A shitty Undertale Pasta I made when I was 12: Difference between revisions

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And that's it! That's the end of this piece of fucking shit. I have no words. I posted this onto a reply section of a comment on Youtube, but I then deleted it realizing how stupid the story was. If you wanna make a better, or at least decent version of this story that's actually finished, be my guest. Also the part where Patience starts crying and it slowly turns into laughter is based off of (Bendy Chapter 3 spoilers here) the end of Chapter 3 of Bendy and the Ink Machine, where Alice Angel sounds like she's crying, but it slowly turns into maniacal laughter, before she drops the elevator at the speed of Expurgation from the Full-Ass Tricky mod. Yes I put a FNF mod reference in here, sue me.
 
and here's the link to the video with the comment that inspired this shit pasta ok time to play Expurgation and break my fucking fingers: <nowiki>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e49AZXawr2w&t=46s</nowiki>{{Comments}}
 
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