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{{AN|This is a god-awful Pokepasta I wrote about a year ago. I am definitely ashamed of it. I have improved since then, so that's good. I guess.}}
I
It was a chilly Saturday afternoon in February. Snow and slush coated the roads, streets, and lawns. I was stuck inside. Nothing to do. Mom and Father were on a trip to Vancouver for the next week or so. (They had left yesterday.) I was a teenager, so they thought I was responsible enough to stay home alone.
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"Hey, Lucy." is what it read.
"
"I just wanted to let you know that you left your Pokémon Sun here."
"Oh, God.
"Sure, babe."
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"Thank you," I said and then hugged him, and gave him a kiss also.
"
"See you around," I said as he left.
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I started the game up. The regular roaring Solgaleo showed, and the menu popped up like normal.
There was one thing that was a bit off. The time read
In the grass of Wela Volcano Park.
Suddenly, everything about my past gameplay flooded back to me. I remembered that I had already caught Solgaleo (except it
I checked my party, without going in to see the sprites. Every one of my party Pokémon seemed normal. There was:
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I
exited that screen and begun wandering aimlessly through Wela Volcano Park. I had no Pokémon that knew fly (I mean, Decidueye ''could ''learn it, but I
The
creature that came before me was unlike any other one that I had encountered in
any game. It seemed to have no face, no limbs, not even a noticeable torso. It was all colorful, static-like glitch blocks. Its name was an absolute mess. "üÓ¥‐‼a4M?" is what it read. I
My character sent out Dusky since she was the first one in my party.
Unsure of what exactly I could do, I had Dusky use Fury Swipes. It
"üÓ¥‐‼a4M? Used Night Shade!"
Night Shade did a reasonable amount of damage to Dusky. She only had a sliver of health left. How?
When I went to see if I had any medicine, I saw that everything was gone. All of my healing items, my Pokeballs, my battle items, berries- everything. Gone.
I just
sighed and chose
"Dusky used Power Gem!"
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"üÓ¥‐‼a4M? (Glitch) Used Moongeist Beam!"
Dusky lost the rest of her health from that attack. She fainted.
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Afterward, I was given the option to either choose another Pokémon to fight or to flee the
battle. I tried to press
Wait, what?
Feeling a bit suspicious, I chose my next Pokémon to fight. Summer.
"Summer feels
I chose
The attack did nearly nothing.
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the screen went black, and- in a few seconds- I was back in Wela Volcano Park.
How could that be? All of my Pokémon fainted. Why
An eerie silence filled the area. The original music that had once played while exploring Wela Volcano Park was gone. Nothing remained. Just silence.
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me with unparalleled horror.
The usual red blocks that would appear by a
read
When I checked each
There were pixelated gashes in her throat and across her left eye, causing her to shut it. Her left paw was sickeningly torn apart, showing blood and muscles. It was almost if somebody had cut up her paw, and tore the flesh and fur off completely.
looked burned off, with only a small stump of them being left. There was a nauseatingly bloody gash in her right thigh.
with her tail, and she was missing her hands and eyes. Blood soaked her burned, torn stumps that were once her hands. She had no eyes. Just black pits.
Jangles entire torso was covered in small glitch blocks, like tiny bugs infesting a rotting animal carcass. Half of
I felt sick from what I saw, so I exited out. I tried to walk around and leave Wela Volcano Park because I
With every step I took. I text box showed up.
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''Why did you leave us there?''
''He
''He wanted something new. ''
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''He did this to us.''
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''And you let him? ''
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''How could you?''
''Did you want this to
My heart continued racing as I quietly read the text in silence.
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''Did you?''
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''YOU GAVE US UP TO HIM.''
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''DO YOU NOT LOVE US?''
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''YOU LEFT US THERE TO ROT.''
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Just then, everything froze. I
After a few seconds of the buzzing, the screen went black. My 3DS had turned itself off.
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With that note, I closed my 3DS and took out the Pokémon Sun game cartridge. I noticed that there was a split running down the sides and across the top. As much as I just wanted to get rid of it, I wanted to open up the split. So, I did.
The inside of the cartridge was rotted. I
I ran as fast as I could over to the woods behind my house. I ran deep into the woods until I
That night, I asked Max if he knew anything about my game being
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