Eyes Are Cliche

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Kinda gross story that describes gore in detail, read with caution.



He just started putting the barbed needle into my eye. There's a delicate precision involved, if I weren't being tortured I'd say it's graceful. The needle didn't hurt too much, actually, at first. It was like being pricked by a thorn bush, so it just felt like a tiny piercing pain in a few places, but then some blood got on my retina. It burns, I can feel the liquid rubbing against my retina, oozing onto the inner walls of my eye. My pupils contract, it makes the pain worse. It feels like my eye has been scraped raw and yet he hasn't even started scraping yet. It's difficult to bring them back to normal with the barbs, it's like... well, ripping barbed wire from your eye.

Before he scrapes he pokes the retina with the needle, blinding me for a second, and of course making my eye feel like it's just been bathed in sea salt. Then he takes his barbed needle, dips it in capsaicin, and stabs it in just a little, and scrapes it along the walls of my eye slowly and imprecisely, each revolution around the inner wall takes about 30 minutes. It feels like I've had my eye caught in the garbage disposal. Once in a while he stabs it in deeper, and twists the barbed needle in spiraling motion, which comes with the sickening wet squish sound. I'm crying blood at this point.

Then there's taking the barbed needle out... He doesn't really take it out, he more or less just rips it out of one spot in my eye with a jerking motion, and puts it into another. It feels like having my eye stabbed by a fork several times. When he puts it back it, he makes sure to twist it in slowly after a quick stab in. It's like having a drill bit trapped in your eye, while it's still on.

When he's finally done with his sadistic game, he goes to the least painful part, which is sewing my eyelid shut. It isn't very painful, in comparison to the other things he's done. However, it's not over. I hear the worst possible thing to hear right now...

"Now, for the other eye..."

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