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{{AN|Old Invader Zim fanfiction I wrote last year. I put it on the Spinpasta wiki but it got taken down, so I'm putting it here. I don't even like it anymore, it's so contrived, just... EEEEUGHH!}}
==Chapter 1: Unmasked==
Zim looked around to see a butcher shop right in front of him, and some Hispanic bloke and his daughter selling some Poop candies. Muddled by the alternate state of what should have been his base, he went up to his taxi driver to explain his concerns.
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"You are a monster! Go die, you animal abuser! Oh-- wait, that's not fair! Animal abusers are more moral than the likes of you! I don't even think your corruption is even humanly!" declared Sara as she saw Zim deforming GIR. "If you and Adolf Hitler were to be compared, you wouldn't compare at all, do you know why? Because you're evil count is so high that Hitler looks like Jesus!" growled Brian.
Everyone pointed their fingers at Zim and started to boo. A dreaded sense filled his paranoid mindset. They
Chapter 2: Spades and Stones▼
▲==Chapter 2: Spades and Stones==
A tiny hole was dug into the soil. Zim heavily sighed as he sweated thoroughly. By the time I'm done digging this, they'll get to me! My PAK legs are too inferior to make holes! Zim dug faster and faster, for hours, the constant fear of being revealed an alien getting to his head. After hours, the hole was big enough to fit the cadavers.
"FINALLY!" Zim shrieked. More Mexicans stared at him. One said, "Now he's abusing humans too? Oh my god!" Zim killed all of them with his spider legs. "Great," he mumbled. "Now I have to make the hole twice as deep." Zim looked at GIR. "You know what, GIR? Let's just abandon these corpses at the moment. I don't think I can take anymore digging." The Irken retched, and retroceded to the border of Mexico. Zim stabbed the border patrol immediately, and dashed off with GIR. When he got back to America, he lamented, " I couldn't take it, the
"There you are, let's get him!" lashed out a voice. It looked like the manager of the bank he had dropped by earlier.
==Chapter 3: Destruction of Hope==
Zim didn't try to defend himself. Deep down inside, he knew he was hopeless and lacked the determination. Besides, if he was in jail, then the Mexicans could not come up to him and expose him. Zim put his hands up for the police officer, got thrown in the car, taken to prison, and thrown in a cell with GIR.
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But before he could finish, he clenched the bars of his cell and begged, "S-Save me, from this dark and godforsaken torture chamber I'm trapped in, NOW!" Suddenly, Zim saw some sparkles, light, and a primitive figure. It was the Scary Monkey.
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"Oh really?" said the monkey, who then teleported GIR to Japan and back.
"Well, even if-if you're lying, I don't think it can get worse than
"In return, you have to do whatever GIR tells you to do. Turning tables, you might call it." responded the Scary Monkey.
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The monkey teleported them back to their base.
2 days later, GIR commanded, "Master, get me another taco." "R-Right o-on
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