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hello everyone this is my first creepy pasta and sum ffeeedback will be apreciated.
tommy was in his house and on the toilet doing a shit and suddenly he felt somthign.
thank ver much, i appreciat your efofrts i know this pasta is very shit but please help me improve i will very grateful
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