All Gone (awful original version): Difference between revisions

{{AN|I tried my hardest to fix the punctuation shit in this. Was it necessary? I don't know. It's not really for my readers; it's more for me, 'cause I think reading the story in its original state is painful.'' '''BEWARE OF BAD FORMATTING!!!'''}}

==INTRODUCTION==

 

Nene replies with "He used some sort of potion on me, and it somehow worked."

 

Aiden Church was the younger brother of Alyssa. His stomach was ripped out and its contents were poured all over his face. He was also stabbed about 10-12 times.

Sheldon French could be seen kneeling down looking at Aiden's corpse. He had a somewhat worried look on his face. He tells us that he was not okay with

The Scotsman replies with "Ya evil Red Mist! I'll make sure ya pay for the damage you've caused all over da world! And I'll make doubly sure that all of yer victims are returned to their homes!"

 

 

When the static disappears, there is a shot of Sylia from the first scene (with the red eyes as usual) accompanied by this ominous text:

 

"Say your prayers, little one. Sylia is coming to get you, and she will take you for herself."

The final part of the video is of a hooded silhouette opening a door with a gun in its hand.

 

From what he told us, Alyssa and Sheldon approached him and asked him to make the All Gone video. He instead made storyboards and later placed the video onto the VHS Tape.

Alyssa later placed the tape on the doorstep of Robert Webster's home.

WEBSTER:

That doesn't sound impossible.

 

The second interview was with Mr. French.

Alyssa pulls out a gun and kills herself.

 

 

Investigator runs back into the room.

He's dead too. I have a photo of him taken from that twisted VHS tape Alyssa made.

 

 

DAD:

 

INVESTIGATOR:

 

DAD:

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