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{{Note|Original Spanish version [[wikia:es.creepypasta:Homicidal Liu|here]]. Originally written in May 2013.}}
 
It all started one night, the night that Jeffrey Woods completely mad and killed his parents and his beloved brother Liu Woods. Jeff stopped being the boy who was and became a soulless monster and pure desire to kill. But, really he had his brother Liu died after receiving multiple cuts and stab wounds?
 
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They spent days in that bed unable to move, unable to speak, only to hear the voice of that nurse. Susan was with me day and night, talking to me, telling me to resist, he wanted me alive, really wanted to meet and hoped to talk to me and hear my voice. A week passed and she came more often, came and sang to me, read me, but one day before being able to move my body, I whispered. "Now I want you to wake up" She kissed the finish that sentence and I began to feel my body, I managed to open my eyes and I could admire. She wept for joy when he saw me awake. "Hi Susan, I'm Liu Woods." She was stunned. "Really, you're ... brother Jeff Woods? He was here a while. It was really bad, I learned who went crazy and killed his family, How is it that you survived, Liu? I also knew that three days ago kidnapped a young and burned alive with bleach and gasoline, then escaped from there and has not been seen, but at home, or what remains of it, there are no more than 2 corpses. It is rumored that she survived, but did not know what happened to the corpse's brother Jeff.
 
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Some said it took him, but slept in the room where his brother is, where you slept, they found written in blood on the wall "go to sleep" and the bath written "smile" in the mirror. I very much regret the death of your parents, seriously, and, as I think you want to return to that place, would you want to sleep over at my house for a while? Well, when you get out of recovery, I live alone since my parents died in a car accident, so spare me a room. "
 
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While I bathed, I remembered every moment spent with my family, Mom, Dad, my childhood with Jeff, the pranks we did, everything we had together, the joy of having my family around, I began to mourn, but The sound of falling water drowned my sobs, so it did not matter.
 
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The first night was somewhat traumatic for me. In my nightmares I could see Jeff as it was before the accident being brutally murdered by the new Jeff, then I turned to look and say "Liu, why did you go to not sleep as I asked you?" I woke up with a terrible fright Susan faith ran to my room, I said, "What happened Liu? Are you okay? "I replied" If ... it was just a nightmare, do not worry. "
 
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The next day, upon awakening, I felt a scent that has long not enjoyed, it was the smell of hot-cakes freshly made, I went to the dining room and there was Susan, preparing breakfast, as Mom did, he gave me good morning he sat down and started eating
 
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An hour passed in which we talked, in which he said all he had to say, did not want to lose it, do not want to lose the only person left me in this world. The doctor came in and said "We need to operate Mr. Woods will recover." She was taken to the operating room, were three hours that seemed eternal, I wanted to gouge my eyes out of despair, but hope that Susan survived was what I still standing. Term operation, the doctor who took care of everything said "The operation was a success, it is stable, awake and morning two weeks will leave the hospital." Those words touched me so much, I felt so peaceful to know that Susan would be fine.
 
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I was in his room all day waiting for him to wake, woke up and said "Who are you and where my parents are?" Those words filled me with sadness, Susan had forgotten me, but I had to do to remind me when recovered, the ride to the hospital where we first met, he said, "Are you, Liu? As you've changed. "She began to remember, take it to my old home, and remembered what we were there, I kept taking it to all significant places for us during the week, until we got to the restaurant that I proposed, she remembered everything, he hugged me and said "Liu, now I remember everything, thanks for being with me until he regained it." And I said, "You did the same for me, I owe much Susan." I kissed her, but when we parted, he began to convulse, scared me a lot and take her to the hospital, back in the hospital, not hate go on, but I loved her.
 
I do not leave her alone when she needed me, I stayed there to wait for news from the doctor, and he said "I'm sorry sir, but your girlfriend is dead." That phrase filled me with sadness and hatred, take the doctor and neck Trone because there was no reason to hold back, I began to kill everyone in the hospital, men, women, children and sick, I killed them all, he could not bear them to live and my Susan no, she could not die and would not let that happened, but it was inevitable, my clothes were full of blood of innocent people, my hands were full of blood and my eyes had changed, so I decided to do something, I went for a knife and started to cut a heart in my chest, the initials of Susan and her time of death, our anniversary and the date when we met, then went for a needle and thread and I sewed the edges of my lips into a smile for anyone to see and suffer inside When I finished, I went home, took my leather clothes and things that used to kill, and left there, never to return, now, I live killing all people to be happy, but when I die, I can not see her, but kill me comfort, if you see me, run and do not show your happiness, or you will die a very vicious and twisted way, they can not tell your body what it was before meeting me, Homicidal Liu, the survivor Jeff The Killer.
 
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