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Written between the timespan of June 16, 2011 to April 23, 2014, this fanfiction has gained the status
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Written between the timespan of June 16, 2011 to April 23, 2014, this fanfiction has gained the status of being the [[My Immortal]] of Star Trek fanfictions. With that out of the way, here's the story.<br />(NOTE: '''Bold''' Indicates an Authors Note, and they appear a lot in this travesty.)<br />----<br />'A beutiful American teen appears on Voyager and all of the boys on the ship falls in love. She need to go back home.'<br />----
==CHAPTER 1==
'''HI EVERY 1! HERE IS MY NEWEST SRORY! IT IS ABOUT A SHOW I WATCH WHEN I WAS YOUBG CALLED STAR TREK! NJOYYYYY!<br />xxx'''<br />There once was a girl who lived in ohio and she did not like it very much so she layed on her bed and roled around in her realy cute little abercrobie ad fitch poli sirt, and wished so much that she could be some where else sence there is only so many day you can spend at 7 11 drink slurpees and eting twizzlers.<br />Then on tv i could see the picture of a shuttel and then i sudeny felt a spinning like i had not drank water much.<br />"OH MY GOD I AM PASING OUT" I yell as I pssed out.<br />33333<br />'RED ALERT!"<br />i can here clacksons playing loudly. It sounds like a sieren; it reminds me of a police or firetruck sieren.<br />"who is this insuferable interuder?" a loud voice says noisely.<br />"OMG," I muttering "where am I, Britney is that u?"<br />but it isnotmy sittster and now when I open my eyes i can see bright red lites flashing in my eyes and a man in a tight out fit leaning over me. he hasa tattoo. he looks mad.<br />"Um hi where am i."<br />"you are on a space ship," someone else who is orental chinese looking says to me "in space."<br />"OMG no!" i say "I was just at 7 11 buying red vines and slurpees how can this be? is this a trick? britney is this a trick? did i fall and bang my head again?"<br />'we are very far from earth you must be an alien" tatoo man says "ensign kim and tuvock can you breng her to the docter down in the turno lifet."<br />so we go in a elevator. it is me and a black guy with ponty ears and the chinese guy who i guessed was ensign kim cuz that's an oriental name.<br />"are you human?" tuvock ask me<br />"um obviously" I reply and role my eyes. REALLY what a dubm question.<br />"i am not human" he says "you are on a space ship and there are many aliens here who are not humans for instence i am avulcan we arepeople with pinty ears and we are super logical"<br />kim shruged at me as tuvock kept talking about aliens butsence i awas pretty sure i was dreaming i did not pay much atention.<br />but then the elevator stops and i get out. we are at a hallway. then we walk down it. we turn left. then we wallk down another hallway. we then walk down another hallway and to a door. then the door opened without us touching it the doors at walmart or grocery store.<br />In front of me wasa very ugly old guy with abald head.<br />'hello missy i am the doctor but i am actualy just a hologram but i will be looking after you today and figuering out what species you are and how you got on our bredge."<br />"I am human oviously!" I shout and stamp my foot "And i am not missy my name is shaundrah aliesse jayde deloreann! i am from ohio and once i wake up i will be back thereand this will all be a bad dream."<br />"i am sory shaundrah butit isnot a bad dream. obviously. it is logical" tuckock said.<br />"Noooo!" i cried because i did not believe it.<br />333333333<br />So after a wile I learnd that the futuer was not nerely as bad as i had asumed.<br />You see i was sort of thinking that it was a dream cuz mabey I had watch too much tv show about sify. So i injoyed it think that i would go home soon.<br />so first i went to the replicater and i order some lickorish. i got red vines. then i order some pepsi slurpee and also some panda express crab rain goons.<br />it was pretty cool and i sat there in neelicks kitchen place eting it while harry sit beside me he was becomming a good freind as he diddnt have any freinds ecxept for tom paris and belana toris. But then they have baby so how can harry hang out with them cuz his best freind is a baby daddy?<br />So ya we hung out like that. I was not hanging out with boy often at home becuz i am CHRISTAIN but we talked about good stuff like how we both reads elsie dinsmore and left behind books and think they are super cool.<br />And then one day I see a guy who is like my age siting across the room with 7 of 9. and he was kinda cute so i say to harry "whose that"? and he says back "oh that is noboedy it is eechib and we dont care about him cuz he is so wired"<br />so i tink that peeple that are out casts are interest so i vow to myself that i will speak to him. and i finished the lickorish.<br />at that moment captin jane way comes in "oh my gosh shaundrah it is an emergedcy! we need help right away and you are the only 1 ho can do it!"<br />i look at her and wonder WHAT COULD IT BE?<br />3333$33<br />'''DUNDUNDUN so next chapie will be up soon, I post this also on gaia website to get criticals for improve.'''
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==CHAPTER 30 - the epiloque:==
EPLOTQUE<br />Shaundrah got up and started cleaning the quaters she sheared with Harry Ki her Husband. He had already gone to the bredge. Sence he was now the first officer because Chakotay liked him best and there was a vacancy once Captain Janeway stayed home to look after her and Chakotays 4 kids... 2 sets of twins... Enoch and Suter and Lydia and Ankia (name after 7 of 9).<br />Shaundrah and Harry only been married for a year but it was so fantastic and super fun being a wife.<br />Then suddenly she saw a big flashing of white light in her quaters.<br />It was Q JUNIOR! He was sitting on teh couch and looked really bored.<br />"What are you doing here? Don't intrude on my house!" said Shaundrah "I did not intive you in!"<br />"No, you did not... nice place though I really like the doyelys you made."<br />"Oh thank you I been teaching my self a lot of skills since i became wife... tating, knitting, crocheing, sewing, that kind of stuff."<br />"Cool but thats not why I am here." Q Junior sigh. "I guess I lost track of time, for us Qs like 1 year of your time is like 5 seconds for us. Any how, I should have come back here earlier because I wanted to tell you why I bring you here originally. Its been nearly 2 years sence I brought you to the 23rd century, to Voyager, and took you away from 2014."<br />"Yes it has."<br />:Well as you can see, now Jane way is married to her 1 true love and all though I really care about Naiomi, I am a Q and I can see the future and I knew that... destiny require them to get together... and ultimetly I will end up with Amanda that other Q kid. That is why I bring you here. You are the cattelist for that."<br />"Me? You took me from my house sister mom dad church... everything... to be gere so the future will unfold the way you wanted you baserd!"<br />"Its ok now I will senf you back if you so choose." Q waited.<br />Then Shaundrah thought very hard. First she was exited... then she thought of Harry...<br />"No! I miss them but i got a new life hear on Voyager."<br />"Ok bye good luck with Harry as a psychic I can tell you that you 2 will be very happy together." Q Junior said "because you made the rite choice, I will give you a little present..."<br />Then in another big flash of light Q Junior was gone. Shaundrah sighed and felt really sad for a minute because now she realized that she would never be going back home to the 21st century. She was really and truely a person who's life was in the future... but now it was her's chocie, not Q Juniors.<br />Then suddenly Harry walked in. He looked so happy and nice.<br />"Hi honey I am home." He saw she looked sad "YOu look sad whats wrong?"<br />"Oh nothing I just had a visit from Q Junior and he gave me the decison to stay here or go back to my old life back in Ohio. Then I chose to stay here with you."<br />"I am so glad I would have missed you so bad and then also I would not have been able to tell you our good news... Doctor Esteban (that's the new name he chose) just told me you are pregnant finnally!"<br />Shaundrah was going to say some thing but then the public adress system crackeled and Captain Chakotays voice boomed over the loud speaker "Attetion Voyagers Crew. I do not know what happened but it appears we hit a space anomely. That big white light that went over the whole ship. And it appears that we are now... in sector zero zero 1. Yes it is true we are home at Earth!"<br />"WOW! I am just so happy." Shaundrah nearly cried "thank God for everything we are so blessed..."<br />"Yes Shaundrah we are happily ever after..."<br />THE END<br />'''AUTHORS NOTE: this is realy the end this time thanks 4 reading hop you like the rest of my storys'''
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