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summer vacation as all the other schools had been released weeks earlier, but
Woodson Creek received a large amount of snow that winter so school was canceled
for a while due to the excessive amounts of snow.
Amber Lynch was one of the hundreds of students that attend
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Amber tried as hard as she could to be fit in with the group
of popular kids but her family comes from a rough background and is considered
older brother. None of the popular kids want to hang with Amber because she
lacks what the popular kids have. You know like, a mansion with a maid and
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ass faster than the speed of light.
But that
would do ''anything'' to even be
considered by the popular people! She would leave her best friends to be the
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her to fit in.
Amber skipped home because her mom
fares, and gas money has gone up recently so her brother
either. Her apartment was somewhat of a little while away but she
Amber as always loved being outside as she felt like she could escape reality
and find joy in the earth.
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Amber continued skipping down the sidewalk as she hears the
honk of a car horn next to her. The driver of the old 1988 Honda civic pulls
the sunglasses from his face and waves at Amber.
calls out
extra hours at the bar.
before I go.
side door and sits down, shutting the door behind her. Amber sets her things in
the backseat.
apartment and take care of your things for you.
cautiously asks her paranoid uncle.
he frantically scratches his neck. Amber nods and Cletus makes a U-turn as he
drives down the road.
A few minutes
Amber hops from the car.
Amber asks her uncle, trying to make it sound like she actually cares about
him. Uncle Cletus agrees and peels from the driveway.
Amber skips to
and Isabel swings open the door.
Amber hugs Isabel and skips into the living room and plops herself down on the
floor.
trip all of a
enthusiastic; I did this for you.
white teeth in
pack of people walk through the doors. The popular ones... The girls wear their
pink dresses with white heels almost as if
And the guys are attired with white t-shirts and preppy jock jackets.
Amber looks down at her clothing attire.
tank top, ripped up navy blue jeans along with old, worn out purple Chuck
Taylor's.
The girls walk over to Amber and glare down at her. Amber
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quickly slides herself from the couch and sits on the floor while the bomb
squad occupies all of the furniture in the room. Leaving only poor Amber
sitting by herself on the carpet with nobody even accepting the fact that
at the
After a few minutes of the girls talking fashion and the boys
discussing
looks to the smaller sofa and one of the jocks is glaring at Amber. Amber
giggles and rocks back and forth in her place.
turns her attention to the girl standing above her. The girl glares down at her
and tightens her grip around her Gucci bag.
girl. The boy then hops up and approaches Amber.
The boy then kneels down next to Amber
happens all the
nailed hand around the
begins to beat him with her purse! That bag must weigh quite some weight as god
knows how much unnecessary items she has in that thing.
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Amber awakes in a lightened room with many people standing
over her, none of who she recognizes.
out. Another face then comes in contact with
easily identify the newest face as her own mother as all the other figures back
away from where Amber is.
up popular girls hurt you!
senses that something is wrong with her but she
and I are asking around for money so that we can go to court against that girl
and her family that hurt you!
out?
which Amber can only assume are doctors.
hit your head and you managed to come in contact with the stem cell of your
decide which. But the only way to prevent it spreading to your other eye was to
remove your eye.
Amber jerks up from the bed and sits up. She looks at the men
and women wearing white lab coats in the room.
you!
expression and not worrying too much.
face. Her left eye is covered with a medical bandage taped to her forehead.
Amber slowly reaches for the patch and begins to lift the bandage, peeling the
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The small strands of tape releases from her skin and she
slowly moves the patch from her eye. Amber is able to see where her eye should
be, but
body. Amber slowly lets out a smile and a little giggle.
know who did this mother?
shouts as she grinds her teeth together and stares into the eyes of her mother.
Amber then throws the mirror to the ground as the glass shatters and everyone
in the room let out a shriek of horror.
One of the doctors then walks over to the mother.
Lynch, we would like to keep her here for the next few days so that we can
monitor her behavior and give her the proper amount of medicine.
shoulder of the doctor
purse and gray hoodie before walking over to Amber a final time. The mother
softly kisses Amber on her forehead.
check up on you.
room.
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bed and Amber turns her head to the man.
cuts himself off as he tries not to bring up the topic
How are you feeling?
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you feeling,
nametag.
page and begins to write some.
then lays back in bed and stares at the ceiling, crossing her hands on her
stomach.
house, Isabel Smith. And the
accused me of flirting with their boy toy and then started hitting that one
boy. I tried to help him, but the girl; Marcie. She hit me and I tripped over
the carpet and hit my head. That is all I can remember.
little bit.
Converse. He was friendly!
my mom works at this dirty bar for 3 bucks an hour! I still
are going to be able to afford this. Doctor, you see we
We got no money, nothing!
something like that.
boys and e-mails.
Amber belches out laughing
who lives alone eating Ramen Noodles and watching porn all day!
and shakes her head. The doctor stands above Amber and glares down at her.
The doctor replies. He then begins to mess with the bed a little bit and Amber
feels her wrists begin tightened some. She looks down and notices that her
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The doctor slowly makes his way to Amber. He stands next to
her, rubbing his hand up and down her right arm.
pornography all
hops on the bed, sitting on top of Amber; Mr. Wallis then leans down right by
Amber tries to scream. Mr. Wallis throws his palm over her
mouth preventing her from screaming. Amber chomps down on his skin, drawing
blood as
Mr. Wallis moves his hands away and fumbles with
bags. He grabs a syringe from the cord of the bag and moves the needle near
into her bloodstream.
Amber becomes dreary and tired. She takes heavy blinks of her
only eye left. Amber can feel the warmth of Mr.
bottom of her hospital gown and to her waist. Amber furiously tries to get the
restraints loose; she can feel the doctor rip the gown off of her cold, tired
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The metal from the belt of the doctor clanks together as he
lets out a small laugh. Amber tries to move her body but
realizes that the syringe
to put together some letters of the writing and realize that
that she
No medicine anyone really needs.
groping Amber and turns to the bag
paralyzes the muscles for a short while. But of course I gave you a much higher
dose than the legal standards allow.
He might think
body waking up; her limbs, arms and legs.
the side of the hospital bed as the
body. Doctor Wallis gropes
the drugs coursing through her blood force her to barely breathe.
The doctor rips the
nightgown off of Amber and pulls off his medical jacket and blue polo. The
doctor then begins to slowly rape Amber. Amber knows nobody can hear
nobody is going to magically walk through the door and be her knight in shining
armor.
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groans at the same time. Amber frantically moves her slow and cold fingers
around to find something to get the man off of her! The doctor seems to notice
Amber doing so. The doctor wraps his fat right hand around
Tears flood from the eyes of Amber as she is vulnerable to anything the doctor
wants.
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Amber is surprised by the
touch of an object on her right pinky finger. She quickly realizes what it is.
The doctor tightens his grip on
companion of oxygen and the doctor shows no sign of stopping.
Amber presses what she can
make conclusion of what is a
lets go of
A knock is at the
was the right button after all. The doctor immediately looks at the door and
Amber smiles in relief. Mr. Wallis continues to rape her as another voice comes
into the conversation.
all right?
I guess she pressed the wrong button!
is able to locate the remote; Amber slams her ring finger against the button,
holding down the nurse button.
The doctor bangs on the
door again
the remote that Amber now controls. Dr. Wallis detaches the remote from the
Velcro strap that the white remote is attached to. Wallis throws the remote to
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The nurses feel over
Doctor Wallis has left the room. Amber is able to speak again.
Amber mumbles to one of the nurses. The nurse quickly peeks under the white
sheet that guards Amber.
The nurse throws the sheet
back over Amber and begins to yell at her nurses
screams. The other two nurses rush out of the room to find Dr. Wallis.
shakes Amber trying to get a response.
face into the lap of Amber, crying and coughing.
to sob and choke on her dried up tears. Another figure then immediately rushes
into the room. A doctor walks into the room and fumbles with
hospitals in this state!
her!
Amber turns her attention back to the sorrowful
nurse.
quick look before both of them turn to Amber.
Amber slowly nods and cries again.
nurse speaks
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the proper medication and treatment for a discount, if her family agreed to
keep their mouths shut about the whole ordeal while the police department
searched for the rapist who impersonated
Amber is now occupying room 009 of the Woodson
Creek Rehab Center. Amber has been continually thinking about her meeting with
her rapist and how she could have seen it coming. Amber
off her attacker as he was much stronger and bigger than Amber had ever been.
An Asian woman wearing an old, navy blue
nursing outfit steps into the room wheeling in a tray of assorted foods along
with
nurse cheerfully smiles showing off her rotted and blackened teeth. Sitting up
from the small bed, Amber moves her IV bag along the floor and sits on the edge
of the small mattress. The nurse fiddles around with
liquid medication into a now drained bag.
The nurse then inserts the IV needle into
arm, right next to her vain.
flashing colors of white and grey.
Amber slowly asks the middle-aged woman
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by
laughs and the nurse
sets the food tray on the bed as she refuses eye contact with Amber and the
nurse soon leaves the room.
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Amber sits back on the bed, criss crossing her
legs and stares down at the food. Amber picks up the small, musty orange and
tosses it back and forth between her hands.
mold?
bed and it slowly rolls to the dirt carpeted floor.
A certain noise floods
becomes rather confused. The noise is almost like a faint buzzing but slowly
turns into something
faint screams echoing throughout her brain. Amber lunges herself to a sitting
position and stares all around the room, looking for the source of the noise.
Through the glossy window on her
down the hallway and scream, some of them covered with blood splatter all over
their clothing!
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Amber pushes the food tray off of her and
frantically walks to the door and stares into the hallway. An orange and yellow
flame is emerging from somewhere down the
doorknob and wiggles the doorknob around violently but to her surprise, the
door has been locked!
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horror, banging her arm and fist on the door trying to get the attention of the
staff as more and more nurses and doctors rush down the hallway trying to
escape the fire and none of them come to
''Maybe I
can break the glass?!'' Amber
thinks to herself. Amber roughly throws her elbow against the door, hoping to
and bang against the door. Amber slowly turns to the room and looks for
something to help with her escape!
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A small, fragile chair sits in the corner of
the room. Amber tugs at the chair before shortly realizing that the chair has
been bolted to the ground!
screams, looking for more supplies.
The fire crackles and roars through the corridor
of the Rehab Center. Amber throws the bed sheets off the bed, looking for
something to help her. Amber quickly realizes something could help
Amber pulls the dirty pillow from the bed,
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The IV system is hooked up in a corner of the
room and the long tube that connects the needle to
air. Amber rips the needle from her arm and runs to the IV system. The fire
enrages and grows louder and brighter as it grows closer and closer to
room.
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roaring fire burning down the room next to her and the fire slowly moves itself
down the hallway. Amber rushes from the fire and to the door at the end of the
hallway with big white letters reading
door.
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with a white vest.
back from the attacker as far as she is able to before the man drags Amber
closer to
screams and kicks Dr. Wallis off of her and Dr. Wallis falls to the ground.
Amber runs out of the room and to the fire exit. Amber swings open the door before
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Dr. Wallis grabs Amber by her hair and begins
to drag Amber to the fire. Dr. Wallis then throws Amber on the ground before
staring at her in the eye.
Center.
over the place. Dr. Wallis grabs
of burning furniture. Wallis then drops her arm into the flames as
is burnt and scarred with the fire.
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Amber rips her teeth from the now bloody hand
and she spits Dr.
himself on top of Amber, with blood dripping onto
Wallis places his sweaty hands around the neck of Amber Lynch.
Dr. Wallis barks at Amber as he tightens his grip on her, Amber struggles for
breath as she gasps and spits blood.
Dr. Wallis asks Amber. Dr. Wallis releases his hands from Amber as Amber coughs
and regains her breath.
Wallis pulls a single pistol on Amber and aims
the firearm at her skull.
Brett yells
that he really could be her father.
Brett continues to aim the pistol at Amber as
he shows no sign of mercy. Amber stands from the ground and stares at Brett as
he stares back; observing
with her bloody teeth as Brett takes a step back.
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Brett points the gun to Amber again. Amber
swings her hand at
spills onto
falls to the ground with Amber on top of him. Brett screams and yells in pain
from his missing eye.
reaches for
Brett in his other eye with the pistol.
bloody as Amber continues to hit and bash her so-called
Brett then stops
stares down at the blood soaked body of her father before standing up once
more. Amber aims the gun at Brett, hopping that he can see her one final
may be blind, father.
you know...
clothing.
the gun.
Center was burnt to the ground as a result of a fire that has been determined
no accident!
was found at source of the fire which the bottle was most likely the result of
a Molotov cocktail that was the cause of the fire. Fourteen victims were killed
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died rescuing civilians. And the other two were civilians who have been
identified as the attackers by the names of Brett Lynch and his brother, Cletus
Lynch.
shocked.
footage was able to be tracked down with the tape being found in a trash can
nearby. Reviewing the footage shows a patient of the institution killing
another civilian. That civilian killed, being Brett Lynch. The footage also
shows a woman with one
with the girl getting the footage.
Amber sits in front of the TV of her apartment,
watching the news report. The body of her mother and brother lying on the ground
soaked in blood. A picture of Amber then emerges on the TV.
this woman, please contact local authorities immediately. My name is Jessica
Anderson, signing out!
Amber stands from the worn out couch and lets
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bloody pistol from the couch before turning to the TV one more time.
that prick Marcie!
show everyone!
and bashes the glass with the pistol; the old rusted glass shatters instantly
as Amber climbs through the window and down the fire
hunt for her revenge as she insists that her name will not be forgotten.
And everyone she comes across that has caused
her
life while you are beaten and battered, soaked and covered in your own blood!
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