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{{AN|I tried my hardest to fix the punctuation shit in this. Was it necessary? I don't know. It's not really for my readers; it's more for me, 'cause I think reading the story in its original state is painful.'' '''BEWARE OF BAD FORMATTING!!!'''}}
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==INTRODUCTION==
 
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When the static disappears, there is a shot of Sylia from the first scene (with the red eyes as usual) accompanied by this ominous text:
 
 
 
"Say your prayers, little one. Sylia is coming to get you, and she will take you for herself."
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WEBSTER:
That doesn't sound impossible.
 
 
The second interview was with Mr. French.
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Alyssa pulls out a gun and kills herself.
 
{{*}}BOOM*
 
Investigator runs back into the room.
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He's dead too. I have a photo of him taken from that twisted VHS tape Alyssa made.
 
{{*}}Dad looks at the picture*
 
DAD:
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