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{{AN|This is a god-awful Pokepasta I wrote about a year ago. I am definitely ashamed of it. I have improved since then, so that's good. I guess.}}
 
I didn’t want this. Nobody did. Everything that happened, everyone who was destroyed…it was all his fault. I can still hear their ringing words…”YOUwords…"YOU LEFT US THERE TO ROT. IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT."
 
It was a chilly Saturday afternoon in February. Snow and slush coated the roads, streets, and lawns. I was stuck inside. Nothing to do. Mom and Father were on a trip to Vancouver for the next week or so. (They had left yesterday.) I was a teenager, so they thought I was responsible enough to stay home alone.
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Just as I was going to put the Ramen into the microwave (after doing everything to prepare it beforehand), I got a text on my smartphone from Max, my boyfriend.
 
"Hey, Lucy." is what it read.
 
"What’s up?" I texted back.
 
"I just wanted to let you know that you left your Pokémon Sun here."
 
"Oh, God. It’s been there for weeks, hasn’t it? And you’re now telling me? Sigh. I’m not allowed to leave the house unless for school, so can you bring it over?"
 
"Sure, babe."
 
Max arrived at my doorstep while I was enjoying my Ramen at my table.
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I opened it, and Max was standing there.
 
"Sorry for not telling you about your game for weeks. I had lost it under all of my junk in my room, and I just now found it," he said.
 
To be honest, his room really was messy. A pigsty, to say the least.
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I took a look at it. It looked a tiny bit beat up and tattered, but all in all, it looked pretty good.
 
"Thank you," I said and then hugged him, and gave him a kiss also.
 
"I’ll see you around," said Max.
 
"See you around," I said as he left.
 
I rushed upstairs to get my 3DS, and then went back downstairs. It had been so long since I had gotten to play Pokémon Sun, I had nearly forgotten what I wasd oing or where I even was.
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The
creature that came before me was unlike any other one that I had encountered in
any game. It seemed to have no face, no limbs, not even a noticeable torso. It was all colorful, static-like glitch blocks. Its name was an absolute mess. "üÓ¥‐‼a4M?" is what it read. I don’t have the foggiest idea how to pronounce it, so let’s just call it ‘Glitch’ for now.
 
Glitch’s cry seemed to be a slowed-down version of a Lunala’s cry (my cousin had traded me his once for a Bewear. He said that he needed to trade with an NPC for a Talonflame, and I let him. From then, I knew what a Lunala’s crysounded like). It was level one and had no gender.
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Unsure of what exactly I could do, I had Dusky use Fury Swipes. It didn’t do much damage to Glitch, despite it being at level one.
 
"üÓ¥‐‼a4M? Used Night Shade!"
 
Night Shade did a reasonable amount of damage to Dusky. She only had a sliver of health left. How? That…that…''thing'' was only at level one.
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sighed and chose Dusky’s next attack.
 
"Dusky used Power Gem!"
 
Still, barely any damage.
 
"üÓ¥‐‼a4M? (Glitch) Used Moongeist Beam!"
 
‘Moongeist Beam’? That was a new one.
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Dusky lost the rest of her health from that attack. She fainted.
 
"Dusky has gone."
 
Afterward, I was given the option to either choose another Pokémon to fight or to flee the
battle. I tried to press ‘Flee’, but all that came up was a text box typing out slowly. "There is nowhere to run."
 
Wait, what? Didn’t it usually say something along the lines of: "You can’t escape!" or "Can’t escape!"?
 
Feeling a bit suspicious, I chose my next Pokémon to fight. Summer.
 
"Summer feels anxious…”anxious…" Is what the text box read.
 
I chose Summer’s attack. Petal Blizzard.
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The attack did nearly nothing.
 
"üÓ¥‐‼a4M? Used Hyper Beam!"
 
Hyper Beam took out Summer in one shot.
 
"Summer has gone."
 
I pressed the flee button over and over, but the same message kept popping up.
 
"There is nowhere to run."
 
Next was Jangles. Despite her being one of the strongest Pokémon I had, she fell to Dream Eater.
 
"Jangles has gone."
 
Rocky fell to Night Shade.
 
"Rocky has gone."
 
Salazzle fell to Moongeist Beam.
 
"Salazzle has gone."
 
And Decidueye, the strongest one of all (hence him being at the highest level) fell to Hyper Beam.
 
"Decidueye has gone."
 
Withou a single word about my defeat against this glitch being typed out in a textbox,
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Hesitantly, I turned the power back on, but the area where the Pokémon Sun icon would be was empty and said: "There is nothing
inserted into the game card slot."
 
With that note, I closed my 3DS and took out the Pokémon Sun game cartridge. I noticed that there was a split running down the sides and across the top. As much as I just wanted to get rid of it, I wanted to open up the split. So, I did.