A shitty Undertale Pasta I made when I was 12: Difference between revisions

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Then the Chara jumpscare that appears at the end of the genocide route when you choose not to destroy the world happened, but with Patience. But on the last frame...Patience's sprite looked like it was crying. I was scared, but relieved since the Chara jumpscare causes the game to crash, but instead of the game crashing, it went back to my last save point in the ruins. I went back to the room with the Toy Knife, but Patience was gone. I went to Toriel's house, but I heard screaming, and Toriel wasn't there. I went down the stairs and saw a pile of dust where Toriel would normaly be.
 
And that's it! That's the end of this piece of fucking shit. I have no words. I posted this onto a reply section of a comment on Youtube, but I then deleted it realizing how stupid the story was. If you wanna make a better, or at least decent version of this story that's actually finished, be my guest. Also the part where Patience starts crying and it slowly turns into laughter is based off of (Bendy Chapter 3 spoilers here) the end of Chapter 3 of Bendy and the Ink Machine, where Alice Angel sounds like she's crying, but it slowly turns into maniacal laughter, before she drops the elevator at the speed of Ballistic from Vs. Whitty Expurgation from the Full-Ass Tricky mod. Yes I put not one, but TWOa FNF mod referencesreference in here, sue me.
 
and here's the link to the video with the comment that inspired this shit pasta ok time to play Expurgation and break my fucking fingers: <nowiki>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e49AZXawr2w&t=46s</nowiki>{{Comments}}
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