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"...Well, um, it's kind of a long story... But, I guess all I can say is that he was something like, a deformed, abysmal being that lurks inside the house to this day, he's more of some riddle wrapped around an enigma, around a please and thank you. A nightmare that you can't wake up from, he's-"
 
A loud crash explodes from the clouds. It’sIt's so strong; it momentarily lit up the place, making it seem like day for a split second. .
 
"Another one?" Moaned Billy, "Shit, now how am I supposed to get waisted?"
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"Looks like." Brian responded.
 
They go down to the living room again, armed with flashlights. They look at the clock. Danm! It’sIt's 12:35am already!
 
"Should I call mom? I think she's really worried about me." Natasha asks.
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Another bright flash of lightning.
 
They looked between the trees again and they see it. It’sIt's somebody else. And he’she's running towards them fast. He runs like hell. He runs like he just got out of prison.
 
Their hearts begins to thump as their minds goes blank. He’sHe's getting closer. What should they do?
 
They see a gleam in his hand and I realize what he’she's holding. It was a big, deadly knife.
 
They scream as they regain control of their bodies. Billy slams the door shut as he was inches away from the porch and quickly locked it.
 
They don’tdon't know what to do next.
 
He kicks the door hard. The sound reminds them of thunder.
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He kicks again.
 
Nothing’sNothing's gonna happen if they just stand here, waiting to be impaled.
 
They run upstairs. They look around frantically for Scott and Cassandra.
 
They don’tdon't even know who they're looking for.
 
They hear it again. He wants to get in. He’sHe's hungry for a kill.
 
What if they tell him they're gonna call the police? Would that scare him? Maybe it’sit's too late. They begin panicking. They should stick to my plan.
 
They see the perfect weapon. A crowbar. Brian picks it up. Should he go back to the living room and wait for him to break the door? No. that’sthat's suicide. They’llThey'll just hide here. Besides, it’sit's not easy to break down that door.
 
Suddenly, he stops trying to break it. Why did he stop? Has he given up? Maybe. Wait. No. the back door!
 
Brian dashed back downstairs, hoping it’sit's not too late. He hold his weapon tightly. Whatever comes, Brian's ready. At least, that’sthat's what he told myself. Brian ran past the living room and into the kitchen. The rain keeps getting more horrible as the wind dominates his hearing.
 
And Brian notices something. He wasn't coming through the backdoor... But around the house.