Jimmy McKill: Difference between revisions

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"Chuck, what the hell are you doing?" Jimmy screams. "What the hell is going on? What the hell did you do?"
 
"What did I do? What did I do?" Chuck asks, confused. "What do you mean? I've been trying to kill you for years, Jimmy. "
 
Jimmy breaks down crying, sobbing uncontrollably.
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I immediately ran and jumped out of the window of my apartment, hitting the hard concrete ground. I had never felt so much pain in my life. I immediately started puking, before the contents of my stomach came up. I continued to puke for a good ten minutes, before I felt my body stop.
 
I woke up in the hospital, feeling like I don't even exist. A doctor enterentered the room and explained that I had suffered a hemorrhaging of the brain, and if I had waited any longer, I would have died. I just stared at him blankly. I didn't know what the hell he was talking about. I had no idea how I had gotten from my apartment to the hospital. He then wishes me well and decides to play something on the TV. I was so out of it that I didn't even realize anything was happening until I heard the Better Call Saul main theme playing. Just hearing it put me into a frenzy. I start to have a seizure and fall off my bed, while experiencing massive brain bleed. I see a dark shadow over me. I then hear someone say my name. "JIMMY!" the voice yells, before my entire world fades to black.
 
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