The New Girl on The Voyager: Difference between revisions

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==CHAPTER 1==

'''HI EVERY 1! HERE IS MY NEWEST SRORY! IT IS ABOUT A SHOW I WATCH WHEN I WAS YOUBG CALLED STAR TREK! NJOYYYYY!<br />xxx'''<br />There once was a girl who lived in ohio and she did not like it very much so she layed on her bed and roled around in her realy cute little abercrobie ad fitch poli sirt, and wished so much that she could be some where else sence there is only so many day you can spend at 7 11 drink slurpees and eting twizzlers.<br />Then on tv i could see the picture of a shuttel and then i sudeny felt a spinning like i had not drank water much.<br />"OH MY GOD I AM PASING OUT" I yell as I pssed out.<br />33333<br />'RED ALERT!"<br />i can here clacksons playing loudly. It sounds like a sieren; it reminds me of a police or firetruck sieren.<br />"who is this insuferable interuder?" a loud voice says noisely.<br />"OMG," I muttering "where am I, Britney is that u?"<br />but it isnotmy sittster and now when I open my eyes i can see bright red lites flashing in my eyes and a man in a tight out fit leaning over me. he hasa tattoo. he looks mad.<br />"Um hi where am i."<br />"you are on a space ship," someone else who is orental chinese looking says to me "in space."<br />"OMG no!" i say "I was just at 7 11 buying red vines and slurpees how can this be? is this a trick? britney is this a trick? did i fall and bang my head again?"<br />'we are very far from earth you must be an alien" tatoo man says "ensign kim and tuvock can you breng her to the docter down in the turno lifet."<br />so we go in a elevator. it is me and a black guy with ponty ears and the chinese guy who i guessed was ensign kim cuz that's an oriental name.<br />"are you human?" tuvock ask me<br />"um obviously" I reply and role my eyes. REALLY what a dubm question.<br />"i am not human" he says "you are on a space ship and there are many aliens here who are not humans for instence i am avulcan we arepeople with pinty ears and we are super logical"<br />kim shruged at me as tuvock kept talking about aliens butsence i awas pretty sure i was dreaming i did not pay much atention.<br />but then the elevator stops and i get out. we are at a hallway. then we walk down it. we turn left. then we wallk down another hallway. we then walk down another hallway and to a door. then the door opened without us touching it the doors at walmart or grocery store.<br />In front of me wasa very ugly old guy with abald head.<br />'hello missy i am the doctor but i am actualy just a hologram but i will be looking after you today and figuering out what species you are and how you got on our bredge."<br />"I am human oviously!" I shout and stamp my foot "And i am not missy my name is shaundrah aliesse jayde deloreann! i am from ohio and once i wake up i will be back thereand this will all be a bad dream."<br />"i am sory shaundrah butit isnot a bad dream. obviously. it is logical" tuckock said.<br />"Noooo!" i cried because i did not believe it.<br />333333333<br />So after a wile I learnd that the futuer was not nerely as bad as i had asumed.<br />You see i was sort of thinking that it was a dream cuz mabey I had watch too much tv show about sify. So i injoyed it think that i would go home soon.<br />so first i went to the replicater and i order some lickorish. i got red vines. then i order some pepsi slurpee and also some panda express crab rain goons.<br />it was pretty cool and i sat there in neelicks kitchen place eting it while harry sit beside me he was becomming a good freind as he diddnt have any freinds ecxept for tom paris and belana toris. But then they have baby so how can harry hang out with them cuz his best freind is a baby daddy?<br />So ya we hung out like that. I was not hanging out with boy often at home becuz i am CHRISTAIN but we talked about good stuff like how we both reads elsie dinsmore and left behind books and think they are super cool.<br />And then one day I see a guy who is like my age siting across the room with 7 of 9. and he was kinda cute so i say to harry "whose that"? and he says back "oh that is noboedy it is eechib and we dont care about him cuz he is so wired"<br />so i tink that peeple that are out casts are interest so i vow to myself that i will speak to him. and i finished the lickorish.<br />at that moment captin jane way comes in "oh my gosh shaundrah it is an emergedcy! we need help right away and you are the only 1 ho can do it!"<br />i look at her and wonder WHAT COULD IT BE?<br />3333$33<br />'''DUNDUNDUN so next chapie will be up soon, I post this also on gaia website to get criticals for improve.'''

'''AN: Heres the next chapter! I hoping you like it... this time someone EVIL coms back to cofront them! Also my sister kyleagh has just gone to gautamla just like i did a while back for misonary trip so I got a lot more chors to do and hekping with homeshooling my young brothers. So probably not update very quick'''<br />Shaundrah was sitting next to the fire and then the sun went down and it was drak. The stafs came otu and then began to sprikle in the sky and she was sitting next to chakotay.<br />"shaundrah it is so beatiful"<br />"oh yes chakoay... it has been nearly 4 days and i am so happy even thou we have be a bandoned!"<br />"I am happy too and also you are so beutiful Shaundrah I have to tell you I have try to keep it a secret but i cannot any longar!"<br />He reached out with his hand... and touched her hand! Then they were holding hand next to the fire!<br />Shaundrha cold hardly beleave it and she nearly started hiper ventolaiting. Chakotay was sooooo cool and he loved talking about every thing with Shaundrah and he liked red vines and also the bible and all kinds of awsom stuff like that. He was also very good countenance in his face and she thought his tatoo was awsome. She had never met a guy who was so fun and cute except maybe Harry or Echeb. Except she knew she shold not get too attatched to him.<br />Then some one screamed and chakootay jumped up.<br />"somebody screamed!" he said<br />"Yes I herd it too, Chakotay!" she shouted<br />"i have got to help!"<br />"Yes me too CHakotay!" she shouted back.<br />Then they ran toward the screams as fast as they could but the screams were very faraway, so it took them a while and then as they got nearer, they realized that the screams were American screams.<br />"help help" some one yelled through the trees.<br />Chakotay kept running and shaundrah kept running behind them and suddenly they saw icheb and Harry Kim!<br />"Oh my gosh you are alive i am so glad to see you!" shaundrah yelled<br />But then she saw that 7 of 9 was also there!<br />"What are you doing hear, i thought you were in the brigg!" Chakotay shooted.<br />"Who the hell are you: said 7<br />"i am commander chakotay by the way I am 16 now!"<br />Then every one gasped. But then 7 turned to Shaundrah.<br />"What the eff are you doing here you litlte pain in the Ass!" 7 shreeked at Shaundrah. "You are the only 1 whose ever defeted me in hand too hand conbat. I am gonna stab you with my nanapbobes!"<br />"I dont think so!" Harry shout.<br />"You gotta get thru me first!' Icheb shout.<br />'Me too!" Chakotay!<br />But 7 was too fast for them and hit them and they fell on the ground so SHaundrah pulled out her katana and began to slice at 7 but 7 was now a full borg and had lots of metal inplants and the katana just bounced off her inplants. Her katana made lots of spraks when they hit the inplants and it made a huge clanjing noise so it was a really cool fight.<br />Then the katana hit 7 in the leg and nearly cut it off and theire was blood squering all over the place and the inplants began to wirr and flash.<br />"You think you can stopping me, NEVER! I have captan Janeway in my brog cube and we shall kill her if you kill me and beside, you could not even keep me lock up in the brigg! I escape within ten miuntes"<br />Then Harry Kim picked up his faser and set it to kill and fired a shot but just as it was gonna kill her 7 activated some thing and she transported away in a ball of green lihts.<br />Then Harry and Icheb and Shaundrah and CHakotay huged and they all jump up and down with exitement.<br />"I AM SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU!" Shaundrah exclamed.<br />"ME TOO!" said Icheb adn Hary.<br />Then Harry and Icheb follow them back to the site of the Delta Falyer reckage. They had a bunch of protean bars and some other stuff from voyager like fasers and ticorders so that would be help full.<br />'we been using the reckage like a tent" said chakotay.<br />"Oh I see the bented metal is like a tent" said icheb 'but now we have some fasers we can use it like a saw or even like glue to melt the metals together"<br />"We will need a bigger shelter now that icheb and hary are here... it will be dark soon so we need to working quickly!"<br />Chkaotay nodded.<br />Icheb looked confuse 'you 2 have been sharring that tiny little shelter?"<br />Shaundrah look at chakotay and she felt her self blushing. Then they took out the fasers and tehy started cutting up bits of metal from the reckage of the ship with the faser beam and then they started soddering them together with the faster beams. Very quickly they made a nice little house that was two small boxes of metal with a rectangel hole cut in the front to make a door,.<br />"OK guys lets roll out our bed rolls and get some sleep" harry said<br />Then they all went to sleep in side there new house.

==CHAPTER 20: Atack in the Woods==

==CHAPTER 21: Dificulty Choices==

'''AUTHORS NOTE: I AM VERY FRUSTERATED WITH SOME PPL WHO COMENTED ON HEAR LAST TIME AND IF I CAN FIGUER OUT HOW I WILL BE BLOCKING ANY ONE WHO SWARES (ESPECIALY CONSIDERING my personal morales)! Also SOME OF YOU PPL WILL BE HAPPY TO KNOW THAT SARA HAS RETURN TO BETA if you remember she checked allot of my draco storey (that i took down because it had a tracted some extremly bad comment and nobody like it) and also check chapter 5 of this storey. '''<br />Chapter 21: Shaundrah is Confused<br />Shaundrah had gotten into a good routine. She got up in the morning very early. She went and prayed for a while. She took a bath in the river far away that the boys could not look at her. She cooked some food for the boys. Then she read her Bible for a while. Then she went and got some vegetables and oysters. Icheb and Chackotay and Harry would go out and they would catch crabs and fish. They would also shoot bears and deer and other forest animals. Then Shaundrah would make dinner with that stuff.<br />Shaundrah noticed that a lot of the time, Icheb and Chackotay and Harry would not talk. They were quiet. Shaundrah thought maybe they were like depressed because Voyager had totally ditched them on the planet. But then she realized that they all were happy to talk to her.<br />There were lots of storms on the planet. After 2 weeks, Shaundrah counted 11 storms. They were really big storms and there were thunder and lightning that were way bigger than any she had ever seen in Wainfleet. Every time she sat in the shelter with the other boys with only the candle to keep the light and they listened to the wind and cracking noise, afraid that the shelter would be blown away. But it wasn't.<br />She went into one of the other rooms so she could get a snack. It was some berries that tasted just like straberry twizzlers. Then she heard the sound of footsteps. It was Harry! He looked really shy and he smiled at her and in the candle light, she thought maybe he was even blushing.<br />"Um hi, Harry." she said shyly.<br />"Hi, Shaundrah." He looked down and he scuffled his shiney starfleet shoe on the dirt ground. "I just wanted to come in and say something I wanted to say for LOTS of months now."<br />Shaundrah couldn't even eat the twizzlers berry she was so startled by him. "What... what is it Harry?"<br />He swallowed and Shaundrah could hear it. You could hear a pine drop.<br />"Shaundrah I think you are so smart and so easy to joke around with, you are just so intelligent, and just the kind of girl I have always liked!" He looked up into her crystal sapphire eyes. "Shaundrah, I am getting to the age where I really need a wife, one who will be a brilliant person and I am looking for a girl who is serious in her intentions!"<br />She could not answer. It was all too much for her. Was Harry really asking her to court him? Wow! She had no idea! I mean, he was cool, and he loved lots of the same things as she did, and they joked around a lot, and ate lots of lunches together, and he was cute and really considered a good guy in the crew, but she had never thought that he might be interested in her!<br />"Harry, I need to... to think..." she said, but then it was all too much for her, and suddenly, she swayed and passed out.<br />Shaundrah opened her eyes in her bedroom but it was the bedroom of their metal shelter on the planet. When she opened her eyes she saw Icheb leaning over her staring into her ocean blue eyes with his own dark ones.<br />In the background, Shaundrah could hear arguing. It was Chackotay and Harry!<br />"What the hell did you do to her Ensine Kim?"<br />"Nothing Commander I just had a conversation with her and she seemed a little overwhelmed and she passed out and hit her head!"<br />"Shaundrah is a strong girl she would not just randomly pass out, I think there is more to this then what your saying to me, but at this point, I think we both better get some sleep since Shaundrah is okay. We can talk about it in the morning when I'm less mad!"<br />"Okay Commander good night."<br />Then the arguing stopped. Icheb sighed.<br />"You have a bump on your head. You hit it on the counter. But with my borgeyes I can see better than most people and I can basically work like a tri corder and I analyzed you. I put some ice on your head and you'll be okay."<br />"Wow thank you Icheb. You saved me."<br />Icheb blushed. "You are a very good friend to me, and you are probably the most beautiful girl in the ship, Shaundrah. You must know that every guy thinks you're so cute..." He paused... "Including me!"<br />"Icheb... you know I can't just date around! That's not what the Lord wants from us!"<br />"I know that, Shaundrah! I... I'm serious about you! I am a serious person! You are more beautiful than anyone on the ship and you deserve and will get my TOTAL loyalty!"<br />"Oh my... I don't know what to say, Icheb..."<br />Shaundrah could say NOTHING. She had no idea that Icheb also was interested in courting her! He always seemed so serious whenever they worked in engineering together or ate dinner together or studied scripture with her. After all, he was a bog, and they were very serious because of their implants and collective brain. That's probably why she didn't guess his feelings!<br />"Don't say anything, Shaundrah. Just pray about it," he whispered.<br />Then he stood. He looked back at her from the doorway painfully. Then he left. She was SO confused! What to do? Who to choose? They were both such totally cool guys!<br />Then she blew out the candle and went to sleep.

==CHAPTER 30 - the epiloque:==

EPLOTQUE<br />Shaundrah got up and started cleaning the quaters she sheared with Harry Ki her Husband. He had already gone to the bredge. Sence he was now the first officer because Chakotay liked him best and there was a vacancy once Captain Janeway stayed home to look after her and Chakotays 4 kids... 2 sets of twins... Enoch and Suter and Lydia and Ankia (name after 7 of 9).<br />Shaundrah and Harry only been married for a year but it was so fantastic and super fun being a wife.<br />Then suddenly she saw a big flashing of white light in her quaters.<br />It was Q JUNIOR! He was sitting on teh couch and looked really bored.<br />"What are you doing here? Don't intrude on my house!" said Shaundrah "I did not intive you in!"<br />"No, you did not... nice place though I really like the doyelys you made."<br />"Oh thank you I been teaching my self a lot of skills since i became wife... tating, knitting, crocheing, sewing, that kind of stuff."<br />"Cool but thats not why I am here." Q Junior sigh. "I guess I lost track of time, for us Qs like 1 year of your time is like 5 seconds for us. Any how, I should have come back here earlier because I wanted to tell you why I bring you here originally. Its been nearly 2 years sence I brought you to the 23rd century, to Voyager, and took you away from 2014."<br />"Yes it has."<br />:Well as you can see, now Jane way is married to her 1 true love and all though I really care about Naiomi, I am a Q and I can see the future and I knew that... destiny require them to get together... and ultimetly I will end up with Amanda that other Q kid. That is why I bring you here. You are the cattelist for that."<br />"Me? You took me from my house sister mom dad church... everything... to be gere so the future will unfold the way you wanted you baserd!"<br />"Its ok now I will senf you back if you so choose." Q waited.<br />Then Shaundrah thought very hard. First she was exited... then she thought of Harry...<br />"No! I miss them but i got a new life hear on Voyager."<br />"Ok bye good luck with Harry as a psychic I can tell you that you 2 will be very happy together." Q Junior said "because you made the rite choice, I will give you a little present..."<br />Then in another big flash of light Q Junior was gone. Shaundrah sighed and felt really sad for a minute because now she realized that she would never be going back home to the 21st century. She was really and truely a person who's life was in the future... but now it was her's chocie, not Q Juniors.<br />Then suddenly Harry walked in. He looked so happy and nice.<br />"Hi honey I am home." He saw she looked sad "YOu look sad whats wrong?"<br />"Oh nothing I just had a visit from Q Junior and he gave me the decison to stay here or go back to my old life back in Ohio. Then I chose to stay here with you."<br />"I am so glad I would have missed you so bad and then also I would not have been able to tell you our good news... Doctor Esteban (that's the new name he chose) just told me you are pregnant finnally!"<br />Shaundrah was going to say some thing but then the public adress system crackeled and Captain Chakotays voice boomed over the loud speaker "Attetion Voyagers Crew. I do not know what happened but it appears we hit a space anomely. That big white light that went over the whole ship. And it appears that we are now... in sector zero zero 1. Yes it is true we are home at Earth!"<br />"WOW! I am just so happy." Shaundrah nearly cried "thank God for everything we are so blessed..."<br />"Yes Shaundrah we are happily ever after..."<br />THE END<br />'''AUTHORS NOTE: this is realy the end this time thanks 4 reading hop you like the rest of my storys'''

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