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''Author's Note: {{AN|I tried my hardest to fix the punctuation shit in this. Was it necessary? I don't know. It's not really for my readers; it's more for me, 'cause I think reading the story in its original state is painful.'' '''BEWARE OF BAD FORMATTING!!!'''}}
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==INTRODUCTION==
 
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He says "No, not here! How did it get beyond Bikini Atoll?!?!" in a panicked tone. This suggests that he was freed from the Red Mist some time after
Squidward's death. He must've survived it long enough that it had given up on trying to kill him.
Linna spots the Scottish Fish and says "Hey! What are you doing ya weirdo?"
The Scotsman Replies with "Get away from Sylia! She's infected with the Red Mist!"
All 3 Knight Sabers yell "WHAT?!?"
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Nene replies with "He used some sort of potion on me, and it somehow worked."
 
A dead child flashes on the screen for a split second. It was a 12 year old boy only known as Aiden Church. Alyssa's mother confirmed the boy’sboy's identity.
Aiden Church was the younger brother of Alyssa. His stomach was ripped out and its contents were poured all over his face. He was also stabbed about 10-12 times.
Sheldon French could be seen kneeling down looking at Aiden's corpse. He had a somewhat worried look on his face. He tells us that he was not okay with
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The Scotsman replies with "Ya evil Red Mist! I'll make sure ya pay for the damage you've caused all over da world! And I'll make doubly sure that all of yer victims are returned to their homes!"
 
Static appears again, this time appearing for 5 minutes...for fuck’sfuck's sake.
 
When the static disappears, there is a shot of Sylia from the first scene (with the red eyes as usual) accompanied by this ominous text:
 
 
 
"Say your prayers, little one. Sylia is coming to get you, and she will take you for herself."
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The final part of the video is of a hooded silhouette opening a door with a gun in its hand.
 
As you know, Andrew Skinner was 'allegedly' the creator of Red Mist. His involvement in it was proven false years ago, because it’sit's not actually real. He is an actual storyboard artist, however.
From what he told us, Alyssa and Sheldon approached him and asked him to make the All Gone video. He instead made storyboards and later placed the video onto the VHS Tape.
Alyssa later placed the tape on the doorstep of Robert Webster's home.
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So you've backed up the film onto a CD?
 
WEBSTER:
Webster:
Yes, I have.
 
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Mr. Webster, Do you have any plans to release the film to the public?
 
WEBSTER:
Webster:
I only plan on releasing a few clips. I refuse to release it in its entirety.
 
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What clips do you plan on releasing?
 
WEBSTER:
Webster:
The beginning, the window scene, Sylia's suicide, and end screen. That's it.
 
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Do you personally know Alyssa Church?
 
WEBSTER:
Webster:
No I do not. I don't even know how she found my address.
 
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Do you know Sheldon French?
 
WEBSTER:
Webster:
Yeah, he lives down the street from me.
 
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So, do you think that Alyssa made the film in Sheldon's house and later placed it on your doorstep?
 
WEBSTER:
Webster:
That doesn't sound impossible.
 
 
The second interview was with Mr. French.
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Alyssa pulls out a gun and kills herself.
 
{{*}}BOOM*
 
Investigator runs back into the room.
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He's dead too. I have a photo of him taken from that twisted VHS tape Alyssa made.
 
{{*}}Dad looks at the picture*
 
DAD:
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INVESTIGATOR:
I'm sorry sir, but I can't really show you her’sher's. I don't have the backup disk on hand right now.
 
DAD:
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It makes videos like suicidemouse look like sunshine and kittens, and THAT'S saying something.
Anyway, this has been Ryan Conley. Be safe, everyone.
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