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body shielding my 10-year old brother unsuccessfully. Even from my spot on the

stairs, I could see his small, blood-covered hand poking out limply from

underneath my pale mother’s bloodless corpse.

The bile churned in my stomach as their killers, a boy

and a girl, continued swapping spit. I finally managed to get a good look at

them through my horrified haze, my heart thumping rapidly in my ears as I

looked the monsters up and down.

''What

''What''

the fuck?''

the fuck?

The scene only got more and more confusing as my

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on her skull.

''Again.

''Again.''

''

''Again.''

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couch, eyes stuck wide open. My breath left me all at once as I let out a heavy

sigh. Everything became clearer with each passing moment, the fuzziness slowly

ebbing away.

I looked down and my dinner fled my lips, splattering

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expecting me to high five him? For what?! I just murdered her!

''I

''I''

just murdered her. I just killed another human being.''

just murdered her. I just killed another human being.

The thought made me want to throw up again, but

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so stupid?

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 body shielding my 10-year old brother unsuccessfully. Even from my spot on the
 stairs, I could see his small, blood-covered hand poking out limply from
 underneath my pale mother’s bloodless corpse.
 The bile churned in my stomach as their killers, a boy
 and a girl, continued swapping spit. I finally managed to get a good look at
 them through my horrified haze, my heart thumping rapidly in my ears as I
 looked the monsters up and down.
-''What
+''What''
-the fuck?''
+the fuck?
 The scene only got more and more confusing as my
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 on her skull.
-''Again.
+''Again.''
-''
 ''Again.''
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 couch, eyes stuck wide open. My breath left me all at once as I let out a heavy
 sigh. Everything became clearer with each passing moment, the fuzziness slowly
 ebbing away.
 I looked down and my dinner fled my lips, splattering
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 expecting me to high five him? For what?! I just murdered her!
-''I
+''I''
-just murdered her. I just killed another human being.''
+just murdered her. I just killed another human being.
 The thought made me want to throw up again, but
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 so stupid?
 [[Category:MARY SUE ALERT]]
+[[Category:POINTLESS VIOLENCE TOTALLY MAKES IT SCARY U GUIZE]]
+[[Category:Pages with grammar that doesn't suck]]