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My arm fell limp at my side, the dehydration slowly getting too me. I looked around the room and coughed. It's been three days.
My arm fell limp at my side, the dehydration slowly getting too me. I looked around the room and coughed. It's been three days.


I had been stuck in this closet (''Maybe it's a cupboard'' I thought, chuckling) for the past three days, my already nearly empty water supply having been emptied the day before.
I had been stuck in this closet ("Maybe it's a cupboard" I thought, chuckling) for the past three days, my already nearly empty water supply having been emptied the day before.


Now, I could barely move because of how tired I was. How hungry I was. How thirsty I was.
Now, I could barely move because of how tired I was. How hungry I was. How thirsty I was.


''Why am I here?'' I thought wearily, licking my lips, thinking of how delicious a small cup of fresh water would be.
"Why am I here?" I thought wearily, licking my lips, thinking of how delicious a small cup of fresh water would be.


I leaned my head against the door area of this room. I had tried breaking it down on the first day after it wouldn't open, but that had failed.
I leaned my head against the door area of this room. I had tried breaking it down on the first day after it wouldn't open, but that had failed.
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Still, I heard barely anything, but their conversation was very... interesting.
Still, I heard barely anything, but their conversation was very... interesting.


''Are they talking about me?'' I thought with a quirked eyebrow, ''Or somebody else? Are they the reason I'm here?''
"Are they talking about me?" I thought with a quirked eyebrow, "Or somebody else? Are they the reason I'm here?"


I heard a pair of footsteps walk towards the door and put something on the ground.
I heard a pair of footsteps walk towards the door and put something on the ground.
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"Do what you want," the man behind the door chuckled, "Either way, the next time we come here, this room will smell of copper."
"Do what you want," the man behind the door chuckled, "Either way, the next time we come here, this room will smell of copper."
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Latest revision as of 04:48, 30 April 2024

My arm fell limp at my side, the dehydration slowly getting too me. I looked around the room and coughed. It's been three days.

I had been stuck in this closet ("Maybe it's a cupboard" I thought, chuckling) for the past three days, my already nearly empty water supply having been emptied the day before.

Now, I could barely move because of how tired I was. How hungry I was. How thirsty I was.

"Why am I here?" I thought wearily, licking my lips, thinking of how delicious a small cup of fresh water would be.

I leaned my head against the door area of this room. I had tried breaking it down on the first day after it wouldn't open, but that had failed.

That was when I heard it. Whispering from behind the door.

I shuffled more closely towards the door, pressing my ear against the thick wood.

"How... See... Die?" I was only able to catch small bits of the conversation, but I was glad to know there were people.

"Hel..." my throat was so dry, I could barely speak above a mumble. My eyes widened at this, and I tried kicking the door, but my lack of food and water had gotten to me, and my kick was barely audible.

I heard a different man laugh, and I paid more attention, "Give... Test... Collection... Advancements?"

Still, I heard barely anything, but their conversation was very... interesting.

"Are they talking about me?" I thought with a quirked eyebrow, "Or somebody else? Are they the reason I'm here?"

I heard a pair of footsteps walk towards the door and put something on the ground.

I heard two things slide under the door, and I hastily grabbed them, exerting more energy than I had into getting what had slid under the door. It was a small knife and a cloth.

"Do what you want," the man behind the door chuckled, "Either way, the next time we come here, this room will smell of copper."

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