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A few months later, he has gotten used to the negative comments about him, and getting hit or humiliated has been a normal event for him; he is completely immune to these things now. Who framed him in the first place? Why did the culprit do this? This doesn't matter anymore. Nothing matters anymore now.
 
"Hi! You there?" Helen receives a message from an unknown user on Facebook. "Who're you?" He replies. "I'm Tom, your classmate." Tom has never interacted with him before. This surprised him a bit. "What is it?" Helen says. "Um…Um... are you alright?" "It's none of your business." Helen concludes Tom's question. Tom types for a while before coming up with, "Listen, I know how u feel right now. You're in the same situation as I am. I really want to help u, but I can't…t... sorry." Afterwards, Tom and Helen text each other for a long time, and Helen feels much better after telling him all the pain and feelings he has been through. He can even joke around with Tom, often using " : )" to show his happiness. This is the first time he thinks he has made a friend.
 
It is a warm weather in the afternoon. "Come meet me on the roof after the first period in the afternoon. We need to talk, don't ask me y." texted Tom last night. Following his instructions, Helen meets Tom on the roof, waving his hand and walking towards him as he says "Hey Tom! What's up, friend?". "Um…Um... I have something to say…somethingsay...something important…important..." says Tom with a serious face. "Remember the watch thieving incident?" How could Helen forget about it? That was how he started suffering! Helen nods to show he remembers. "I was the culprit!" Tom looked down, scared to look into his eyes. "WHAT?!" Helen is shocked. "I stole Judy's watch and framed you as the culprit." "Why did you do this?" "With you as the new target of victim, my life is much better." Tom smirks. It's true however that, when everybody decides to bully Helen, they won't bother Tom anymore. He's just like an abandoned toy. For him that is totally perfect. As long as he keeps silent he will be able to live his school life safe and sound. He succeeded; the plan was outstandingly perfect.
 
Helen grabs the collar of his shirt, and, after pushing around a bit, they ended up near the edge of the roof. Tom slips and falls from the roof. Helen instantly grabs his hand, and tries to pull him back up, but Helen does not have that much strength to do so.
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Once again, Helen becomes the topic of discussion between students. Some people thinks Helen pushed Tom from the roof, but most of the others think that Tom committed suicide, and Helen failed saving him, because they saw him grabbing Tom's hand before he fell.
 
That night, Helen was in his room crying, shivering, and he cannot stop the guiltiness from is growing inside of him. He needs to calm down, and suddenly a thought flashed in his mind: "It's not my fault that Tom died. He deserves to die!" This makes him feel much better, and his guiltiness fades away too. Helen creepily smiles, "Tom has had his punishment…punishment... I suppose it's time for others to have theirs, isn't it?" His cries turn into laughter in the dark.
 
Helen's classmates decide to have a party on the day of Halloween, but it's not to celebrate Halloween, it's just to have their friends come together to party. Of course, Helen was not invited to the party. The night before the day of Halloween Judy and Maggie were texting each other on Facebook. Both of them live in the school dorm, and Judy's room is next to Maggie's.
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09:04 – Judy: he's probably working I guess
 
09:06 – Maggie: something weird is happening…Ihappening...I've been hearing footsteps coming from my door 4 a long time…Itime...I think someone's walking around the dorm
 
09:06 – Maggie: wait, I'll go check
 
(Using the hole on the door, Maggie saw something unusual…unusual...)
 
09:07 – Maggie: o my god!! there's a guy outside who's wearing a mask and a blue jacket, and he's holding a knife. and HES ALL BLOODY!!