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"Do you wanna play a game? , it's easy just run before I get you, I'll be fair and give you 3 seconds start running" he step back a little giving me space to run yet fear hold me against my bed.
 
"One……One.two……three......two......three, ready or not it's time to die! Hahahaha" he returned the sight to me surprised that I didn't move an inch from where I was.   
 
I only stared at him tears began to come outof me and eventually I let out a big scream, my only hope to call the attention of my parents, but he putted his hand over my mouth shutting me up.
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"Hold on there is no need for all of us to get drastic; can't we just let this problem pass?" Said Steve getting in middle of them so he could make them stop, speaking to Jack.
 
"Let me think that…that..." He grabbed and threw Steve to the ground "I would say no" Jack tried to kick him in the guts and make him lose all his air, but instead Connor tackled him to the ground and help Steve out. Jack rose, tried to kick them but they hold his leg making him fall again they tried to run but Jack grabbed Connor, Steve returned and hit him with his elbow in his nose, letting Connor go and making a run for it.
 
"You prick!" Said Jack "YOU ALL BETTER RUN! And beg that I don't see you again, will kill you, I WILL FUCKING KILL YOU!" He cursed while Steve, Connor, and Janice ran.
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Steve wakes up in a hospital room, and in front of him was Janice, his mother and a police officer, he wasn't in full control he only saw their faces and noticed that something was wrong. The officer came close to him, took a deep breath looking to Janice then to me. "I'm really sorry for your friend", Steve had tears running through his face, Janice only stood quietly beside Steve.
 
"How…did…he…How...did...he..." Steve recovering his voice, looked at everyone in the room, he was filled with sorrow, and fury, thinking only of what Jack did right in front of his eyes.
 
"He died…died... when we arrived at the hospital, the doctors tried to do everything for him but they couldn't save him" she went up in tears and placed her head in the bed, the officer and Steve's mother were talking outside the room.
 
At noon they returned to their neighborhood, Janice and Steve only sat at the park bench, in silence, feeling very lonely, Janice only saw Steve devastated with the news and saw that he was in somewhat angry way, she hugs him to make him feel better.
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"What the fuck is he talking about?" one of the other teens walked towards him, holding his bottle hard.
 
"All of this is just a game for you, hehehe…hehehe... hahahaha, well then I have to enjoy every single moment" he suddenly stabbed him through the chest cutting until he reached the throat. "Do you wanna play a game?"
 
Everybody ran away except for Jack and the other two, they stood there in shock, Steve only laughed at the corpse, slowly he started becoming insane.
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"Don't worry this is just a game, you should thank me, you'll soon meet your friends" dived the knife in his lips making a of a smile, he took his mask away, and with the blood spilled in it he made a smile, he started felling calm, and full of adrenaline, he started to laugh like a maniac, he found murder a fun thing to do than just for revenge. He started getting his head flooded with these thoughts.
 
Suddenly he remembered the photo and the note that were on his pockets, he pulled them out and snapped out of his instant madness, he heard the sirens getting closer and he ran away from the place back to his neighborhood. "I can't let…let... madness…madness... control me ... not yet" repeated Steve before killing the one person left he cares for.
 
On the next morning there was news of the murder of four teenagers Janice recognized one of them, he killed his bigger brother and now he was dead with a great scar that looks like a smile in his face, she walked out of the house and found a note on the door she read it and she entered in shock after what she had just read.