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praised her. "You're so good at killing."

"Their time was up," ~~‘Clockwork~~' said, and I could

"Their time was up," 'Clockwork' said, and I could

hear the grin without even needing to see her. My fingers curled around the handle

of the softball bat. How fucking dare she? I bet she thought she was really

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like they fucking owned the place.

I came upon ~~‘Clockwork~~' and I swung the bat. The boy

I came upon 'Clockwork' and I swung the bat. The boy

with paper white skin noticed me far too late to warn her. The steel bat crashed

down on the girl's skull as I screamed. How dare she?! How dare she?! She

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the room as he fell as well, knocked out.

I turned back to ~~‘Clockwork~~', who was on her side,

I turned back to 'Clockwork', who was on her side,

breathing shallowly, her one eye-half glazed over in pain. She was awake. Good.

Good. I wanted her to be. I swung the bat again, screaming and bringing it down

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My head jerked up so fast it dizzied me. It was the

boy. He shakily rose to his feet and his unblinking eyes looked down at what

used to be ~~‘Clockwork~~'.

used to be 'Clockwork'.

"Guess ''her ''time

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I let the steel bat clatter at my feet, falling to the

floor and landing in the expanding pool of blood created by ~~‘Clockwork~~'s head.

floor and landing in the expanding pool of blood created by 'Clockwork's head.

One thought stuck out in my mind more than any other.

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 praised her. "You're so good at killing."
-"Their time was up," ‘Clockwork' said, and I could
+"Their time was up," 'Clockwork' said, and I could
 hear the grin without even needing to see her. My fingers curled around the handle
 of the softball bat. How fucking dare she? I bet she thought she was really
@@ Line 57: / Line 57: @@
 like they fucking owned the place.
-I came upon ‘Clockwork' and I swung the bat. The boy
+I came upon 'Clockwork' and I swung the bat. The boy
 with paper white skin noticed me far too late to warn her. The steel bat crashed
 down on the girl's skull as I screamed. How dare she?! How dare she?! She
@@ Line 65: / Line 65: @@
 the room as he fell as well, knocked out.
-I turned back to ‘Clockwork', who was on her side,
+I turned back to 'Clockwork', who was on her side,
 breathing shallowly, her one eye-half glazed over in pain. She was awake. Good.
 Good. I wanted her to be. I swung the bat again, screaming and bringing it down
@@ Line 98: / Line 98: @@
 My head jerked up so fast it dizzied me. It was the
 boy. He shakily rose to his feet and his unblinking eyes looked down at what
-used to be ‘Clockwork'.
+used to be 'Clockwork'.
 "Guess ''her ''time
@@ Line 122: / Line 122: @@
 I let the steel bat clatter at my feet, falling to the
-floor and landing in the expanding pool of blood created by ‘Clockwork's head.
+floor and landing in the expanding pool of blood created by 'Clockwork's head.
 One thought stuck out in my mind more than any other.