Minecraft's Hellish Heaven

It was an ordinary day for me, I got back from school, did my homework, and got onto Minecraft.

I took all my texture packs off, I hadn't really recognized the original look. So I loaded my game. But, while it was loading it said "Loading Number 15603" I was guessing that it was just an error in the script.

When I got on, I decided to make a portal to the Nether, a place in Minecraft which would be similar to Hell. I got all my materials, built the shape, and struck the bottom with my flint.

To my surprise, nothing happened, I even tried it 2-5 times. I made sure my frame was right, I thought "Oh, silly me, I forgot one space" so I fixed it, struck the bottom, grabbed my gear, and entered the portal.

When I walked into the Portal, instead of a swirly screen, it turned to a black screen with red large, letters which seemed to be bleeding "LOADING YOUR HELL"

I thought this was VERY strange, but I continued, when I finally got into the Nether, nothing was right. All the Lava was water, all the Netherrack was turned white, the Ghasts were Angels, as were the Pigmen, I thought to myself "What the hell?" Then I looked up...

TNT was falling from everywhere, I ran, but I didn't make it, to my surprise I had 1/2 of a heart left. when I looked back at the area, It turned back into a hell, a Hell more frightening than the Nether itself. The Netherrack had turned to a bloodish color, and were bleeding, the Lava was now blood, the Angels were now flying beast of no nature known to man, the Pigmen were Imps. I was in a true Hell.

I walked around for a bit, but everything seemed to ignore me. All of them had the same face when I looked at them, an angry, snarling face they would also growl at me. When I walked far enough, I saw a mirror. I was turned back, and saw something that I couldn't believe. I saw my own clone. It was the exact opposite of me, though. It's eyes glowing red, his hair a deep black, his teeth like a vampire's. He pulled out a sword on me, it was not wooden, or iron, or gold, or even Diamond. It was Obsidian with blood all over it. He struck me, and I fought back, all the monsters joined him, the blood rivers rose, we eventually started to float. When I was nearly dead, everything stopped, and I couldn't do anything. My clone stared at me, and said "You're DEAD. You've BEEN DEAD" in a some-what demonic voice. Then he opened his hideous mouth and screeched, my ears were ringing, then all of the monsters joined with him. I wanted to shut it off, but I just couldn't I was too shocked. My clone then continued to kill me.

I had died, but I didn't get a normal "Respawn" screen, I had instead gotten a creepy screen that had the face of my clone all over it, and the Respawn button said "HELL" of course, I clicked on it. What I saw seemed like a security camera, my clone was carrying me into what looked like a torture room. He first put me down on a table, and cut my eye out, and ripped my ears off, I heard a bloodcurdling scream, he picked me up again and put me ontop of a giant spike, and again I screamed, once again, he picked me up, and shoved his hand into my chest, ripped out my heart, and threw me in acid. He then walked out of the door with my heart, still beating very quickly. I heard "Here you are, my lord. He is dead. We will find the owner tomorrow"

I closed my computer. and I cried. I had no idea what happened.

The next day, I woke up, and got on my computer again. I loaded up Minecraft, and went on the same world again. It was in normal vision, but I was still in an acid tank, I saw skin float to the top, then my clone walked in and said "Number 15603 is coming too. He knows." Then my power went out. I heard a tapping at my window, tap-tap-tap-tap. I looked.

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