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Revision as of 19:55, 17 May 2022 (view source) TrollpastaBot (talk \| contribs) (Created page with "{{NSFW}} It was a quiet day in Ponyville. Everypony was relaxing and enjoying the nice weather. The Pegasus ponies had cleared every single cloud in the sky, the young fillies were playing in the streets, and the mares were strolling along through the park. Everypony was taking the day off. There was one pony, though, diligently working. It was Rarity, who had spent the entire day in her shop, the Carousel Boutique. Nopony really noticed where she was. The issue hadn't...")		Latest revision as of 08:55, 30 August 2023 (view source) TrollpastaBot (talk \| contribs) m (→‎top: replaced: … → ... (10))
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Line 9: "Fluttershy, I have a lot of work to do. I have to make a new unique dress by the end of the day, and I can't have anypony bothering me." Fluttershy responded awkwardly. "Okay ~~Rarity…~~Rarity... I'm ~~sorry…~~sorry... I'll let you go ~~ba…~~ba... Get back to your work." Fluttershy started to leave the shop when suddenly Rarity stopped her. "Fluttershy, I have an idea. Maybe you can help me with my dresses," she said in a menacing tone. Fluttershy responded. Line 19: "So you want me to find somepony that will model your dresses?" Fluttershy said. "Yes, bring ~~me…~~me... Applejack! She'll make a model." Fluttershy responded "Okay, I'll go get Applejack. I'll get her over here as soon as I can." Line 45: "JUST DO IT!" Rarity barked angrily. "Oh, ~~Okay…~~Okay... ~~Okay…~~Okay... Sorry for asking." Fluttershy left the shop. Several hours later, Fluttershy brought Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Twilight to Rarity. Rarity had instructed them to do the same as Applejack. Each of them was told to head down stairs while Fluttershy waited outside. When Rarity finally came out of the basement she said "Fluttershy, my masterpiece is almost complete." "That's great! Do you need me to do anything else?" Line 53: "Whatever you say." Fluttershy responded. Rarity ushered Fluttershy down stairs and locked the door behind them. The basement was dark, and musty. It had an odd stench. It was unlike the rest of the shop. For a moment Fluttershy thought Rarity had left her until suddenly something struck her in the back of the head. Fluttershy woke up, her head hurt, and there was blood dripping down her mane. She found herself unable to move. "Just a bit tighter ~~and…~~and... Perfect!" "Rarity, what are you doing!" Line 79: Fluttershy gazed into the mirror. She saw what was left of her. Her legs were broken, hooves bleeding, she had no eye lids or wings, and her flank was completely removed. "Now what should I do with you?" suddenly Rarity said "IIDEEAA!" In excitement. "I can use the rest, with your fur, to make more beautiful dresses." Rarity then picked up the scalpel. She looked at the scalpel in disappointment. "Oh, this will take too ~~long…~~long... I need something sharper." Rarity looked around for a bigger knife but failed to find one. "Maybe I have one up stairs." She rushed up stairs leaving Fluttershy alone in the basement. Fluttershy was finally alone. Away from the psychopath that her friend had become. She could barely breath, she was losing blood fast, she started to cough up blood, and puke. Suddenly she heard something enter the shop from up stairs. "Twilight!" It yelled for. "Applejack! Pinkie Pie!" At this moment Fluttershy could recognize the voice as Spike. Fluttershy tried to think of a way to get his attention to the basement. The only thing Fluttershy could move was her head. So she tried to slam her head against the table her body was laid on. It forced more blood out of her, but it worked. Spike heard the noise from the basement and headed to the door. "Anypony?" He started to walk down stairs, and began to notice the gruesome events that have happened. He saw the four dead ponies in the tub, the poorly stitched together dress, and the barely alive Fluttershy on the table. Line 85: "Fluttershy?" He said in worry. "Who did this!" Spike removed the bloody cloth from Fluttershy's mouth. Fluttershy softly " ~~Rar…~~Rar... ~~Rar…~~Rar..." She puked again all over herself. "Who?" At that moment Rarity reentered the basement with her long rusty knife.