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Something's in your house.
Something... alive.
You're the only one home, right?
No.
You're not.
Something's there...
You keep hearing it.
"Here I come."
"Here I come."
It sounds like a faint voice outside your house.
"Here I come."
It's getting louder now.
"Here I come."
The voice sounds like it's down the hallway.
"Here I come."
"Here I come."
The voice...
It's right outside of your room...
"I have come."
"I have come."
Silence.
Your door opens wide.
"I have come."
"FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
(If you're reading this story to your friend, you're supposed to kill them as you scream the last line)

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-* Something's in my house.
+* Something's in your house.
 * Something... alive.
-* I'm the only one home, am I not?
+* You're the only one home, right?
 * No.
-* I'm not.
+* You're not.
-* Something's here...
+* Something's there...
-* I keep hearing it.
+* You keep hearing it.
 * '''"Here I come."'''
 * '''"Here I come."'''
-* The voice sounds like a whisper.
+* It sounds like a faint voice outside your house.
 * '''"Here I come."'''
 * It's getting louder now.
 * <big>'''"Here I come."'''</big>
-* The voice sounds like it's down the hallway now.
+* The voice sounds like it's down the hallway.
 * <big>'''"Here I come."'''</big>
 * <big>'''"Here I come."'''</big>
-* The voice.
+* The voice...
-* It's right outside of my room.
+* It's right outside of your room...
 * '''"I have come."'''
 * '''"I have come."'''
 * Silence.
-* My door opens wide.
+* Your door opens wide.
 * '''"I have come."'''
 * <big>'''"FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"'''</big>
+* (If you're reading this story to your friend, you're supposed to kill them as you scream the last line)
-* (You die after this part.)
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