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{{AN|Hi. I am a 12 year old 7th grade student who wrote this as an alternative assignment to get out of some other work (haha). So enjoy!}}
15-year-old Neil Burchard was coming home from working as a fry cook.
▲''It’s been a hard day.''
▲15-year-old Neil Burchard was coming home from working as a fry cook. He’d only been there a day, and he hated it already. His boss was strict, his co-workers were playing jokes on him and already, he’d burnt himself on the fry vat.
Walking home from his grueling job, he noticed something on the sidewalk about ten feet in front of him.
''Hey,
An old computer tower, double-bagged with clear garbage bags and marked
''What could be on here?''
Excited, he heaved it up with all his might and carried back to his house. When he entered the door, his mother looked at him funny.
Neil took the tower up to his room and hooked it up to an old monitor
''Wow! This computer is older than me! This is amazing!''
But the computer was being really strange. The
''Something is very wrong here.''
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There were three folders on the desktop. They all had no name. Each folder contained three video clips, none of them the same as the last. All of the video were of a baby in a stroller, but all had completely different premises.
Neil hooked the strange computer up to the internet and started to browse. On every site he went on, the same sentence would appear:
'''"You will be sorry that you found my machine"'''. This shocked him, wondering if he
The instant he closed out of the internet, his cell phone got a text message.
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Neil was getting scared. He looked around him. He thought he saw something in the mirror. He did a double take, saw nothing, and brushed it off as being his imagination.
He walked outside to clear his head. He decided he would walk to the spot where he found the tower. He found a note taped to the dumpster. It was dated
{{email|"Dear Linda Burchard,
A new soul has come into the world today. Baby Neil, how sweet. I am writing something in dedication of your little newborn.
Yours truly,
Michael Souther"}}
Neil now felt very scared. What would happen to him if he continued using the computer? Would somebody come and take him from his home and into the computer?
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Neil walked back to his house and saw the all three folders were open, his television was on and was playing clips of extremely devastating computer viruses in action, and his cell phone was going haywire, with over five hundred text messages. Knowing that texting was free on his plan, he read five of them. They all said:
I am the brainchild of Michael
The television switched to the screen of the computer. Slowly, the mouse pointer dragged itself around, and then the computer shut down.
He decided
The next day at work the thought of he computer started to take over his life. He drew a monitor on a
This was too much for him. He told his boss what was going on.
Neil went home and laid in bed, finally going to sleep.
He woke up to the computer screen glowing blood red. He pressed the power button on the computer. Nothing. He looked and everything was still unplugged. This was torture. He asked out loud,
It
Neil slammed the door in his face. He
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