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He then ran away at an alarming pace. I decided not to follow him and let him take time off. Once I got back home, I opened the attic and inserted the tape into the VHS player. I was very excited.
 
The show started off normally, but there were a few alterations. The person in the Air Element card wasn't shown, and Aang's clothes were inverted. KataraMomo was absent as well, and the title played at a lower-than-normal pitch. I figured it was just a glitch and I didn't need to worry. I was completely wrong.
 
After the theme, the title showed. The episode was, "The Avatar's Torment." It didn't appear to be read by Iroh, instead was read by someone similar to Sozin. That was weird. Suddenly, the card flashed black and white. When it was black, the text was different instead saying "eW91IHNob3VsZCBoYXZlIGxpc3RlbmVk."
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I took out my Revolver and shot the TV 6 out of 6 times. Then I heard a voice behind me saying, "You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?" I looked around and screamed so hard that I went mute for 6.66 seconds. It. Was. Zalgo. With a bunch of meat creatures. He ordered them to devour me alive. The meat creatures all got onto me. I tried to fight them off, but I was a weak and puny creature so I couldn't defend myself. I felt nothing but pure pain as they ripped into my flesh. I screamed extremely loud, all while Zalgo was laughing. He then told me, "your family is next!" Oh no, not my dear Mom and Dad! I had to stop them, no matter how much pain I was in. I chased after zalgo but he teleported and escaped leaving me to fight the meat creatures. I ran with my revolver to get more ammunition. Bingo! I found some in the kitchen. As the meat creatures crowded up, I shot them all and easily escaped (there were 5). I ran to my parents' house, which was 2 blocks from mine. Suddenly, I got a text message from anonymous. IT showed me a picture. I opened it up and to my horror, it was...my parents. hanging.
 
I ran to my parents' house which is convieniently two blocks away. After tiring out 90 times, i made it. I opened the front door and saw...my parents. Hanging.
I took out my Revolver and shot the TV 6 out of 6 times. Then I heard a voice behind me saying, "You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?" I looked around and screamed so hard that I went mute for 6.66 seconds. It. Was. Zalgo. With a bunch of meat creatures. He ordered them to devour me alive. The meat creatures all got onto me. I tried to fight them off, but I was a weak and puny creature so I couldn't defend myself. I felt nothing but pure pain as they ripped into my flesh. I screamed extremely loud, all while Zalgo was laughing. He then told me, "your family is next!" Oh no, not my dear Mom and Dad! I had to stop them, no matter how much pain I was in. I chased after zalgo but he teleported and escaped leaving me to fight the meat creatures. I ran with my revolver to get more ammunition. Bingo! I found some in the kitchen. As the meat creatures crowded up, I shot them all and easily escaped (there were 5). I ran to my parents' house, which was 2 blocks from mine. Suddenly, I got a text message from anonymous. IT showed me a picture. I opened it up and to my horror, it was...my parents. hanging.
 
I cried softly and stomped my food onto the ground, super upset that my parents were gone. I kept running to my parents' house, finding Zalgo chomping on their dead carcasses. He wasn't aware that I was near. I pulled out my revolver, fully loaded again. Right as I was about to shoot him, he turned around and said "HANG FOOL!" 6 times. He suddenly lunged at me, and I dodged easily. I felt a newfound power inside of me. Was it the dead souls of the tv? I don't know. But I suddenly became more powerful. I rush attacked Zalgo, who tried to fend me off with his magic. He then pulled out a knife and slashed me with it. However, It wasn't powerful enough to stop me. I thought if I needed to defeat Zalgo, I would need his archenemy: Lettuce the Salad Musician. I took out my flute which was in my pocket the whole time and played a tune. Suddenly the Salad Appeared and said "the fog will get you, if you do not use his one raichu. I then pulled out a GameBoy from Zalgo's pocket. He screamed hyperrealistically and vomit at me. I opened his pokemon: leafgreen, and saw the Raichu. I asked it to go into the real world and it did. It saw Zalgo, who changed from an angry expression to a scared one. Raichu grinned evilly in hyperrealistic way. Zalgo tried teleporting but didn't work on Raichu. Raichu then used Thunderbolt, killing Zalgo forever.
 
They both looked badly burned and cut everywhere, it was so gross I couldn't even recognize them. Suddenly I heard a voice from behind, saying "Join THEM!" I started feeling woozy and got knocked out.
It's over.
 
 
Suddenly, i saw myself in the avatar world. I tried to move but I was chained. Aang and his friends stared down at me smiling evilly. Oh no, what were they going to do? I thought. Then I saw a cannon and surprisingly, Caillou behind it! Caillou isn't even from Nickelodeoan. He then said, "YOU'RE GROUNDED GROUNDED GROUNDED FOR LIFE!" It was so loud my ears exploded. He then told the Avatar "I'm ready!"
 
Aang told him, "Fire brother!" Evilly and hyperrealistically. For 66.6 seconds he fired cannonballs at me, burning me super horrible and turning me into a human spongebob. Then Evil Patrixxx appeared and said some japanese crap and started spinning like a ninja star. I tried to escape but was bound tightly. I felt him cutting through my bones as I screamed loudly in pain. Then I died forever and was sent to Heaven. Luckily, they have internet here which is how I wrote this Spooky Spaghetti. So in short, don't watch this tape and in short-short form, you're not going to heaven.
 
Fast forward to a year later. I have no job, homeless, my wife left me, my balls hurt, and everyone hates me forever. I never should have watched that tape. Don't end up like me, please. Don't watch the tape, for your own good. Or else you will end up like me.
 
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