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Ever got a sensation in your fingertips while holding a
weapon? I have…have... ever been close to murdering someone until they were nothing
but a trash- heap made of flesh, fragile tissue and blood?
 
I have…have....
 
It's been three days; nobody has seemed to notice a
difference in me. Of course being trapped in this fucking room with no social
contact with the outside world has been pretty rough since I got locked up in
this asylum…asylum... and of course the doctors not giving a fuck is pretty brutal.
 
But before I was locked up, I was a fairly good teenager I
may not have been the nicest guy around but I wasn't the dumbest at least…least... the
most I can say is I'm pretty smart…smart... not smart enough though cause if I was they
never would have found that body, if I just hid it well enough
 
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you a little "Insight" on my life my name is Samuel here's my fucking story.
 
Growing up things weren't exactly…exactly... what's the word I'm
looking for? Ah yes great, at home sure I had loving parents…parents... well if you call
a sick and twisted bastard of a father, and a lying cheating whore of a mother
"Loving" then I guess my fucking life was made!
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scream. I watched in horror with tears streaming down my cheeks as he ripped off
her clothes and took of his belt and tied her up with it, he took off his pants
and…and.... Well I think you get the idea he killed her then ditched her body
somewhere, although I'm not quite sure where…where... He never came back.
 
Soon daddy came home and hurt me he kept doing it and doing
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with. Her wavy golden hair, her beautiful sea glass green eyes and her stunning
smile, every guy in school wanted her I
didn't blame them…them... I wanted her too; fast forward a week later my obsession
with her only grew stronger. So I did what any guy would do I asked her out…out...
she accepted and soon she became my girlfriend, oh how the other guys envied me!
I was ecstatic especially since I had such a beautiful woman in my life. Things
were looking up…up... or so I thought, a while later another man swept her off her
feet and she broke up with me…me... for another man! I stood outside her window for
hours at night screaming that I still loved her, crying until my eyes fell out
of my skull she called the cops a few times. I couldn't take it anymore all the
hatred fueled my fire inside I was in rage…rage... I grabbed an old rusty knife I
found in the kitchen of the abandoned house and proceeded to walk to where she
lived, I finally made it to her place and looked up at her window, I saw her
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and she ran down the stairs thinking it was her parents, she stopped dead in
tracks when she saw me, I looked at her with tears streaming down my face and
asked her "Why don't you love me anymore? I still love you! I miss you! Please…Please...
take me back…back..."
 
She ran back up the
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the bed, I then kissed her passionately
 
"I love you Jolene…Jolene.... I love you so much beautiful" I said to
her while tears streamed down my cheeks as I held her.
 
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"N-no stop bleeding don't die my love!" I tried to stop the
bleeding, but then I remembered she was already dead…dead... I had to hide the body,
somewhere some place! So, I took her body to the creek where my mother was
killed, I wrapped her body in the blood soaked blankets and sheets; Then I
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window and yell things, I was the first suspect.
 
I ran to a different neighborhood, where I heard the voices…voices...
 
"Help…Help..."
 
"Suicide…Suicide...."
 
"Death…Death...."
 
"You hurt us…us..."
 
"YOU KILLED ME!"
 
"Die…Die..."
 
"Worthless..."
"Worthless…"
 
"Mistake..."
"Mistake…"
 
I have had enough "SHUT UP LEAVE ME ALONE!"
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He was shocked, and replied
 
"I'm not your dad buddy…buddy..."
 
"Daddy is mommy coming back?"
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"...."
 
I didn't know what to do…do... I saw something not human like,
whatever it was, was back from the dead, I screamed, soon I woke up in this
fucking asylum, apparently the cops identified the blood on my clothes as hers
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Anthony guy, that's what ended me up in the asylum, a few weeks I was still
hearing the voices in my head, still seeing things. All the electric shock
therapy, all the medication, it's not working…working...
 
This is the beautiful life I lived; now it's time I went to
sleep....
sleep….
 
Samuel R. Mooney,
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