ship to cleared my head. sudenly i saw q! the young good looking q not the old one AND he was carrying a big baskit of red vines and nachocheese bugles, all ov my favorite things!<br />"Hello shaundrah i have been watcching u from affar and i think you are the utterly cherming member of the carew! your faith and ccountenance and your knowledge of 21 century culture is unmatched!" he handed me the baskit "i bring you some gifts of your time..."<br />i looked thru the basket and there were red vines, cheese bugels, some cans of barqs root beer, a copy of the dvd Couragous, and even a copy of sara mally's book before you meet prince charming (my fave) signed by the author!<br />"WOW!" i said "its as if u know me perfectly!"<br />we looked out the window beside one another and he looked very turmoiled and intelligent. his hair looked very beutiful and he wore a perfect checkered shirt and a pair of really nice abercormbie jeans and a pair of converse with neon yellow laces. he looked like a guy off the cover of a magazine or from a boy band or some thing.<br />"I do said q "I have watched u for a long, long time... i knew you were a very special girl, shaundrah."<br />suddenly he snapped his fingers and we were at chick fila, my favorite restarant, and i had a plate of chicken burger in front of me. q sat across from me watching me with his dark forest black eyes. he had the same chiken burger, and he had got a plate of fries and a pepsi for us to share. we just sat there and ate for a while and i really enjoy the taste of not-replicator, not nellix sloppy food. we did not have to say anything.<br />"shaundrah i am sure u want to go home, don't u?" he asked after a while<br />"yes,, yes, please!" i said.<br />"your wash is my command, my dear" he whispered "I will visit again soon..."<br />and he snaped his fingers and suddenly i was on my bed, and my abeka booklets was beside me, and i could hear britney downstairs singing and using the vacum cleaner.<br />i stood up and i looked around. i looked out the window - it was lawn out there! no stars or brogs!<br />"Praise the lord!" i said "he sent me Q to rescue me!"<br />I ran downstairs and began helping my mom make girlled cheese sandwich for lunch. but i would soon learn that it was not the end of 24 sentury for me...
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'''Athor's Note: Hi guys this is the next chapter i hope u like... xd I am almost done this 1 but i have a new 1 i'm working on that will be way better. Also Amy check this for spelling & stuff.!'''<br />Shaundrah screamed and tried to run but Vorek was a Vulcan and therefore, much more logical, stronger, and faster than Shaundrah. Harry tried to grab his faser, but he wasn't fast enough. Like a cheetah, Vorek swooped in and grabbed Shaundrah by the waist and pulled her into the turbo lift. Then he pressed the "emergency close" button and the doors swooshed shut.<br />Shaundrah screamed!<br />back on the bridge...!<br />On the bridge where Shaundrah was not there anymore, Harry ran up to the turbo lift and tried to force it open with his hands but he could not. Tucok pressed some buttons on his button pad.<br />"Oh my gosh captain they have locked me out of the computer!" he said.<br />"What does he want with her" asked Harry?<br />"He has... the pin farr."<br />"Nooooo! Who knows what he will do to Shaundrah!" Harry yelled.<br />Captain Janeway gasped and passed out and Chakotay had to carry her over to the other turbo lift to take her to sick bay. Then Harry jumped over the the bannester and then he ran and got a big faser and Tom stood up and he can too. Then the two of them Tom and Harry jumped into the Jefress tube and started to chase Vorek. They crawled really fast with their tricorder out so they could follow him.<br />"My tricorder says that Vorek stopped the turbo lift between deck 3 and 5 and is stil in there so lets go there!"<br />"Good job Tom! Yes let's go."<br />They crawled really fast to save Shaundrah.<br />back in the rubo lift...!<br />Shaundrah kicked and screamed but she could not escape from being held under Voreks arm like a rag doll because Vorek was Vulcan and they are very strong.<br />"Let me go what the heck is wrong with you, you are so messed up in the head its not even funny!" she screamed<br />"I am not I am thinking clearly. More clearly then I have for years."<br />Then he dropped her and she stood up and he stared at her with very evil looking eyes that were black. Then he walked closer to her like he was a cat that was going near some mouse for dinner. Except that she was not a mouse and she had a katana. She took it out but Vorek's volcan hands just grabbed it out her hand like it was card bored and bent it in half and tosed it a side. It clanked on the floor and then Vorek started to take off his jacket... Shaundrah screamed and tried to kick him in the manly bits but unfortunetly he just ducked at the last minute.<br />Then he put his hand on her face like Spokc did in that movie just like the whale and Shaundrah.<br />"Your mined to mine mind." Said Vorek. "Our thought to your thought... we are to be mated mwa ha ha! Let the PON FAR heing!"<br />"Noooo!" she screamed as she tried to push his hand off with her hand<br />But then she started to see images in her head... of the planet vulcan and of earth and she started to feel all hot and excited and she knew this was wrong, wrong wrong!<br />Back in the jefrey's tube...<br />Ton and harry were getting very close and then suddenly they heard a scarming nose.<br />"Did you hear that tom?" Said Harrty.<br />"Ya it sounded like someone saying 'no' in a very loud voice"<br />"Oh my gosh it must be shaundrah... what is that BASTARD Vorek doing to her?"<br />Then they both looked at each other with really scared face and then they started to run as fast as they could. Harry got out his faser and then he started climbing down a ladder and he used one leg to kick the top of the turbo lift.<br />The turbo lifte cealing smashed open just like in that episode of tng where captain Picard has to lead a bunch of kids up some ladder. Harry's rage had made him super strong probably more strong then even Vorek. Harry pointed the faster at Vorek.<br />"Let go of her!"<br />"Nooo! I will already started the mind melt!" Vorek laughed evilly "Nothing will break us a part now... NOTHIIINNGGGG!"<br />"Step away, Vorek or else we will have to shoot!" Tom yelled pointing his faser down there too. "you dont need to do this!"<br />"I won't!" Vorek said "shanudra is mine for ever!"<br />Then Tom shot him on STUN but stun did nothing to him because he was stuck in the crazy of the pin farr. Vork just growelled and squished his finger tighter around Shaundrah's face. She tried to scream but she could not because Vorek's crazy thoughts were strating to invade her mind.<br />Then Harry shot Vorek on a higher sting. It did nothing to him. Finally Harry set it to the highest setting and shot him and Vorek screamed and fell to the ground and then distinticrated. He was dead. Shaundrah looked up through the hole Harry had smashed thru the top of the turbo loft.<br />"Harryyyyy..." she whispering.<br />Then sudeenly she fell down into an unconscious heap on the floor.
In sick bay... 1 eek later...<br />Shaundrah opened her eyes and saw the doctor standing over her. She could see captain janway in one nearby bio bed with chkaotay standing over her.<br />"Vorek is dead from being fasered. thank goodness for Harry if he had been a few mints later, you would be dead. said the Doctor.<br />Harry stood a few feet away from shaundrah in a corner. He looked really embarrassed and all blush. Then after a minute he left. And Shaundrah went back to sleep.<br />''' note: I want ore review... i did not beta read this because i was in rush. but if you review a lot i will promise to get a betta reader in the future and not rush so much.'''
==CHAPTER 29 - the end==
'''AUTHORS NOTE: this is near the end i will just have rpiloque after this i think but i hope your hot too dissapointed because i got a super awsome story on here about LEFT BEHIND (the storys about the christians in the rapture) and i also got a great story about deep space 9 that i think i will posting soon'''<br />Shaundrah felt really bad after Vorek and Seven were dead. Then, Nellix desided to leave the ship to get married to some Tallaxian girl on some random plant. Evry one was so happy and it brought joy to the ship again. Quark even threw a big party with tons of orderves and fruit juice drinks. And at that party Captain Janeway even came even because she had been sick for the past few wreeks. Also when she came there Noami and Icheb announce that they were pregnant and also the Doctor said they would have twiplets.<br />"We are going to make them Shaundrah and Aliesse and also Jayde of they are girl's!" Icheb said "nad if they are boy's, we will name them Mathew Mark and John after the gospel's."<br />"Wow I am so honored!" squealed Shaundrah and she and Nomi jumped up and down together so exitedly.<br />Captain Janeway then said "Hello Crew I got something to tell you."
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