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{{AN|This was my first creepypasta! Hopefully you enjoyed it. Please leave a comment what I should improve. Thanks for reading!!}}
My hands are trembling as I write this...Its all about that creature...that damned creature, which has now scarred me for life. It all started... when iI talked to that girl...Lucy. She always seemed so silent, so creepily silent. I thought she seemed lost, so I chose her as my science project partner. That was my first mistake. we were supposed to do a research on volcanoes, which was pretty easy. That day when I was going home, I went up to ask her about the project, but she said nothing. I asked for a number at which point she grabbed my phone, typed in her number on the phone and went off without a word. "Weird...'" I thought as I saved her number. I did some research on the volcanoes but I got bored. So, I texted her just to see if she had done any research. She texted back iI could her go to her house. I felt kinda creeped out, but since I had nothing to do, I went to her house. Her house was far away, so iI had to take a bus to get there. But that house wasn't normal. Nowhere near normal. The air was musty and humid. I saw her house in the distance, which sent a chill up my spine. My palms grew sweaty. The whole place seemed...grim. it was very unusual. My instincts kicked in. From my brain, iI wanted to go further, but from my heart, I wanted to go back home. But before my brain kicked in, I turned around and ran...longer...faster till the house was out of sight. I could hear my temples and my heart beating fast. I was exhausted and fatigued. I took a bus back home. The house wasn't too creepy, but what I saw creeped the shit outta me. I saw a pair of red eyes, with blood red pupils. The figure was hairy too, and one of its hands was missing. It was the devil itself. I know it saw me, when it stared at me with those red eyes. I know its coming for me. I can hear it rasping my windows. I can feel its presence. I was very overwhelming. My time will come soon and I know it...
 
 
 
 
This was my first creepypasta! Hopefully you enjoyed it. Please leave a comment what I should improve. Thanks for reading!!
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