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Our story begins with the Jones family moving into their new house. “Mom. Why are we doing this?" Travis complained as they drove to the place. “It’s a fresh start,” his mother , Gabriela, reassured him, glancing at Travis in the mirror with a small smile. He slumped in his car seat. “I bet it’ll be fun,” Becky smiled. “Shut it, Becky.” Travis snapped. “Watch it,” His dad, Joshua, warned. Becky smirked at Travis, knowing she had won.
As Travis was five years old, he has physical weakness, Travis’ heart condition can lead to many drastic consequences on his health. The symptoms include:
 
And then as they finally pulled into the driveway, Becky was super thrilled to be here. Travis was the exact opposite. "Hey kids, you’re gonna be roommates!" Joshua said, hoping for a good reaction, “Wha.. seriously? This is stupid!" Travis yelled at him. Joshua glared at him “Then you can live in the basement.” Joshua said firmly. Travis bursts into tears and runs to his room."Wait! Ugh He’s so sensitive and stupid…” he muttered.
Shortness of breath, especially with exertion
Fatigue
Heart palpitations or abnormal heart rhythms (arrhythmias)
A bluish discoloration of the lips and skin caused by low oxygen (cyanosis)
His Parents, Gabriela and Joshua had been working a lot to gain money for his treatment, and sometimes,
 
The next day Travis and Becky headed to their first day of school. When Travis and Becky walked to class. Travis's heart dropped to his stomach when the teacher asked them to introduce themselves. As Becky went first.
Becky had to watch him, this story begins as when Travis was eight,
 
When it was his turn, he was very paranoid he couldn't make out words. Then he had accidentally urinated in his pants. Everybody laughed at him.
“Travis, go down to the basement to play with your toys while Becky goes outside to play, we certainly don’t want you’re heart condition acting up,” his mother tells him as she puts her hands slightly onto her hips like so, Travis runs down and grabs his stuffed bear named Gregory, he cries onto it, “I wish i was like the other kids! I hate my condition!” he yells into his teddy, soon his father comes down, “Son! Stop making all this racket!” he scolds him firmly, and he straightens his mustache, “Sorry.. Papa.” Travis whispers a apology so quiet not even he could realize he even apologized,
 
“Silence! Come with me, Travis.." The teacher said. She took his hand, leading him to the bathrooms, and she cleaned him up.
Soon Becky comes down to tell Travis his dinner was ready, When Travis came, it was his favorite dish, Chicken soup, he slurped it so quickly in enjoyment, “Travian Jones! Quit slurping! It is horrible manners,” his mother scolded him, “Mama, may Natalie Bell come over for a sleepover?” Becky asked, so nicely her parents couldn’t even grasp the words no, “oh of course dear,” her father responded, “erm, could I join the sleepover too?” Travis asked nervously, he never does any exciting things,
 
"Travis, what's wrong?" "I.. I don't know. Alot of people just want me to suffer." He says "You have .. bruises on you." The teacher pointed out "I.. do- don't know.."
“Oh son.. That is a no, your heart condition..” his father trailed off, he clutched his right hand onto his hand to cover up his guiltiness to Travis, “Papa, i promise.. I promise ill be good,” he tried to change the answer, “Travis, a no is a no,” his mother told him firmly, “besides, they need their girl time,” his mother backed up the answer, “Fine, I'll just play with Gregory, you’ll all be jealous!” Travis pleaded, as he left the table and went to the basement, (his room) and grabbed his teddy bear Gregory and tried making a pillow fort with his only blanket he had and a few pillows and his emergency pillow her his conditions, his parents were certainly the over-protective type, and he tried to wipe his tears, “don’t worry Gregory, we’re having so much fun, Becky and her friend is probably not, heh..” He told Gregory,
 
At the cafeteria a kid walks towards Travis "Hey, I heard ya peed, haha!" He said "..s- shush!" Travis found his voice "Aww. The crybaby can talk!” He cackles. He makes Travis trip and fall. As Travis lands on his face he starts bleeding. Becky and one other girl with a black hoodie run in and help. "Stop being an idiot, Robbie!" Becky's friend yells at him. "Aw, come on, its funny, right, Natalie?~" Robbie nudges her with a wink. "Shut up, we're done, leave me alone!" "How about no?" Travis gets out of Becky's grip and runs in and punches Robbie unexpectedly. Blood
Soon the next week, Travis snuck into Becky’s room, and shook her from her sleep, “Travie? What are you doing out of the base- I mean your room?” Becky asked in shock, “I can’t sleep,” he said, “but.. Alright fine, let's go down to your room” she said,
 
"Oh, you wanna play?" He tells. He kicks Travis in the stomach and he falls to the ground. "TRAVIS!!" Becky runs in to help. Robbie grabs Natalie and tries to kiss her. Natalie knees him where thr sun dont shine and he screams in pain. Soon a Teacher comes in. "What has happened?" They demand. Another kid runs in "Teacher! The kid with brown hair and who peed in class today threatened Robbie with a k-knife!" They say quickly. “..Travis come with me.." They say sharply. "Thats not tru-" "Silence!" The Teacher cut Becky off and grabbed his arm and took him to her office. As Travis took a seat,
And they slept together,
 
"I’m going to have to inform your parents what you did now, Travis Hoison Jones." They say. Travis starts crying. "Why are you crying? You know you did something wrong. Stop being a crybaby.” Then Natalie ran in. “Teacher! Please listen-" "Natalie Jackson. Go back or ill call your Dad,” the teacher warned. She sweated and ran out, And Travis was expelled. The next day when Travis came to school The kid who convinced the teacher his fake crime walked towards him. "Hey crybaby. I heard you punched Robbie. Soo~" He gives Travis a punch to the face and he starts bleeding. Then Robbie runs in, he pins him to the wall and they beat the living crap out of Travis. They both leave him to die. Travis tries to get up, but blacks out.
9 years later
 
As Natalie finds him she rushes him to the nurses. He's got bruises everywhere. When the nurse takes off his shirt she sees a huge stitch on his stomach. "Oh my, That’s a huge scar.." The nurse says. They send him home. At the bus to go home as Travis sits at the end of the bus, to look perhaps cool like the boys. But unfortunately Kyleson runs over. He pushes Travis off of his seat, "Thats my seat, idiot!" Travis goes mad. He grabs a fork from under one of the dirty seats and pins Kyleson, gouging his eyeball out. Travis stabs into his eye, pulling out the fork and watching the blood stain the seat in front of him. Robbie screams, clutching his face. Travis laughs at him.
When Travis was now 17,
 
As Travis is in the corner staring at the floor, "Stay there, you troublemaker." Gabriela yelled at him. Travis emotionlessly stared deep off into the floor, Mom.." his voice raspy. "Can I-" She cuts him off As he drifts back to the corner he stared at it. "B.. blue.." He whispers..
And soon Becky was leaving to college and Travis would be alone, Travis loved Becky,
 
1 week later
And the day of her leaving, Travis was heartbroken
 
As he goes back to school,
Becky hugged Travis tight, and Travis with a red T-shirt with dark red stripes and dark blue jeans, “Becky, don't leave me here,” he begged out, “Travie, it’ll be okay,” she told him, “I told you to stop calling me that, heh,” he giggled, but he stopped as she grabbed her bags and officially left,
 
He goes to his locker and takes some stuff from it. Robbie runs desperately towards him and shirt-grabbed him. "Heya Travis. Long time no see~ I've g- gotten very disappointed without you.. haha.." He pulls out a pistol. "Wha!?" Travis screamed. Kyleson walks in. “Robbie, no! T-this is stupid! You’re gonna reallyget suspended"
Later that night, Travis was not fine, he literally was crying in the living room as he watched Elmo, his parents were arguing in the kitchen about how he would feel now, as Becky had just left to college, Travis couldn’t stand the arguing and Becky leaving, he then worked himself to a heart attack, he didn’t think this was him killing himself yet, until he started it, he started dying, he clutched his hands onto his chest, he regretted this immediately, then he collapsed to the ground, Soon his parents found him on the floor, they panicked to death, his mother was terrified, and his father declared he died, his father was losing his sanity, he foolishly thought of a idea, they’d hide him in the basement, he didn’t want anybody in the neighborhood to know about this, “Joshua, thats a-” and the father slapped her mouth shut before she finished, “I don't care, now you will be quiet about this or else, I’ll Kill you..” he said so insanely the mother couldn’t bring herself to talk back,
 
"Kyleson. I'm not gonna actually shoot i- I'm joking."
And soon, they all kept quiet, but in the morning, they dug a grave and put him in,
 
"Put the gun down, before you get suspended.." Kyleson urges. "Oh I know what I'm doing. You act like I'm an idiot but I am actually very ha-" But then Robbie actually pulls the trigger and shoots Travis. Travis lands on the floor. “What the hell Robbie!?" Kyleson screams, "OH SHOOT! SHOOT! WHAT DO I DO!? ILL GET SUSPENDED” Robbie asks, Kyleson backs away from him. But then Travis gets back up. Then he chokes Robbie and pinned him to the wall. Robbie screams. Travis punches him 45 times hard he coughs blood a little bit of gore. He kicks his kneecap and breaks it in 27 ways, for good measure, he grabs a pocketknife from Robbies pocket and stabs him. Kyleson tries to stop Travis but he kicks Kyleson in his jaw and his jaw gets dislocated. Then he elbowed Kyleson's stomach and he started to puke on the floor. He grabs the pocketknife and shoves it in Robbie's mouth. As Robbie is bleeding out. He throws the gun at his head and knocks Travis out, Then a teacher comes in and calls an ambulance,
But soon, Travis woke up buried alive, he scrambled the dirt and finally was free, he coughed some dirt out of his mouth, and he then left, and by the morning his parents saw he escaped, and soon, Travis had dyed his hair blonde, and he bought a apartment, his neighbor was Robert Allen, who made many complaints to him, Travis then lost his sanity, he was pure claustrophobic and lost it, he then went to Roberts house and attempted to kill him, but Robert grabbed his pistol, but Travis then Travis snaps Roberts legs, which now Robert couldn’t move, he snarled in agony and pain, Travis then grabbed a fork and stabbed his stomach and ripped the fork out and ripped all his organs out, he couldn’t bring himself to eat them, but he still touched them, the slimy organs with gushing blood in it, the sliced them open and the blood gushed out, the sweet blood smelled amazing to Travis, he put it up to his noe, he then shoves his hand in Roberts mouth and pulled out his whole entire spine, and Robert was almost just a disgusting skin suit, and Travis’s eyes were now bloodshot, and he sometimes cries blood, which he doesn't mind, he killed his first victim, and Travis Jones was no more, he had no more sanity, he now kills people and he loves the smell of blood, he loves it so so much,
 
As Travis gets up out his bed from the hospital. He has a hospital gown on. He checks out a conversation the doctors having with his and those bullies parents. “I'm sorry but Kyleson Heathers and Robbie Smith are dead. But Travis is stable."
Soon he realizes a small child who looked much like Robert came down, he looked like an eight year old carrying a teddy bear, “who.. Who are you..” he said, then he saw his dead father’s corpse, his eyes widened in fear, “Oh sweet child, It’s past your bedtime..” Travis had then grabbed the child’s neck and grabbed a knife, and he slices his chest and stomach in the middle, and throws the knife, he grabs his organs out in delight, he smelled them, the child was on the edge of death, and Travis grabbed his heart and yanked it out, and it was beating smaller and smaller, and it stopped, and the boy was dead, Travis left the corpse with the other, and he still kept the heart, it was lovely, “aw, don’t worry, your funeral will be fun, besides. You cant spell Funeral without Fun!” and Travis started giggling and he had then left,
 
As Travis had got into the car,
And before he kills you, he’ll tell you briefly, “It's past your bedtime..”
 
"What were you thinking Travis? You've murdered innocent kids."
 
Joshua says.
 
"But d- dad, they bu-"
 
"I don't wanna hear it!"
 
He snapped at him, as They had gotten home. Joshua grabbed Travis's arm and dragged him and walked to the basement door
 
"Wa- wait dad! No!!"
 
Joshua threw him in the small basement closet and locked it,
 
As Travis banged on the door. Nobody answered.
 
Three years later..
 
As then. As Travis ate some disgusting cheese on the floor
 
As then. The doorknob jiggled  
 
And the door opened.
 
Gabriela grabbed a gun and aimed it at Travis. Tears fled her face.
 
And she had shot him.
 
Joshua came to the scene and laughed.
 
"The murderer is now-"
 
Before Joshua finished
 
Travis had got up in the most unsettling way
 
He had ate Gabriela and Joshua.
 
As Becky watched the death upon her parents.
 
Her heart dropped to her stomach As Travis and Becky's eyes met.
 
"Hello big sister.."
 
He said raspy.
 
As Becky took a step back,
 
Then she ran to the kitchen.
 
She yanked the phone and dialed the police.
 
"Hello. My brother had um! Killed my par- parents."
 
{{*}}SNAP*
 
Travis had then Snapped thr cord in half.
 
Becky shrieks as he pins her down,
 
He shoves his hand in her stomach and ripped it out. Causing many organs to dislocate in various ways.
 
He rips out her spleen and stares at it.
 
"Y'know spleens are delicious."
 
He had then eaten her spleen.
 
He had then grabbed a knife and aimed it at her right eye,
 
As then she tried asking for mercy but her vocal cords were torn up.
 
He Stabbed her eye and as he released the knife. Her eyeball dangled from her eyesocket.
 
"Ahahahaha!"
 
Then he grabbed her leg
 
And her eyes widened has he started to pull.
 
And he ripps off her leg and blood drained out.
 
She was on the edge of death.
 
"Hehe.."
 
Then he grabs her remaining organs and munches on them.
 
As then she had died.
 
{{by|Coltonwastaken}}