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{{AN|This was deleted from the Creepypasta wiki, and I neither question nor protest that at all. It fact, the original author’s note read, “For the record, I know this isn’t so much creepy as it is weird.” I contend that it’s not poorly written, just bizarre and a poor fit for Creepypasta. Fellow Creepypasta member Dorkpool did a hilarious job riffing this on his website dedicated to ragging on bad or strange creepypastas, so check it out- http://dorkpoolriffs.weebly.com/new-riffs/creepypasta-riffs-s2-tanks-for-the-exhilaration}}
 
Having gotten the breath knocked out of him as a result of the last tackle, Frederickson walked to the sideline. He was the team’s current starting quarterback, a role he excelled at. As a result he was the team’s new star, the latest golden boy to have his butt kissed perpetually. It seemed that no amount of praise was too extravagant, and even the most minor of criticisms brought howls of outrage, as if his life and family had been threatened. Some fans and commentators had resorted to trashing his predecessors, who had given the best they had to the franchise, in order to prop him up. They neither understood nor cared that bringing someone down to elevate another only demeaned everyone, including the one they were trying to elevate. Frederickson had not handled this treatment well. He was becoming more arrogant and full of himself, and he had begun losing his temper over the most meaningless and harmless of uncomplimentary remarks. Some sports critics, and even many of his own teammates, viewed him as a diva. Others feared how he’d react if his supporters turned on him like they had the ones before him.
 
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