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Tyler sat at his desk petrified by the teacher's lackluster speech and allowed his eyes to gaze ~~apon~~ his peers. Juli Bernits looked

Tyler sat at his desk petrified by the teacher's lackluster speech and allowed his eyes to gaze upon his peers. Juli Bernits looked as beautiful as ever, she had always been beautiful but now that she was a junior in high school it just made her image all the more real.

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After almost getting caught glazing over her breast his eyes darted to Johnny Topples, The staple for the school joke was he was nicknamed "THE TOPPLER" for being able to "topple mountains" with his "rippling biceps" although nothing really stood out about him other than his stereotypical stupidity.

as beautiful as ever, she had always been beautiful but now that she was a junior in high school it just made her image all the more real.

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Moving on, Tyler's eyes gazed upon the school recluse...Thomas. Nothing per say was "wrong" with Thomas but he was a little odd, he answered question when called on him, did great in class, and was even a impressivly strong person, despite his small frame. He was nimble and could pack a punch that could make even the "mighty" toppler cry on the ground for his mother. The strange thing about Thomas other than the fact that he didn't talk, almost at all, was how he looked at you.

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After almost getting caught glazing over her breast his eyes darted to Johnny Topples, The staple for the school joke was he was nicknamed "THE TOPPLER" for being able to "topple mountains" with his "rippling biceps" although nothing really stood out about him other than his ~~sterotypical~~ stupidity.

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Moving on ~~Tylers~~ eyes gazed ~~apon~~ the school recluse...Thomas. Nothing per say was "wrong" with Thomas but he was a little odd, he answered question when called on him, did great in class, and was even a impressivly strong person, despite his small frame. He was nimble and could pack a punch that could make even the "mighty" toppler cry on the ground for his mother. The strange thing about Thomas other than the fact that he didn't talk, almost at all, was how he looked at you.

Expressionless...his face was void of any emotion in fact the only person I ever saw get anything out of him was the other "outsider" Valory, Valory Huddson.

Of course Tyler didn't think she was an outsider and neither did he about Thomas, he just believed that they were they kind of people who belonged somewhere else, that this ~~enviorment~~ wasn't designed for people of their distinction.

Of course Tyler didn't think she was an outsider and neither did he about Thomas, he just believed that they were they kind of people who belonged somewhere else, that this enviroment wasn't designed for people of their distinction.

Although, Tyler had always been mature he had to, his dad wasn't exactly a father figure and his mother was exhausted just standing up after her day. He had to take charge and become the parents they couldn't be. The bell rang ~~strinking~~ the end of eighth period, and as Thomas and Valory left in unison, Tyler stopped for a second to rethink his actions...but to no avail for he proceeded with chasing the two to catch up with them.

Although, Tyler had always been mature he had to, his dad wasn't exactly a father figure and his mother was exhausted just standing up after her day. He had to take charge and become the parents they couldn't be. The bell rang striking the end of eighth period, and as Thomas and Valory left in unison, Tyler stopped for a second to rethink his actions...but to no avail for he proceeded with chasing the two to catch up with them.

Valory could remember the first moment she met Thomas, he was sweeping his drive way and looked oh so cute doing so. Valory was attracted to Thomas yes, but it was oh so much more. He was a mystery, no one had ever known him and she wanted to be the first, and when she witnessed him remove his shirt to reveal, rippled muscles atop a scrawny, slightly pale figure...she couldn't help but blush.

Hiding her shame ~~immediatly~~ using her Geometry book as a ~~sheild~~ she attempted to progress forward. Peeking over her ~~indeffiant~~ ward of protection, she noticed Thomas hadn't even noticed her. Feeling like an idiot she said her first words to Thomas.

Hiding her shame immedietly using her Geometry book as a shield she attempted to progress forward. Peeking over her indeffinant ward of protection, she noticed Thomas hadn't even noticed her. Feeling like an idiot she said her first words to Thomas.

"HI!" In a burst of undying anxiety she relinquished all feelings into a one syllable word. feeling startled Thomas looked at her with shock and surprise, with the same expresonless face but this time...it had the faintest of expression, curiousty? Maybe, all Valory new was she was blushing and quivering but she had spoken to him so she would not stop until she was successful with a conversation.

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"Hi T-Thomas..I wanted to talk to you f-for a little bit, is that o-o-ok with you"?

Thomas for...possibly the first time since he was a child smiled, it was faint, weak, and died after he began to listen to her words, but her ~~nerviousness~~ and overall cute fumbling of words brought out a smile in him, hmm Thomas did think she was cute, not like the sluts who plauged his school, and every school in the country now-a-days but more innocent cute.

Thomas for...possibly the first time since he was a child smiled, it was faint, weak, and died after he began to listen to her words, but her nervousness and overall cute fumbling of words brought out a smile in him, hmm Thomas did think she was cute, not like the sluts who plauged his school, and every school in the country now-a-days but more innocent cute.

Innocence...Thomas was devoid of any of that for a long time now, not even this cute girl could bring that out...for it was long since dead. Thomas simple nodded giving permission for her to proceed with her conversation.

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-Tyler sat at his desk petrified by the teacher's lackluster speech and allowed his eyes to gaze apon his peers. Juli Bernits looked
+Tyler sat at his desk petrified by the teacher's lackluster speech and allowed his eyes to gaze upon his peers. Juli Bernits looked as beautiful as ever, she had always been beautiful but now that she was a junior in high school it just made her image all the more real.
+After almost getting caught glazing over her breast his eyes darted to Johnny Topples, The staple for the school joke was he was nicknamed "THE TOPPLER" for being able to "topple mountains" with his "rippling biceps" although nothing really stood out about him other than his stereotypical stupidity.
-as beautiful as ever, she had always been beautiful but now that she was a junior in high school it just made her image all the more real.
+Moving on, Tyler's eyes gazed upon the school recluse...Thomas. Nothing per say was "wrong" with Thomas but he was a little odd, he answered question when called on him, did great in class, and was even a impressivly strong person, despite his small frame. He was nimble and could pack a punch that could make even the "mighty" toppler cry on the ground for his mother. The strange thing about Thomas other than the fact that he didn't talk, almost at all, was how he looked at you.
-After almost getting caught glazing over her breast his eyes darted to Johnny Topples, The staple for the school joke was he was nicknamed "THE TOPPLER" for being able to "topple mountains" with his "rippling biceps" although nothing really stood out about him other than his sterotypical stupidity.
-Moving on Tylers eyes gazed apon the school recluse...Thomas. Nothing per say was "wrong" with Thomas but he was a little odd, he answered question when called on him, did great in class, and was even a impressivly strong person, despite his small frame. He was nimble and could pack a punch that could make even the "mighty" toppler cry on the ground for his mother. The strange thing about Thomas other than the fact that he didn't talk, almost at all, was how he looked at you.
 Expressionless...his face was void of any emotion in fact the only person I ever saw get anything out of him was the other "outsider" Valory, Valory Huddson.
-Of course Tyler didn't think she was an outsider and neither did he about Thomas, he just believed that they were they kind of people who belonged somewhere else, that this enviorment wasn't designed for people of their distinction.
+Of course Tyler didn't think she was an outsider and neither did he about Thomas, he just believed that they were they kind of people who belonged somewhere else, that this enviroment wasn't designed for people of their distinction.
-Although, Tyler had always been mature he had to, his dad wasn't exactly a father figure and his mother was exhausted just standing up after her day. He had to take charge and become the parents they couldn't be. The bell rang strinking the end of eighth period, and as Thomas and Valory left in unison, Tyler stopped for a second to rethink his actions...but to no avail for he proceeded with chasing the two to catch up with them.
+Although, Tyler had always been mature he had to, his dad wasn't exactly a father figure and his mother was exhausted just standing up after her day. He had to take charge and become the parents they couldn't be. The bell rang striking the end of eighth period, and as Thomas and Valory left in unison, Tyler stopped for a second to rethink his actions...but to no avail for he proceeded with chasing the two to catch up with them.
 Valory could remember the first moment she met Thomas, he was sweeping his drive way and looked oh so cute doing so. Valory was attracted to Thomas yes, but it was oh so much more. He was a mystery, no one had ever known him and she wanted to be the first, and when she witnessed him remove his shirt to reveal, rippled muscles atop a scrawny, slightly pale figure...she couldn't help but blush.
-Hiding her shame immediatly using her Geometry book as a sheild she attempted to progress forward. Peeking over her indeffiant ward of protection, she noticed Thomas hadn't even noticed her. Feeling like an idiot she said her first words to Thomas.
+Hiding her shame immedietly using her Geometry book as a shield she attempted to progress forward. Peeking over her indeffinant ward of protection, she noticed Thomas hadn't even noticed her. Feeling like an idiot she said her first words to Thomas.
 "HI!" In a burst of undying anxiety she relinquished all feelings into a one syllable word. feeling startled Thomas looked at her with shock and surprise, with the same expresonless face but this time...it had the faintest of expression, curiousty? Maybe, all Valory new was she was blushing and quivering but she had spoken to him so she would not stop until she was successful with a conversation.
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 "Hi T-Thomas..I wanted to talk to you f-for a little bit, is that o-o-ok with you"?
-Thomas for...possibly the first time since he was a child smiled, it was faint, weak, and died after he began to listen to her words, but her nerviousness and overall cute fumbling of words brought out a smile in him, hmm Thomas did think she was cute, not like the sluts who plauged his school, and every school in the country now-a-days but more innocent cute.
+Thomas for...possibly the first time since he was a child smiled, it was faint, weak, and died after he began to listen to her words, but her nervousness and overall cute fumbling of words brought out a smile in him, hmm Thomas did think she was cute, not like the sluts who plauged his school, and every school in the country now-a-days but more innocent cute.
 Innocence...Thomas was devoid of any of that for a long time now, not even this cute girl could bring that out...for it was long since dead. Thomas simple nodded giving permission for her to proceed with her conversation.