Loid's Revenge: Difference between revisions

I started wandering around, looking for another way, but before I could find much a textbox suddenly appeared saying "Ninten. I need more bottle rockets. Let's go back to the Little Sweet's Factory." It was a long way back, but I figured that was supposed to be a hint if players got stuck and trekked back. I went back to where I'd found the first two bottle rockets, and found that there was in fact another one there. I took it, but nothing seemed to happen. I was confused, but suddenly remembered the building that got blown up, and hurried to check on it.

I was a bit unsettled, but mostly at a loss for what to do next. I started exploring the area around the train station again, but Loid again said "Ninten. I need more bottle rockets. Let's go back to the Little Sweet's Factory." I was kind of annoyed, since this hadn't done much the last time, and didn't want more inventory space taken up by rockets Loid refused to use in battle. I decided to keep exploring for a while before trekking all the way back there, but Loid shortly said the same thing. I again ignored him, and a few steps later he said the same thing. His dialogue got more and more frequent, until he was saying it literally every step. I couldn't decide if I was more frustrated or unsettled, but I knew I wanted to shut him up, so I made the horribly slow journey back to the factory. He stopped when we entered the factory, but I figured I'd better go ahead and get a bottle rocket. Sure enough, there was one, though I had to throw away some bread Loid was carrying for it.

The text "You engaged the Horrible Bully and its cohorts!" was displayed, along with three sprites of scared-looking children and a horrified-looking teacher. I was prompted to choose Ninten's move, and just selected run. I didn't get to choose Loid's move, though, and the game just immediately said that Ninten failed to get away. Loid then attacked one of the kids and got a smashing hit. The game said "The Horrible Bully A got what was coming to him!" and the kid's sprite vanished as though defeated. On the enemies' turns, the game said "Horrible Bully B cried like a baby! Horrible Bully C fell over! The Neglectful Teacher pleaded with Loid to stop! No effect on Loid!" Terrified, I tried to run again on the next turn, but again failed to get away. Loid then attacked, got another smashing hit, and took out "Horrible Bully B." Horrible Bully C then cried like a baby, and the Neglectful Teacher "tried to protect Horrible Bully C!" I tried to think of something I could do on the next turn to stop Loid, but could think of nothing, so I just tried to run again, but, again, failed. Loid then took out the Neglectful Teacher, and the Horrible Bully C "begged for mercy! No effect on Loid!" I halfheartedly tried to run again, expecting nothing, and nothing was what I got. Loid finished off the last Horrible Bully, and, after saying "Horribe Bully C got what was coming to him!" the game said, instead of "You won!", "Loid took his revenge!"

Another battle began, and the game said "The Victim suddenly attacked!" with a sprite of an angry Loid. I immediately tried to run, but, of course, it didn't work. Loid dealt a surprising amount of damage with his first hit, but not nearly enough to take out Ninten. Instead, I just kept guarding until he whittled my HP down, and then used PSI LifeUp. This went on for a long time, but I soon realized that the battle wasn't going to end if I kept this up. So, reluctantly, I attacked Loid. He took fairly heavy damage, and said "I should've known you were just like everyone else." I continued fighting him, knowing he wouldn't stand a chance with my healing PSI. He said something similar after every turn. Finally, I got a smashing hit on him, and the game said "The Victim succumbed to years of abuse!" and Loid's sprite vanished, as though defeated. The game skipped the "You won!" entirely, and just returned to the overworld.

I left Thanksgiving and never came back. Without Loid in my party, the train guard let me pass. I went to Snowman and got Ana in my party. She said she thought I looked like I needed a good friend. No one ever mentioned Loid. We went into Halloween's haunted manor and got the fourth Melody. Just as I entered a room, however, I saw Loid rushing out the door opposite. I froze, terrified, wondering if he were a ghost or just following me, not really dead. I tried to chase after him, but didn't see him again. When I exited the manor, Ana asked what was wrong, but Ninten didn't seem to reply.

Anyway, I continued back to the first train station and started trying to make my way to Easter, to look for Ana's mom. I crossed the desert, got the next Melody, and found myself in Magicant by way of the Monkey's Grotto. The only odd thing that happened was, when I went into the caves for the next Melody, I again just barely caught sight of Loid running off screen. It freaked me out again, but I just got the Melody and quickly left Magicant.

Mt. Itoi was grueling, of course, but I fought through it. Teddy got very strong very quickly, so we managed. Everyone got better weapons, too, and Ana learned PK Fire Ω, so we were looking pretty strong by the time we got out of the caves. I found the healer's house soon, and rushed to it, as we'd been getting worn down. I approached the back room after healing and saving, and Teddy said he'd let Ninten and Ana be alone and crash on the couch. Ninten and Ana danced together, and said that they like each other. Just as I was d'awwwwing, Teddy rushed into the room and shouted "Guys, get out, quick! It's that freak!" Before I had time to really register this, a battle started, and I nearly screamed.

The fight then ended. I wasn't given the usual game over scene, though. Instead, it showed Ninten lying on the ground, with the message "Loid's revenge is now complete." This lingered for a moment, before the screen faded to black, and returned to the title screen. When I went to select I file, mine was gone, and all three slots just said "new game." I just stared, both disturbed and frustrated by the abrupt ending. Was that really the end of Mother?

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