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I got to the light and I entered a small town, I continued walking not seeing anybody on the streets. In the town was a hospital with 15 cars in the parking lot. I stumbled over and dropped to my knees in the parking lot and dozed off. I was floating.
 
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"Is he going to make it?" The nurse asked, expecting a bad answer
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"We need to stablize him! Get the morphine!" The surgeon yelled.
 
The room was pitch black, I could barely see my own hand waving in front of my face. There was a loud bump. I stood up and traveled towards the noise, it got louder and louder as I drew near. When I got to it, there was a mouse sitting there, just staring through me, like I wasn't there. I ignored him for now and continued on. There was a small door in the distance, I walked towards it.
 
The room was pitch black, I could barely see my own hand waving in front of my face. There was a loud bump. I stood up and traveled towards the noise, it got louder and louder as I drew near. When I got to it, there was a mouse sitting there, just staring through me, like I wasn't there. I ignored him for now and continued on. There was a small door in the distance, I walked towards it.
"Alright we have him calm now, what the hell happened?" asked one of the newbie doctors.
 
"He had a minor heart attack, or what we believe to be a heart attack. It could have been worse," replied a veteran doctor. He was experienced and was in charge of the operation. "He has multiple fragments of wood within his system, we need to remove them in order for a full recovery."
 
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"We can't operate on him, what if has one of those spasms again! He will kill himself!" a veteran doctor explained. "It would be homicidal!"
 
"What are we supposed to do then?? Why don't you tell me??" The Surgeon demanded.
 
"Just wait a little, if he goes a decent amount of time without another spasm, we will operate." They waited, the tensions grew tighter and tighter.
 
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"I'm sorry, I have failed you, almighty one," The Slender Man spoke.
 
"You were defeated by a mortal. Looks like I underestimated him." Zalgo spoke "Leave my sights, I shall have the Rake finish what you couldn't." The Slender Man walked off into the depths of Hell. The Rake walked over to Zalgo and bowed.
 
"You requested me, almighty one?" The Rake spoke.
 
"I want you to end this weak mortals life," Zalgo commanded in his deep voice
 
"As you wish, almighty one," The Rake sprinted away and entered the over-world.
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