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Written between the timespan of June 16, 2011 to April 23, 2014, this fanfiction has gained the status of being the My Immortal of Star Trek fanfictions. With that out of the way, here's the story.<br />(NOTE: '''Bold''' Indicates an Authors Note, and they appear a lot in this travesty.)<br />----<br />'A beutiful American teen appears on Voyager and all of the boys on the ship falls in love. She need to go back home.'<br />----
 
Written between the timespan of June 16, 2011 to April 23, 2014, this fanfiction has gained the status of being the [[My Immortal]] of Star Trek fanfictions. With that out of the way, here's the story.<br />(NOTE: '''Bold''' Indicates an Authors Note, and they appear a lot in this travesty.)<br />----<br />'A beutiful American teen appears on Voyager and all of the boys on the ship falls in love. She need to go back home.'<br />----
==CHAPTER 1==
'''HI EVERY 1! HERE IS MY NEWEST SRORY! IT IS ABOUT A SHOW I WATCH WHEN I WAS YOUBG CALLED STAR TREK! NJOYYYYY!<br />xxx'''<br />There once was a girl who lived in ohio and she did not like it very much so she layed on her bed and roled around in her realy cute little abercrobie ad fitch poli sirt, and wished so much that she could be some where else sence there is only so many day you can spend at 7 11 drink slurpees and eting twizzlers.<br />Then on tv i could see the picture of a shuttel and then i sudeny felt a spinning like i had not drank water much.<br />"OH MY GOD I AM PASING OUT" I yell as I pssed out.<br />33333<br />'RED ALERT!"<br />i can here clacksons playing loudly. It sounds like a sieren; it reminds me of a police or firetruck sieren.<br />"who is this insuferable interuder?" a loud voice says noisely.<br />"OMG," I muttering "where am I, Britney is that u?"<br />but it isnotmy sittster and now when I open my eyes i can see bright red lites flashing in my eyes and a man in a tight out fit leaning over me. he hasa tattoo. he looks mad.<br />"Um hi where am i."<br />"you are on a space ship," someone else who is orental chinese looking says to me "in space."<br />"OMG no!" i say "I was just at 7 11 buying red vines and slurpees how can this be? is this a trick? britney is this a trick? did i fall and bang my head again?"<br />'we are very far from earth you must be an alien" tatoo man says "ensign kim and tuvock can you breng her to the docter down in the turno lifet."<br />so we go in a elevator. it is me and a black guy with ponty ears and the chinese guy who i guessed was ensign kim cuz that's an oriental name.<br />"are you human?" tuvock ask me<br />"um obviously" I reply and role my eyes. REALLY what a dubm question.<br />"i am not human" he says "you are on a space ship and there are many aliens here who are not humans for instence i am avulcan we arepeople with pinty ears and we are super logical"<br />kim shruged at me as tuvock kept talking about aliens butsence i awas pretty sure i was dreaming i did not pay much atention.<br />but then the elevator stops and i get out. we are at a hallway. then we walk down it. we turn left. then we wallk down another hallway. we then walk down another hallway and to a door. then the door opened without us touching it the doors at walmart or grocery store.<br />In front of me wasa very ugly old guy with abald head.<br />'hello missy i am the doctor but i am actualy just a hologram but i will be looking after you today and figuering out what species you are and how you got on our bredge."<br />"I am human oviously!" I shout and stamp my foot "And i am not missy my name is shaundrah aliesse jayde deloreann! i am from ohio and once i wake up i will be back thereand this will all be a bad dream."<br />"i am sory shaundrah butit isnot a bad dream. obviously. it is logical" tuckock said.<br />"Noooo!" i cried because i did not believe it.<br />333333333<br />So after a wile I learnd that the futuer was not nerely as bad as i had asumed.<br />You see i was sort of thinking that it was a dream cuz mabey I had watch too much tv show about sify. So i injoyed it think that i would go home soon.<br />so first i went to the replicater and i order some lickorish. i got red vines. then i order some pepsi slurpee and also some panda express crab rain goons.<br />it was pretty cool and i sat there in neelicks kitchen place eting it while harry sit beside me he was becomming a good freind as he diddnt have any freinds ecxept for tom paris and belana toris. But then they have baby so how can harry hang out with them cuz his best freind is a baby daddy?<br />So ya we hung out like that. I was not hanging out with boy often at home becuz i am CHRISTAIN but we talked about good stuff like how we both reads elsie dinsmore and left behind books and think they are super cool.<br />And then one day I see a guy who is like my age siting across the room with 7 of 9. and he was kinda cute so i say to harry "whose that"? and he says back "oh that is noboedy it is eechib and we dont care about him cuz he is so wired"<br />so i tink that peeple that are out casts are interest so i vow to myself that i will speak to him. and i finished the lickorish.<br />at that moment captin jane way comes in "oh my gosh shaundrah it is an emergedcy! we need help right away and you are the only 1 ho can do it!"<br />i look at her and wonder WHAT COULD IT BE?<br />3333$33<br />'''DUNDUNDUN so next chapie will be up soon, I post this also on gaia website to get criticals for improve.'''
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Nomi wideman and me sat in her apartment. She was big now so she got her own apartment. We sat there and chewed gum and read a couple of future Seventeen magazines.<br />"So um what do u tink of HARY?" she asked me as she pooped a bubble.<br />I craked a even bigger bubble. "Um he is super nice. Why?"<br />"ya i think he realy likes u, cuz you're pretty and modist, you are so thin but still so curvey."<br />"Aw ur the best sweetz," I replyed. "But u are so awsom too, look at ur fabulous hare!"<br />"Well I tink Hary likes u and also Echeb."<br />"OMG... um... are you intrested in them?"<br />"WUT ME?" Nomi said "NO WAY HOSAY. I am only ment for one guy and that is Q Junoir, once he gets 19 and gets a job were gonna get maried."<br />"Oh ok."<br />Then there was a big CRASH and the ship shook. I wnated to be in the fight mabey fixing stuff in endginearing, or maybe going to the bredge and helping but i told hary i would stay in nomi's apartment so i keep my premeses!<br />then nomi's cream soda fell on her lap.<br />"oh no!" she said "i will brb just gonna run and take a shower to get this sticky stuff off my pants!"<br />so she went in the shower<br />but then while she was in the shower the lights all went off... it was totaly scrray...!<br />then there was a hideous green lite that appeared in the corner of hte room... it was... A BROG!<br />i scremed but nobody cold hear me over the big shower noise<br />"hello shaundrah it is i the borg queen" the bog said but it was in ny head, not in my ears "thou are especally important to the bog, for thou can help us..."<br />"no i will not help u!" i replyed<br />"yes u must... u must, shaundrah or we will asemblate harry kim!"<br />"no not hary he is my best frend on voyager!" i cryed<br />"thou frend wilt be asimbilated... unless u kill icheb and bring us back his body"<br />"nooooo!" i scremed "i could never do that"<br />"thine can make thou choice either icheb or harry but if we kill harry we will also asibilate the whole of voyager."<br />the bog queen came close to me and there was a black thig in her hand and then she dropped it on the bed... and then she vanished into a ball of green lite!<br />Then the lites came back on and I could see and i saw that the bog queen had left a black bottle on the bed! i knew from looking tat it was filled with POISION!<br />-<br />'''BTW this is based on a real thing that hapend in my life one time there was a crean soba on my frends coffee tabel then it fell in her lap and she had to showr'''
==CHAPTER 6 'Chapter 6  7 of 8s revenge!':==
'''SO ALL U MEN PEEPZ WHO were criticcalizing myspelling, mabey you should focus on the storey on and btw i got a lerning dinstability SO THERE, NEHOW I have done some spell better in this cpater. '''<br />"OMG!" I shooted!<br />naiomi walked out and rubed herself with the towel to make her hare dry.<br />"UM RU ok, Shaunda?"<br />"Yaaa..." I lide. "I just um droped sometimg on my foot."<br />"Because u were statled by the brogs?" Naiomi asked.<br />"Um ya..."<br />I stufed the posion into my pockett and smiled at Naiomi. She smiled back and started to read a magazine about bride stuff while sitting on her bed. I pretended to read a copy of Teen Cosmo but I could not concintrate even though the artical was cool about how to draw your fave logos on your fingernails with nail pollish.<br />Finally the red alirt was ended. We went out. Then Captin Janeway was there. She reach for my shoulder and looked really sad.<br />"Um wut?" I ask her.<br />"um i got some bad news Shaundrah... it is... Harry Kim... he is..." Captain gasped sadly. "Partly asembilated. it was 7 of 8. She went crazy and tried to asembilate Hary when the brog cub was near by."<br />I screamed. "NOOOOOOOOOO!" I screamed.<br />Finally the red alirt was ended. We went out.<br />Captan Janeway wipe tear from her eyes. "He is in the doctors hospitel. The doctor has frozen him in a tube just like Spok in that movie. It is keeping him from getting totally borgiefied."<br />Naomi held my hand and pointed an angryfinger at Janeway. "What a bout that bitch 8 of 9? Whats bein done to her for trying to murder Harry? She is evil like must be compelled by SATAN or sth."<br />I nodded though i kind of thought naiomi could tone down the BAD language i agreed with her stentiments.<br />"I dont know, I'm sorry ladies." janeway shrugged. "I could not stop her, I panicked. She has run away and hidden. perhaps... perhaps you can find her Shaundrah, with your 20th century ways of doing things."<br />I noded. For the honor of Harry I would track her down and find out why she had gone totally crazy
==<br />CHAPTER 7. 'Chapter 7: THE RETURN OF 7':==
'''I hope u liked the last chapie! This one is edited by my cosine, AMy since my paino teacher is away in Flordia visiting her granny. She is pretty smart despiet going to pubicl school... :\ THANX AMESSSS!'''<br />I tiptoed through the jefreys tubes. I knew seven of 9 would be in there somewhere because she could not transstport away, and she could not steal a shuttel<br />"6 of 9, wher are you?" I called out "I have some redvines and some watermelon slurpy!"<br />I figuered that everyone loves those things, even an immodestly dressed, masculinely behaving ex-brog. But she did not reappear. I was descouraged and let out a deep sigh.<br />Then I was in the hospital and Naomie was there. She lied on a bed looking all paled and sick. Harry was in the bed beside her. The doctor said, "Oh no!"<br />"Whats wrong with her."<br />"I dunno" the Doctor replied. "It seems there are borg nanna probes in her bloods streams."<br />"I csn't believe it! First Ha then Naomi rry. What is heppening to my freinds?"<br />"Coinsidents." The Doctor Said.<br />I nodded it had to be. Knowing i caould do nothing at that point I left the hospital and I returned to my room and lay down on mybeutiful 4 poster bed and tried to rilax. Sudenly I heard a voice that came through all the speakers in my room... and the lights were green!<br />I gasped!<br />'HELLO SHAUNDRAH"<br />"Who is it?" I looked arund but could see nobody. I felt scared. I jumped up from the bed and ran to the door bt it did not open like the doors are supposed to open (like the doors at walmart or piggly wiggly), and there were no handles. I tried to grab something to pull the door open but my hands just slid all over it slippery and smooth.<br />"there is no escaping me, shaundrah."<br />"Is that... 7 of 9?" I gasped<br />The womans voice laughed satinistically and low. I pressed my body aware the door and began to pray quietly.<br />"where are you?" i demanded!<br />"dont take that tone with me, you inlosent CHIlD!" She let out an evil hiss.<br />"Are you... using the ship computer to blare your voice in my room?" I asked "I can track you down..."<br />"By the time you figure out where I am, I will already be gone, hahahahahAHA! No, Shaundra,h I bring you a message from her majisty the BORG QUEEN."<br />I waited. She took a moment, and then she spoke loudly.<br />"If you do not kill Icheb as you were demanded..." She cackled evilly. "We shall kill each and every one of your friends!"<br />I gasped and fainted a little bit. "So... so you did that to Naomie and Harry! YOU MADE THEM SICK!"<br />She answered only with a long and evil laugh. I passed out.
==CHAPTER 8. 'back to 21 century'==
'''I dident edit this chapie cuz they was takeing too long to edit an i wanted it up qick. also u shold read my new stry about hemione granger from hary poter becoming a misonary... THX GUYS SHAUNDRAH COURTNEY'''<br />i desided to walk around te ship to cleared my head. sudenly i saw q! the young good looking q not the old one AND he was carrying a big baskit of red vines and nachocheese bugles, all ov my favorite things!<br />"Hello shaundrah i have been watcching u from affar and i think you are the utterly cherming member of the carew! your faith and ccountenance and your knowledge of 21 century culture is unmatched!" he handed me the baskit "i bring you some gifts of your time..."<br />i looked thru the basket and there were red vines, cheese bugels, some cans of barqs root beer, a copy of the dvd Couragous, and even a copy of sara mally's book before you meet prince charming (my fave) signed by the author!<br />"WOW!" i said "its as if u know me perfectly!"<br />we looked out the window beside one another and he looked very turmoiled and intelligent. his hair looked very beutiful and he wore a perfect checkered shirt and a pair of really nice abercormbie jeans and a pair of converse with neon yellow laces. he looked like a guy off the cover of a magazine or from a boy band or some thing.<br />"I do said q "I have watched u for a long, long time... i knew you were a very special girl, shaundrah."<br />suddenly he snapped his fingers and we were at chick fila, my favorite restarant, and i had a plate of chicken burger in front of me. q sat across from me watching me with his dark forest black eyes. he had the same chiken burger, and he had got a plate of fries and a pepsi for us to share. we just sat there and ate for a while and i really enjoy the taste of not-replicator, not nellix sloppy food. we did not have to say anything.<br />"shaundrah i am sure u want to go home, don't u?" he asked after a while<br />"yes,, yes, please!" i said.<br />"your wash is my command, my dear" he whispered "I will visit again soon..."<br />and he snaped his fingers and suddenly i was on my bed, and my abeka booklets was beside me, and i could hear britney downstairs singing and using the vacum cleaner.<br />i stood up and i looked around. i looked out the window - it was lawn out there! no stars or brogs!<br />"Praise the lord!" i said "he sent me Q to rescue me!"<br />I ran downstairs and began helping my mom make girlled cheese sandwich for lunch. but i would soon learn that it was not the end of 24 sentury for me...
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'''AN: Heres the next chapter! I hoping you like it... this time someone EVIL coms back to cofront them! Also my sister kyleagh has just gone to gautamla just like i did a while back for misonary trip so I got a lot more chors to do and hekping with homeshooling my young brothers. So probably not update very quick'''<br />Shaundrah was sitting next to the fire and then the sun went down and it was drak. The stafs came otu and then began to sprikle in the sky and she was sitting next to chakotay.<br />"shaundrah it is so beatiful"<br />"oh yes chakoay... it has been nearly 4 days and i am so happy even thou we have be a bandoned!"<br />"I am happy too and also you are so beutiful Shaundrah I have to tell you I have try to keep it a secret but i cannot any longar!"<br />He reached out with his hand... and touched her hand! Then they were holding hand next to the fire!<br />Shaundrha cold hardly beleave it and she nearly started hiper ventolaiting. Chakotay was sooooo cool and he loved talking about every thing with Shaundrah and he liked red vines and also the bible and all kinds of awsom stuff like that. He was also very good countenance in his face and she thought his tatoo was awsome. She had never met a guy who was so fun and cute except maybe Harry or Echeb. Except she knew she shold not get too attatched to him.<br />Then some one screamed and chakootay jumped up.<br />"somebody screamed!" he said<br />"Yes I herd it too, Chakotay!" she shouted<br />"i have got to help!"<br />"Yes me too CHakotay!" she shouted back.<br />Then they ran toward the screams as fast as they could but the screams were very faraway, so it took them a while and then as they got nearer, they realized that the screams were American screams.<br />"help help" some one yelled through the trees.<br />Chakotay kept running and shaundrah kept running behind them and suddenly they saw icheb and Harry Kim!<br />"Oh my gosh you are alive i am so glad to see you!" shaundrah yelled<br />But then she saw that 7 of 9 was also there!<br />"What are you doing hear, i thought you were in the brigg!" Chakotay shooted.<br />"Who the hell are you: said 7<br />"i am commander chakotay by the way I am 16 now!"<br />Then every one gasped. But then 7 turned to Shaundrah.<br />"What the eff are you doing here you litlte pain in the Ass!" 7 shreeked at Shaundrah. "You are the only 1 whose ever defeted me in hand too hand conbat. I am gonna stab you with my nanapbobes!"<br />"I dont think so!" Harry shout.<br />"You gotta get thru me first!' Icheb shout.<br />'Me too!" Chakotay!<br />But 7 was too fast for them and hit them and they fell on the ground so SHaundrah pulled out her katana and began to slice at 7 but 7 was now a full borg and had lots of metal inplants and the katana just bounced off her inplants. Her katana made lots of spraks when they hit the inplants and it made a huge clanjing noise so it was a really cool fight.<br />Then the katana hit 7 in the leg and nearly cut it off and theire was blood squering all over the place and the inplants began to wirr and flash.<br />"You think you can stopping me, NEVER! I have captan Janeway in my brog cube and we shall kill her if you kill me and beside, you could not even keep me lock up in the brigg! I escape within ten miuntes"<br />Then Harry Kim picked up his faser and set it to kill and fired a shot but just as it was gonna kill her 7 activated some thing and she transported away in a ball of green lihts.<br />Then Harry and Icheb and Shaundrah and CHakotay huged and they all jump up and down with exitement.<br />"I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU!" Shaundrah exclamed.<br />"ME TOO!" said Icheb adn Hary.<br />Then Harry and Icheb follow them back to the site of the Delta Falyer reckage. They had a bunch of protean bars and some other stuff from voyager like fasers and ticorders so that would be help full.<br />'we been using the reckage like a tent" said chakotay.<br />"Oh I see the bented metal is like a tent" said icheb 'but now we have some fasers we can use it like a saw or even like glue to melt the metals together"<br />"We will need a bigger shelter now that icheb and hary are here... it will be dark soon so we need to working quickly!"<br />Chkaotay nodded.<br />Icheb looked confuse 'you 2 have been sharring that tiny little shelter?"<br />Shaundrah look at chakotay and she felt her self blushing. Then they took out the fasers and tehy started cutting up bits of metal from the reckage of the ship with the faser beam and then they started soddering them together with the faster beams. Very quickly they made a nice little house that was two small boxes of metal with a rectangel hole cut in the front to make a door,.<br />"OK guys lets roll out our bed rolls and get some sleep" harry said<br />Then they all went to sleep in side there new house.
==CHAPTER 20: Atack in the Woods==
'''AUTHORS VERY IMPOTENT NOTE: OK so guys I just wanted to say that I am not very happy that some of you guys were so mean abbot my story. This is not the worse fan fiction ever written. It is not about people who want to committing suicide like that person cemented on in the review's. AND NOW I use the spell cheerier like u people told me to. But before when I use spell checks people say that it did not make sense. Also sometimes I just wanting to post my story cut I am exited. Cant u people understand that? Just being EXITED about posting you story?<br />ANYHOW I got lots of good review on GAIA so I am not give up on this story like I did with my Darko one or my 1 about Hemione Ganger being a Chrstian. But I just thinking you should now that some of you are not being very nice considering that I tried very hard from Chapter 1 to now to improving my writing. JUST COMPARING 1 to 19 I think you agree that it is MUCH BETTER. Anyhow now here is my new chapter. AND IT IS SPELL CHEK. '''<br />Harry Kim, Commander Chayote and Icheb and Shaun rah sat down be side the fire pit. They were roosting marsh mellows. And they were telling ghost story's. Shaundrah was very scare, and the boys sat down close so she would not feel so scared.<br />Then Shaundrah tilled them a story.<br />"Once…Once... there…there... was…was... a bunch of star fleet officers…officers... named Harry Kim and Icheb and Shaundrah and Chakotay and they were stranding on a planet in the middle of Delta Quadrint. They were around fire, and eat some marsh mellows. When suddenly…suddenly.... A BROG DRONE APPEAR OUT OF NOWHERE and assemblated them all!"<br />Harry Kim and Icheb jumped but Chaotic didn't because he was a commandeer and he had lots of experienced with scary things.<br />"That was pretty scary" Harry said.<br />"Yak, I feel really jittery now like I can't even sleep!"<br />Icheb patted her sholder to try and clam her down, but she did not. After a few minuets the marsh mellows were gone and Icheb and Chakotay went to sleep. Then Hary and Shaundrah was alone.<br />"So Shaundrah are you and Chatokay dating now?"<br />"No we were just good friend! Though I think he seems like very nice guy and very good looking"<br />Harry looked sad.<br />"oh icheb you look good too and you are also a really great guy!" she exclaimed!<br />Harry looked more happier after she said that and then they starred at the sky for a while. Then suddenly a bear jumped out from the forest.<br />"RAWWWRRRR" it trowelled.<br />"Saundra I will protect you!" harry yelled and he began to wrestle the bear though it was like double his size and it had big teeth and claws that looked like bat laths.<br />The bare began to scratch and claw and roar and Saundra tried to grab her katana but by the time she did Harry had punched the bear in the face and it ran away. Saundra tried to say thank you to Harry but then she notice he had passed out on the dirt and he was injured. Blood squirting all over. From his shoulder that had a big gashes in it…it... and Saundra screamed!<br />Chakotay and Icheb came out and they gasped because even by the fire light they can see that Harry was gashed up really bad.<br />"What happen!"<br />"A bear attacked us and then Harry beat it off"<br />"Oh wow!" Icheb gasped.<br />"come on we got to help get him into the tent so I can look after him…him... if not…not... he might…might..." Saundra gasped "DIE!"<br />So then they all picked up Harry and brought him into the shelter.
==CHAPTER 21: Dificulty Choices==
'''AUTHORS NOTE: I AM VERY FRUSTERATED WITH SOME PPL WHO COMENTED ON HEAR LAST TIME AND IF I CAN FIGUER OUT HOW I WILL BE BLOCKING ANY ONE WHO SWARES (ESPECIALY CONSIDERING my personal morales)! Also SOME OF YOU PPL WILL BE HAPPY TO KNOW THAT SARA HAS RETURN TO BETA if you remember she checked allot of my draco storey (that i took down because it had a tracted some extremly bad comment and nobody like it) and also check chapter 5 of this storey. '''<br />Chapter 21: Shaundrah is Confused<br />Shaundrah had gotten into a good routine. She got up in the morning very early. She went and prayed for a while. She took a bath in the river far away that the boys could not look at her. She cooked some food for the boys. Then she read her Bible for a while. Then she went and got some vegetables and oysters. Icheb and Chackotay and Harry would go out and they would catch crabs and fish. They would also shoot bears and deer and other forest animals. Then Shaundrah would make dinner with that stuff.<br />Shaundrah noticed that a lot of the time, Icheb and Chackotay and Harry would not talk. They were quiet. Shaundrah thought maybe they were like depressed because Voyager had totally ditched them on the planet. But then she realized that they all were happy to talk to her.<br />There were lots of storms on the planet. After 2 weeks, Shaundrah counted 11 storms. They were really big storms and there were thunder and lightning that were way bigger than any she had ever seen in Wainfleet. Every time she sat in the shelter with the other boys with only the candle to keep the light and they listened to the wind and cracking noise, afraid that the shelter would be blown away. But it wasn't.<br />She went into one of the other rooms so she could get a snack. It was some berries that tasted just like straberry twizzlers. Then she heard the sound of footsteps. It was Harry! He looked really shy and he smiled at her and in the candle light, she thought maybe he was even blushing.<br />"Um hi, Harry." she said shyly.<br />"Hi, Shaundrah." He looked down and he scuffled his shiney starfleet shoe on the dirt ground. "I just wanted to come in and say something I wanted to say for LOTS of months now."<br />Shaundrah couldn't even eat the twizzlers berry she was so startled by him. "What... what is it Harry?"<br />He swallowed and Shaundrah could hear it. You could hear a pine drop.<br />"Shaundrah I think you are so smart and so easy to joke around with, you are just so intelligent, and just the kind of girl I have always liked!" He looked up into her crystal sapphire eyes. "Shaundrah, I am getting to the age where I really need a wife, one who will be a brilliant person and I am looking for a girl who is serious in her intentions!"<br />She could not answer. It was all too much for her. Was Harry really asking her to court him? Wow! She had no idea! I mean, he was cool, and he loved lots of the same things as she did, and they joked around a lot, and ate lots of lunches together, and he was cute and really considered a good guy in the crew, but she had never thought that he might be interested in her!<br />"Harry, I need to... to think..." she said, but then it was all too much for her, and suddenly, she swayed and passed out.<br />Shaundrah opened her eyes in her bedroom but it was the bedroom of their metal shelter on the planet. When she opened her eyes she saw Icheb leaning over her staring into her ocean blue eyes with his own dark ones.<br />In the background, Shaundrah could hear arguing. It was Chackotay and Harry!<br />"What the hell did you do to her Ensine Kim?"<br />"Nothing Commander I just had a conversation with her and she seemed a little overwhelmed and she passed out and hit her head!"<br />"Shaundrah is a strong girl she would not just randomly pass out, I think there is more to this then what your saying to me, but at this point, I think we both better get some sleep since Shaundrah is okay. We can talk about it in the morning when I'm less mad!"<br />"Okay Commander good night."<br />Then the arguing stopped. Icheb sighed.<br />"You have a bump on your head. You hit it on the counter. But with my borgeyes I can see better than most people and I can basically work like a tri corder and I analyzed you. I put some ice on your head and you'll be okay."<br />"Wow thank you Icheb. You saved me."<br />Icheb blushed. "You are a very good friend to me, and you are probably the most beautiful girl in the ship, Shaundrah. You must know that every guy thinks you're so cute..." He paused... "Including me!"<br />"Icheb... you know I can't just date around! That's not what the Lord wants from us!"<br />"I know that, Shaundrah! I... I'm serious about you! I am a serious person! You are more beautiful than anyone on the ship and you deserve and will get my TOTAL loyalty!"<br />"Oh my... I don't know what to say, Icheb..."<br />Shaundrah could say NOTHING. She had no idea that Icheb also was interested in courting her! He always seemed so serious whenever they worked in engineering together or ate dinner together or studied scripture with her. After all, he was a bog, and they were very serious because of their implants and collective brain. That's probably why she didn't guess his feelings!<br />"Don't say anything, Shaundrah. Just pray about it," he whispered.<br />Then he stood. He looked back at her from the doorway painfully. Then he left. She was SO confused! What to do? Who to choose? They were both such totally cool guys!<br />Then she blew out the candle and went to sleep.
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'''Athor's Note: Hi guys this is the next chapter i hope u like... xd I am almost done this 1 but i have a new 1 i'm working on that will be way better. Also Amy check this for spelling & stuff.!'''<br />Shaundrah screamed and tried to run but Vorek was a Vulcan and therefore, much more logical, stronger, and faster than Shaundrah. Harry tried to grab his faser, but he wasn't fast enough. Like a cheetah, Vorek swooped in and grabbed Shaundrah by the waist and pulled her into the turbo lift. Then he pressed the "emergency close" button and the doors swooshed shut.<br />Shaundrah screamed!<br />back on the bridge...!<br />On the bridge where Shaundrah was not there anymore, Harry ran up to the turbo lift and tried to force it open with his hands but he could not. Tucok pressed some buttons on his button pad.<br />"Oh my gosh captain they have locked me out of the computer!" he said.<br />"What does he want with her" asked Harry?<br />"He has... the pin farr."<br />"Nooooo! Who knows what he will do to Shaundrah!" Harry yelled.<br />Captain Janeway gasped and passed out and Chakotay had to carry her over to the other turbo lift to take her to sick bay. Then Harry jumped over the the bannester and then he ran and got a big faser and Tom stood up and he can too. Then the two of them Tom and Harry jumped into the Jefress tube and started to chase Vorek. They crawled really fast with their tricorder out so they could follow him.<br />"My tricorder says that Vorek stopped the turbo lift between deck 3 and 5 and is stil in there so lets go there!"<br />"Good job Tom! Yes let's go."<br />They crawled really fast to save Shaundrah.<br />back in the rubo lift...!<br />Shaundrah kicked and screamed but she could not escape from being held under Voreks arm like a rag doll because Vorek was Vulcan and they are very strong.<br />"Let me go what the heck is wrong with you, you are so messed up in the head its not even funny!" she screamed<br />"I am not I am thinking clearly. More clearly then I have for years."<br />Then he dropped her and she stood up and he stared at her with very evil looking eyes that were black. Then he walked closer to her like he was a cat that was going near some mouse for dinner. Except that she was not a mouse and she had a katana. She took it out but Vorek's volcan hands just grabbed it out her hand like it was card bored and bent it in half and tosed it a side. It clanked on the floor and then Vorek started to take off his jacket... Shaundrah screamed and tried to kick him in the manly bits but unfortunetly he just ducked at the last minute.<br />Then he put his hand on her face like Spokc did in that movie just like the whale and Shaundrah.<br />"Your mined to mine mind." Said Vorek. "Our thought to your thought... we are to be mated mwa ha ha! Let the PON FAR heing!"<br />"Noooo!" she screamed as she tried to push his hand off with her hand<br />But then she started to see images in her head... of the planet vulcan and of earth and she started to feel all hot and excited and she knew this was wrong, wrong wrong!<br />Back in the jefrey's tube...<br />Ton and harry were getting very close and then suddenly they heard a scarming nose.<br />"Did you hear that tom?" Said Harrty.<br />"Ya it sounded like someone saying 'no' in a very loud voice"<br />"Oh my gosh it must be shaundrah... what is that BASTARD Vorek doing to her?"<br />Then they both looked at each other with really scared face and then they started to run as fast as they could. Harry got out his faser and then he started climbing down a ladder and he used one leg to kick the top of the turbo lift.<br />The turbo lifte cealing smashed open just like in that episode of tng where captain Picard has to lead a bunch of kids up some ladder. Harry's rage had made him super strong probably more strong then even Vorek. Harry pointed the faster at Vorek.<br />"Let go of her!"<br />"Nooo! I will already started the mind melt!" Vorek laughed evilly "Nothing will break us a part now... NOTHIIINNGGGG!"<br />"Step away, Vorek or else we will have to shoot!" Tom yelled pointing his faser down there too. "you dont need to do this!"<br />"I won't!" Vorek said "shanudra is mine for ever!"<br />Then Tom shot him on STUN but stun did nothing to him because he was stuck in the crazy of the pin farr. Vork just growelled and squished his finger tighter around Shaundrah's face. She tried to scream but she could not because Vorek's crazy thoughts were strating to invade her mind.<br />Then Harry shot Vorek on a higher sting. It did nothing to him. Finally Harry set it to the highest setting and shot him and Vorek screamed and fell to the ground and then distinticrated. He was dead. Shaundrah looked up through the hole Harry had smashed thru the top of the turbo loft.<br />"Harryyyyy..." she whispering.<br />Then sudeenly she fell down into an unconscious heap on the floor.
 
In sick bay... 1 eek later...<br />Shaundrah opened her eyes and saw the doctor standing over her. She could see captain janway in one nearby bio bed with chkaotay standing over her.<br />"Vorek is dead from being fasered. thank goodness for Harry if he had been a few mints later, you would be dead. said the Doctor.<br />Harry stood a few feet away from shaundrah in a corner. He looked really embarrassed and all blush. Then after a minute he left. And Shaundrah went back to sleep.<br />''' note: I want ore review... i did not beta read this because i was in rush. but if you review a lot i will promise to get a betta reader in the future and not rush so much.'''<br />
==CHAPTER 29 - the end==
'''AUTHORS NOTE: this is near the end i will just have rpiloque after this i think but i hope your hot too dissapointed because i got a super awsome story on here about LEFT BEHIND (the storys about the christians in the rapture) and i also got a great story about deep space 9 that i think i will posting soon'''<br />Shaundrah felt really bad after Vorek and Seven were dead. Then, Nellix desided to leave the ship to get married to some Tallaxian girl on some random plant. Evry one was so happy and it brought joy to the ship again. Quark even threw a big party with tons of orderves and fruit juice drinks. And at that party Captain Janeway even came even because she had been sick for the past few wreeks. Also when she came there Noami and Icheb announce that they were pregnant and also the Doctor said they would have twiplets.<br />"We are going to make them Shaundrah and Aliesse and also Jayde of they are girl's!" Icheb said "nad if they are boy's, we will name them Mathew Mark and John after the gospel's."<br />"Wow I am so honored!" squealed Shaundrah and she and Nomi jumped up and down together so exitedly.<br />Captain Janeway then said "Hello Crew I got something to tell you."
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==CHAPTER 30 - the epiloque:==
EPLOTQUE<br />Shaundrah got up and started cleaning the quaters she sheared with Harry Ki her Husband. He had already gone to the bredge. Sence he was now the first officer because Chakotay liked him best and there was a vacancy once Captain Janeway stayed home to look after her and Chakotays 4 kids... 2 sets of twins... Enoch and Suter and Lydia and Ankia (name after 7 of 9).<br />Shaundrah and Harry only been married for a year but it was so fantastic and super fun being a wife.<br />Then suddenly she saw a big flashing of white light in her quaters.<br />It was Q JUNIOR! He was sitting on teh couch and looked really bored.<br />"What are you doing here? Don't intrude on my house!" said Shaundrah "I did not intive you in!"<br />"No, you did not... nice place though I really like the doyelys you made."<br />"Oh thank you I been teaching my self a lot of skills since i became wife... tating, knitting, crocheing, sewing, that kind of stuff."<br />"Cool but thats not why I am here." Q Junior sigh. "I guess I lost track of time, for us Qs like 1 year of your time is like 5 seconds for us. Any how, I should have come back here earlier because I wanted to tell you why I bring you here originally. Its been nearly 2 years sence I brought you to the 23rd century, to Voyager, and took you away from 2014."<br />"Yes it has."<br />:Well as you can see, now Jane way is married to her 1 true love and all though I really care about Naiomi, I am a Q and I can see the future and I knew that... destiny require them to get together... and ultimetly I will end up with Amanda that other Q kid. That is why I bring you here. You are the cattelist for that."<br />"Me? You took me from my house sister mom dad church... everything... to be gere so the future will unfold the way you wanted you baserd!"<br />"Its ok now I will senf you back if you so choose." Q waited.<br />Then Shaundrah thought very hard. First she was exited... then she thought of Harry...<br />"No! I miss them but i got a new life hear on Voyager."<br />"Ok bye good luck with Harry as a psychic I can tell you that you 2 will be very happy together." Q Junior said "because you made the rite choice, I will give you a little present..."<br />Then in another big flash of light Q Junior was gone. Shaundrah sighed and felt really sad for a minute because now she realized that she would never be going back home to the 21st century. She was really and truely a person who's life was in the future... but now it was her's chocie, not Q Juniors.<br />Then suddenly Harry walked in. He looked so happy and nice.<br />"Hi honey I am home." He saw she looked sad "YOu look sad whats wrong?"<br />"Oh nothing I just had a visit from Q Junior and he gave me the decison to stay here or go back to my old life back in Ohio. Then I chose to stay here with you."<br />"I am so glad I would have missed you so bad and then also I would not have been able to tell you our good news... Doctor Esteban (that's the new name he chose) just told me you are pregnant finnally!"<br />Shaundrah was going to say some thing but then the public adress system crackeled and Captain Chakotays voice boomed over the loud speaker "Attetion Voyagers Crew. I do not know what happened but it appears we hit a space anomely. That big white light that went over the whole ship. And it appears that we are now... in sector zero zero 1. Yes it is true we are home at Earth!"<br />"WOW! I am just so happy." Shaundrah nearly cried "thank God for everything we are so blessed..."<br />"Yes Shaundrah we are happily ever after..."<br />THE END<br />'''AUTHORS NOTE: this is realy the end this time thanks 4 reading hop you like the rest of my storys'''
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