Total Miner: Forge

You know that game on XBOX Live Indie called Total Miner: Forge? If you play Minecraft you probably do. It's pretty much the same thing. I downloaded it to try it out, see what it is. I was hooked. It's pretty fun, collecting blueprints, stuff like that. I made a huge house in 2 Hours. I had a Portal leading to a cave were I mine. I kept going back and forth making trips. Then, I saw a strange creature in the distance of the cave. It wasn't a lurker. It was a Player. He ran towards me. He stared in my face, not moving, and disappeared. When he disappeared a SFX played. It sounded like a human death cry. It was weird.

It was 2:00 AM and I started to make my summer home, by a huge lake in the distance, I gathered wood and headed out there. I saw the Player standing in the distance again. He flew right in my face. He whispered, 'Lurkers are Near, hide your fear...' and disappeared. That weird Human Cry SFX played again. I ignored it and went on building my summer cabin. It took me about 10 minutes until it was finished. I placed some chests in there and placed all my supplies. I saw a Spider Egg by my spawn. A whole cluster of them, maybe 40. There were 100s of lurkers circling my house, good thing I had a Diamond Sword. I ran over there and destroyed all the Spider Eggs. All the Lurkers died.

I didn't see the Player until 3:40 AM. He was in my summer home. He destroyed half of it, taking a bunch of blocks with him. He ran off. I replaced the stolen blocks and guarded my house. I kept an eye out for the strange player. I looked at the time. 4:20 AM. I decided to make a city. I made a building with the shops in it, a blacksmith shop, a crafting shop, and a storage shop. At the end of the street was my house. It was 5:20 AM when I finished the city. It was late, but I didn't care I love Total Miner, and I don't care what anyone else says!

It was 7:00 AM. I decided to get some breakfast. I grabbed a box of Apple Jacks and put them in a bowl. I scarfed it down and went back to Total Miner: Forge. I looked at the screen and saw the mysterious Player. He was running around circling me. He kept saying 'HELP HELP HELP HELP HELP' then he fell on the ground. The screen started to freak out. Static was everywhere. The screen turned Red. I saw the words GAME OVER on the screen. I started to freak out. I turned off my XBOX in a haste. I turned it back on. It started on my Avatar screen. My avatar was me. It looked exactly like me, the face, the glasses, everything. Even the dirt in my fingernails were visible. That creeped me out. Then, a knife came flying and hit my avatar head. I swear when that happened I blacked out. I woke up at 12:00 AM. Total Miner: Forge was opened. There was a flat land on the screen I picked up my controller.

I started to walk around, trying to find anything, then I saw the Player. He was holding a bloody knife. He looked directly at me and threw i-

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