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was another boy who shared the same fate.)
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ready herself. He fought himself to get up. He picked out a black shirt and
pair of rugged pants and walked down stairs. He saw his mother and father all
dressed up; his mother in a dress and his father in a suit. He thought
they would ever wear such fancy clothes to a kid's party?
"Son, is that all
Michael's mom.
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The kid looked at him with that weird puppydog face.
"Pwease?" said the kid. Michael sighs "Fine.
He put on the hat and started to pretend shoot at the kids. At first he thought
it was totally ridiculous, but then he started to actually have fun. It might
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Michael screamed and fell to his knees. Donavan started
kicking him in the face. After three kicks Michael loses it. Michael grabs
foot and twists it, causing Donavan to fall to the ground. Jeff stood up and
walked towards the back door. Troy grabbed him.
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"Come on Michael, fight me!" He picks Michael up
and throws him into the kitchen. Donavan sees a bottle of vodka on the counter
and smashes it on top of
"Fight!" He throws Michael back into the living
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as he runs at Michael. That's when it happens. Something inside Michael snaps.
His psyche is destroyed, all rational thinking is gone, all he can do, is kill.
He smiles
He gets on top of him and punches him straight in the heart. The punch causes Donavan's
heart to stop. As Donavan gasps for breath. Michael hammers down on him. Punch
after punch, blood gushes from Donavan's body, until he takes one final breath,
and dies.
Everyone is looking at Michael now. The parents, the crying
kids, even John and Kevin. Although they easily break from their gaze and point
their guns at Michael. Michael see's the guns trained on him and runs for the
stairs.
him, each shot missing. Michael runs up the stairs. He hears John and Kevin
follow up behind. As they let out their final rounds of bullets Michael ducks
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himself
was fighting Donavan something in his mind, his sanity, snapped. Now he was
left as a crazy killing machine, that is, his parents didn't know.
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"Michael, what are you doing?" asked his mother.
Michael looked over to his mother.
he said
"I wanted to fix
my face.
now live forever.
one of his eyes was missing.
"Michael, your eye!" His left eye was removed.
"I
as if it would matter." Michael's mother slowly started to back away,
seeing that her son was going insane. "What's wrong mother? Aren't I
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"Shhhhhhh," Nightmare said. "Just wake up."
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