Talk:Sonic.exe/@comment-24318263-20140612183156/@comment-68.73.145.72-20140803200851

Ok, let me correct your scoring system, as cliches aren't the only things to measure how good or bad the pasta is.

1 cliche= - 1 point

An unlogical beginning = - 5 points

A no-hook beginning = - 5 points

Dumb wording = - 10 points

Dumb hero/heroine = - 10 points

Unoriginal/overused idea = - 5 points

All-powerful villain = - 10 points

Terrible ending = - 10 points

Bad plot = - 5 points

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What this totals up to and why:

40 cliche uses = - 40 points

An unlogical beginning ( If Kyle had the five or so minutes to write the letter, he would have the minute to destroy the disc) - 5 points

A no hook beginning - 5 points

Dumb wording ( It was when I read that message while looking at Sonic when it hit me, I realized {dumb word choice} right there and then.

This Sonic was a monster, a pure evil, sadistic, all-powerful, nightmarish, demented monster... and all of his victims, including Tails, Knuckles, Robotnik and possibly Kyle, are just his little toys, and the game is the very gateway into his chaotic, nightmarish world and the very Hell his victims are trapped in.) - 5 points

Dumb hero ( It took Tom 10 minutes of watching animals getting killed to figure out Sonic.exe was a monster? Dumbass) - 5 points

Unoriginal/overused idea ( Haunted Game pastas were way overdone by the time this pasta came around  - 5 points

All-powerful villain ( I AM GOD) - 10 points

Terrible ending (A SONIC plushie? Really?) - 10 points

Bad plot - 5 points

Total score = 0/100

Your pasta score total, JC-the-Hyena (Terrible choice of a name, by the way) is in the score class of "Was written by a brain dead 2-month old pussy.