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Instead, he had just sat outside his home against the front door, letting out a quiet, unhappy sigh as he slumped down. To his left, he watched Patrick play with Gary without him.
 
"He'll get it eventually…eventually..." SpongeBob snapped angrily, as he watched the duo with an unnerving glare on his face. The screen transitioned through bubbles, snapping into the next scene. It shows SpongeBob, standing outside of Patrick's rock, before going up to it and lifting it open without even bothering to knock first.
 
There, under the rock, would be Patrick, having the sleepover with SpongeBob's pet without his buddy. It was just CRUEL. I was in complete and utter disappointment when I saw this part of the episode. SpongeBob looked right down at Patrick, before proceeding to jump down in front of his friend.
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SpongeBob, now in disbelief, asks Patrick why he hadn't done that 3 hours ago. I grew more and more confused about why SpongeBob was not acting like himself. He grew angrier, and angrier, but he still spoke in his usual voice.
 
"Patrick Star…theStar...the way you make me lose my patience is becoming quite the talent of yours…giveyours...give me…myme...my snail…rightsnail...right now…now..." SpongeBob snapped angrily at his defiant friend, as he stomped his foot on the sand, now becoming more and more furious with Patrick.
 
Patrick became more defiant, and tells SpongeBob that he wasn't giving Gary back to him. After he did, he continued to play with Gary, and ignored his friend. Which only made the scene worse, and I swear, I could hear SpongeBob growling in fury. I jumped in fear as I heard SpongeBob yell out Patrick's name at the top of his lungs, at full volume.
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In his eyes, the reflection of what Patrick saw, was a very angry SpongeBob, now with incorrectly colored irises, and his eyes were not light blue. They were what they used to be; they had now changed from light blue to crimson red.
 
"No…No..." Patrick whimpered. "NO! S-STAY AWAY FROM ME!" He sobbed.
 
SpongeBob just kept approaching his brain-dead friend, still with that furious expression on his face. He picked up Patrick with both hands, by the neck, while growling in an exasperated manner.
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SpongeBob snapped at Patrick, with a cold 78-word phrase. Patrick, still laying on his back against the wall, was still in tears, and he sobbed in a violent manner.
 
"T-Then…IThen...I-I don't think w-we can be f-friends anymore!" Patrick screamed out at SpongeBob, as he had turned miserable as miserable can ever possibly be. The two looked at each other, and for some odd reason, Gary was watching this whole time.
 
This episode was getting odder and odder by the minute. With SpongeBob out of character, and Patrick being a miserable punching bag, (though, he had deserved it in later seasons.) making it a very disturbing alternate episode.
 
As soon as Patrick told SpongeBob that he didn't want to be friends with him any longer, the screen now cuts back to SpongeBob's face, and what was heard is a loud snarl, presumably coming from him. The screen zoomed out, and what appeared in his right hand…washand...was a hammer.
 
He lunged out at the screen, striking at the camera, now in a first person point of view of Patrick Star. The screen immediately vanished to darkness, before reappearing into the interior of SpongeBob's pineapple house.
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SpongeBob proceeded to pull out the platinum scissors, then he lined it up between Patrick's large intestine, and small intestine. Once he did, with a firm snip, a red CGI liquid now sprayed out of the tubes of the two organs.
 
SpongeBob didn't feel guilty for what he had just done. He didn't say that he was sorry, nor did he worry about the life of Patrick. Instead, he just slowly bears a menacing tooth-filled smile, with hundreds, thousands…nothousands...no. More than that. He had millions of elongated teeth.
 
The only lines that Patrick had, which weren't really lines, were just his shrieks and sobs of agony. SpongeBob continued the surgery, as he used the scalpel to cut deeper into the depths of his used-to-be friend's flesh.
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Once he finished, he swallowed it all, and I heard it. A hard swallow, coming from the sea sponge. The camera would cut out of the first-person view of Patrick Star, with SpongeBob still standing in front of him. Visible tears were streaming down Patrick's eyes. He couldn't handle anymore pain and torture that SpongeBob was giving him.
 
"Alright, Patrick! Looks like it's time to conclude this!" SpongeBob said with a smile, as he pulls out an axe. Once he did, he would slowly approach Patrick, which took about a minute and 30 seconds or so for him to make his way over to his restrained friend was. When he finally got there, he held the axe back…andback...and with a swift swing, he slashed Patrick's head clean off of his torso, making it fly upwards to the ceiling, then it ricochets around the room. The camera, for a moment, cuts to Patrick's decapitated head. It was lying on the floor, with Patrick's tongue hanging out of his mouth, and his eyes still open.
 
The camera cuts back into shot with SpongeBob, with his back-turned. He slowly turned around, and then he faced the screen. And then…I…Ithen...I...I heard something. And it was coming from him.
 
"Your turn…turn..." He whispered. Upon whispering, the background color was now brightened up with a dark crimson color, before the screen vanished to a black void of nothing. Approximately 8 seconds later, it shows a few clips of a car crashing into a brick wall, a toy plane landing on the grass, a small child choking on the contents of some milk in a glass cup, a man getting blasted with a cannonball in slow motion, and someone shooting a chicken with a shotgun.
 
And what was heard in the background was no audio for the clips themselves, but except for the sound of a newborn baby crying. The screen then vanished once more, and something else faded on-screen. It was Patrick's head, in the same CGI style, hanging off of a hook with the tip being impaled through his mouth.
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Once that thing I wouldn't want to call SpongeBob blinked its eyes, the screen vanished to darkness, before returning to main selection screen.
 
I…II...I remained speechless. I said nothing. No words to ever enter my brain, and I felt worse when I remembered the entire episode itself.
 
I slowly got up from the bed, turned off the television, and I ejected the disc. Upon doing so, I put it back into the cartridge where it came from. When I closed it, I would pull out a sticky note from my jacket's pouch, then I pulled a sticky note off. I pulled out my pen, and I wrote a note to the next person who ever stays in Room C1.
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I put the cartridge back, and I placed it next to the television. Just so the next person who ever comes across this room finds this DVD and my note that I placed on it, knows to not play the disc.
 
In order to wrap this up, I have to say that it's been good talking to you. I hope you remember what I said, and please…Iplease...I hope you believe me, because this episode is real. If you ever happen to find a decent, heavenly looking inn, you'll know where this DVD came from. And who knows what might happen to this DVD? Who will be the next person to watch it? And…itAnd...it most likely won't be you.
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