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Would die.

Valory woke up today feeling ~~essepically~~ pretty, today was the day she would tell Thomas how she felt about him and she knew he would feel the same way. It was that level of undying confidence Valory had obtained with the few short months she had known Thomas yet she was certain she loved him. She gathered her things and opened her door to greet a smiling Thomas...which was odd, he was smiling.

Valory woke up today feeling especially pretty, today was the day she would tell Thomas how she felt about him and she knew he would feel the same way. It was that level of undying confidence Valory had obtained with the few short months she had known Thomas yet she was certain she loved him. She gathered her things and opened her door to greet a smiling Thomas...which was odd, he was smiling.

"Good morning." Thomas exclaimed with the a more noticable than usual excitement.

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Thomas had broken the quaterbacks arm a year before losing the championship for the school, thats when everyone really feared Thomas the day he bent that 6'5" tall man's arm into a impossible position...he could never use it again. Now they were getting their revenge by "ruffing" Thomas up with their own special methods lead pipes, bats and even a few sludge hammers.

"Let us go this isn't right" Valory exclaimed "Ya I agree with Valor"- "NO ONE CARES WHAT YOU THINK ~~FAGGOT~~" The jock silenced Tyler immediatly and gazed upon Valory with hungry eyes.

"Let us go this isn't right" Valory exclaimed "Ya I agree with Valor"- "NO ONE CARES WHAT YOU THINK F*****" The jock silenced Tyler immediatly and gazed upon Valory with hungry eyes.

He slapped her with a unimagineable amount of force exclaiming "SHUT THE ~~FUCK~~ UP YOU DUMB ~~BITCH~~!"

He slapped her with a unimagineable amount of force exclaiming "SHUT THE F*** UP YOU DUMB B****!"

Thomas had been calm until that moment, every urge Thomas had surpressed was revived with more force than ever. Thomas had lost his humanity...

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Thomas...was victorious...

"....Hey Thomas...t-t-thanks f-for that."

"....Hey Thomas" Tyler spoke, "...t-t-thanks f-for that."

Thomas looked at Tyler for about fifteen seconds before a evil smile crept along his face.

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 Would die.
-Valory woke up today feeling essepically pretty, today was the day she would tell Thomas how she felt about him and she knew he would feel the same way. It was that level of undying confidence Valory had obtained with the few short months she had known Thomas yet she was certain she loved him. She gathered her things and opened her door to greet a smiling Thomas...which was odd, he was smiling.
+Valory woke up today feeling especially pretty, today was the day she would tell Thomas how she felt about him and she knew he would feel the same way. It was that level of undying confidence Valory had obtained with the few short months she had known Thomas yet she was certain she loved him. She gathered her things and opened her door to greet a smiling Thomas...which was odd, he was smiling.
 "Good morning." Thomas exclaimed with the a more noticable than usual excitement.
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 Thomas had broken the quaterbacks arm a year before losing the championship for the school, thats when everyone really feared Thomas the day he bent that 6'5" tall man's arm into a impossible position...he could never use it again. Now they were getting their revenge by "ruffing" Thomas up with their own special methods lead pipes, bats and even a few sludge hammers.
-"Let us go this isn't right" Valory exclaimed "Ya I agree with Valor"- "NO ONE CARES WHAT YOU THINK FAGGOT" The jock silenced Tyler immediatly and gazed upon Valory with hungry eyes.
+"Let us go this isn't right" Valory exclaimed "Ya I agree with Valor"- "NO ONE CARES WHAT YOU THINK F*****" The jock silenced Tyler immediatly and gazed upon Valory with hungry eyes.
-He slapped her with a unimagineable amount of force exclaiming "SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU DUMB BITCH!"
+He slapped her with a unimagineable amount of force exclaiming "SHUT THE F*** UP YOU DUMB B****!"
 Thomas had been calm until that moment, every urge Thomas had surpressed was revived with more force than ever. Thomas had lost his humanity...
@@ Line 115: / Line 115: @@
 Thomas...was victorious...
-"....Hey Thomas...t-t-thanks f-for that."
+"....Hey Thomas" Tyler spoke, "...t-t-thanks f-for that."
 Thomas looked at Tyler for about fifteen seconds before a evil smile crept along his face.