The beach monster: Difference between revisions

I changed some grammar and spelling issues and I rearranged some of the words. The plot is still the same though.
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(I changed some grammar and spelling issues and I rearranged some of the words. The plot is still the same though.)
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inIt was 2002 thesewhen two best peoplefriends were walking aton the beach. theone 2seemingly peopleregular wereday. namedTheir ericnames were Eric and rickRick. theyIt werewas roomatesactually Eric's birthday that day and itthis was ericshow birthdaythey were celebrating it.
 
theyThey loved the beach so thethey swam,biuld built sand castles and dig. theyThey also walked around. rick said when are we going home?. eric said i don't know its my birthday and i love the beach.
 
"When are we going home?" Rick asked Eric.
rick said ok but when?. eric joked mabye midnight. they ate cake at the beach and actually stayed there to 11 o clock pm. rick said can we go home?.
 
"I don't know, it's my birthday and I love the beach." He replied casually.
eric said NOPE. rick yelled fine well i'm walking!!!. eric joked shhh your gonna scare the crabs. rick was kinda scared walking home alone so he said can you walk me home?. eric said NOPE.
 
"Okay...but when?" Rick continued, he had a bad feeling about the beach, something inside him told him that he should just go home.
rick yelled FUCK YOU!!!. rick ran home. soons after a hour it was midnight. eric heard huge splashing in the waves and waves that even reached the beach houses. eric was kinda confused and scared.
 
"Maybe midnight" Eric joked while patting Rick on his back in a reassuring manner. They spent the rest of their time eating cake and the next thing they knew, it was already 11 o'clock!
then he pointed his flashlight at the water and saw a huge monster that had 4 feet and 2 arms and blueish glowing eyes and a huge frown looking angry with no pupils. it had a grump forhead and a down nose.
 
"Can we please go home?" Rick pleaded.
the creature was like 10 feet tall. it roared. and eric screamed and ran home as the creature chased him breaking and knocking over houses.
 
"Nah, it's not even that late" Eric said while shrugging his shoulders carelessly.
eric ran to see rick dead. eric screamed and continue running. the creature flipped over a car.
 
"Well I'm walking!" Rick yelled, annoyed by Eric's answer.
eric ran home and quickly locking the door putting a little tabel in front of it. the house kinda tilted and the creature broke its hand in the window grabbing the guy and the guy squirmed and backed away as he fell out of the creatures hand.
 
"Shh...your gonna scare the crabs" Rick was beyond furious at Eric's carelessness, so he began to walk home but ye turned around and said one last thing before he was off on his own.
the creature lift its legs in the window and then got its whole body through it. the guy ran upstair as the monster got in the house. the creature broke the steps with its arms and screetched.
 
"Fuck you..."
the guy screamed and the creature said in a demonic voice I'M THE CREATURE THAT HIDES IN YOUR CLOSET AT NIGHT I'M THE CREATURE IN ALL YOUR NIGHTMARES I AM THE ONE ALWAYS BEHIND YOU!!!!.
 
Too soon, it was already midnight. Eric all of a sudden heard huge splashing in the waves and they even reached the beach houses. He was scared and confused, he curiously pointed his flashlight in the direction of the water and was shocked when his beam of light landed on a pair of glowing yellow eyes, it took just a few seconds for Eric to see that it was huge, it had four feet and two arms, a huge frown was etched across its awkwardly shaped head, he also noticed the creature did not possess any pupils and had one of the longest noses he's ever seen, like a cucumber but blue; the creature looked about ten feet tall.
the creature smacked the guy into a wall and the creature dissapeared in mid air.
 
It roared and that's when Eric realized he had just been standing there, glued to his spot. He immediately set off running, screaming as he went. The creature chased him, breaking and knocking over many houses.
the guy then reported his encounters with the cops.
 
While running, Eric saw Rick's dead body lying on the sidewalk next to a garbage can, he didn't have any time to feel much remorse, so Eric continued screaming ran even faster. The creature flipped over a car.
 
Eric ran all the way home, never stopping for even half a second. He quickly opened the door and locked it behind him, placing a table in front of it too, but it was still no use. The house tilted and that's when the creature reached it hand through the window, shattering the glass and reaching over for Eric. Once the creature had a good grip on Eric, the creature shook randomly shook Eric around.
 
It eventually got its whole body to fit into the small house. Eric somehow got loose from the creatures firm grip and ran upstairs. The creature climbed the steps with ease, lifting its feet only twice.
 
"I'm the creature that hides in your closet at night...always" The creature begins in a menacingly calm manner, easing its face close to Eric's as he stands still with fright, "I'm behind you...always" Eric lets out a small whimper, "I'm watching you...always" and with that, the creature took a clarinet out of nowhere and played one of the worst tunes Eric has ever heard in his life. The screeching sounds of the clarinet caused blood to well up in Eric's ears.
 
The creature then spat at Eric and disappeared. The next day, he reported his encounters with the cops, who never believed him despite all the very obvious evidence backing him up.
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