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In haste, Rainbow Dash lowered herself down to level with the eyes of her girl friend, who was crying tears of blood now, with her eyes half shut. Rainbow began to cry viciously at the sight of FlutterShy being in such pain. She slightly lifted the head of her love and looked into her eyes.
 
"F-FlutterSh-Shy…Shy..." she managed to barely say through her tears.
 
"Shh…Shh..." FlutterShy comforted her, "One l-last kiss…kiss..."
 
Rainbow Dash lowered herself so that she was no lying in front of FlutterShy. Their lips met slowly, tongues touched as the exchanged saliva and were engaged in a magical kiss. For them it felt like an eternity, eyes shut as the memories of the past flashed before them. However, in reality this was only seven and a half seconds long, before two spikes had made their way through the air, being thrown by the creature as it is now apparent, and entered Rainbow Dash. One had punctured her thigh, through her cutie mark. The other, severing her lung and heart, exiting through her back as it was a curved spike.
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She collapsed to the ground, eyes wide open and pupils the size of small beans, as her body hit the rough surface of the hallway floor, making a 'thump' noise. She died. Flutter shy managed with her remaining strength to keep one eye open, as she extended her left frontal hoof to close the right eye of Rainbow Dash, placing it upon hey eyelid and pulling down; later, mimicking this action to her left eye.
 
"Th-thank you…you..." FlutterShy spoke on last time before resting her head upon Rainbow dashes and closing her eye slowly, entering an everlasting sleep. 'Rest' was her last thought before her body became cold, limp- ultimately dead. The two lovers may not be with each other forever.
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