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Me: Ok may you tell me what IT looks like?
 
Mother: Ok im not very comfortable saying it but, it was VERY tall around 7 feet. It was wearing a black sleek suit with a long red tie. There was nothing else very strange about this thing except…except... *she pauses*
 
Me: Go on,
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Me: Mam its ok it hasn't harmed you you will be all right, now has any physical contact with it happened?
 
Mother: Yes, I was outside of the house with Dale, my husband. As I was talking to Dale I noticed my head start to feel light-headed? My mind was fogged of saying anything! I…I…II...I...I then remember that same thing touch my arm with one of its white tentacles. It felt as if it was burning my skin! But that's not what bugs me.
 
Me: May you tell me?
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Me: im guessing this is what you saw.
 
Mother: Y…ya…Y...ya... YES!
 
Me: Don't worry mam im going to find this thing and kill it! You don't have to worry no more ok.
 
Mother: That's the problem Jake HE WONT DIE! You think you can kill him BUT YOU CANT. You don't know the strength of it YOU JUST DON'T! don't waste your time on this! I'm just so afraid, if…if... if.. If it gets the kids!
 
Me: As I said mam no matter what I am going to find it and kill it. Now tomorrow if you see anything in the woods around you CONTACT ME. But tomorrow I will be starting my investigation. So don't call if you don't see anything unnatural ok?
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That was the last I had ever heard of her that day. By the sounds of it the woman may have been suffering from some hallucinations or maybe what she is saying IS real. Whatever happens im getting to the bottom of this.
 
Report 2: Its been a day since I last saw the Colling family. This morning I was looking in the papers while having a nice warm cup of coffee. Until I stopped upon a picture of a man. The man must have been around his mid 40s. He had short black hair and a smug face. The thing that had really shocked me was his name. DALE COLLINS. That was Jane's husband! I read on to find what he was responsible for. The paper read…read... found yesterday at 9:35 in a house in Maple woods were 3 family members murdered. The only man still alive was there husband. Dale Collins, if you see this man please contact crime stoppers or 911. I think I know what had happened at the Collins house hold. I believe that Dale had saw the Slender-Man and had gone insane when he had saw it. He had picked up some weapon and murdered the kids in an effort to kill the Slender-Man. But as I read it seems as if he had failed. I guess im going to have to cancel the woods investigation, im going to the crime scene at the Collin household.
 
Report 3: I was just at the Collin household and what I have found is shocking. When I went to examine the bodies of the 2 kids they (just like their mother) Had bubbled burns across their faces and arms and chest! I don't think any weapon that was concealed in the house would be able to do that much damage. I cant jump to any conclusions though. A blowtorch or a fire could have done the same amount of damage. Surprisingly the burns weren't the most shocking thing. When I had left the house I had noticed my eyes start to feel heavy, my mind fogged and clouded. And then I had saw a long, pale faceless man! I may have been having shock from the killing, but what I saw had matched the description that Jane had exclaimed. Unfortunately I have to book the investigation to attend the Collins funeral. I will do a report after the funeral IF I see anything suspicious. Which I probably will.