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[[File:Patience.png|thumb|A sprite of Patience I just made]]
hey this bad pasta has spoilers for Undertale, and swearing so uh yeah be warned
 
Ok honestly, what the actual fuck was I thinking when I wrote this? This was based off a idea I had in a Youtube comment section, when someone had a theory about what would happen if Chara had died on impact when falling into The Underground, with Asriel finding Chara's dead corpse. Someone mentioned that the "shit's straight out of a creepypasta". And that gave me the idea to write this abomonationabomination. Which I never finished.
[[File:Efrgthyujhtgrfcdvgbhnjki filter name.png|thumb|The comment(s) that inspired me to write this]]
 
And it's probably a good thing that I never finished it, because like the title says, it sucks. Unfortunately I don't have the original text file, but I do remember some of it. So here is the fucked up piece of shit I wrote when I was like 12.
 
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Then the Chara jumpscare that appears at the end of the genocide route when you choose not to destroy the world happened, but with Patience. But on the last frame...Patience's sprite looked like it was crying. I was scared, but relieved since the Chara jumpscare causes the game to crash, but instead of the game crashing, it went back to my last save point in the ruins. I went back to the room with the Toy Knife, but Patience was gone. I went to Toriel's house, but I heard screaming, and Toriel wasn't there. I went down the stairs and saw a pile of dust where Toriel would normaly be.
 
And that's it! That's the end of this piece of fucking shit. I have no words. I posted this onto a reply section of a comment on Youtube, but I then deleted it realizing how stupid the story was. If you wanna make a better, or at least decent version of this story that's actually finished, be my guest. Also the part where Patience starts crying and it slowly turns into laughter is based off of (Bendy Chapter 3 spoilers here) the end of Chapter 3 of Bendy and the Ink Machine, where Alice Angel sounds like shesshe's crying, but it slowly turns into maniacal laughter, before she drops the elevator at the speed of Ballistic from Vs. Whitty Expurgation from the Full-Ass Tricky mod. Yes I put not one, but TWO FNF mod references in here, sue me.
 
and here's the link to the video with the comment that inspired this shit pasta ok time to play Expurgation and break my fucking fingers: <nowiki>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e49AZXawr2w&t=46s</nowiki>
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