Talk:Sonic.exe/@comment-24318263-20140612183156/@comment-68.73.145.72-20140803200851
Ok, let me correct your scoring system, as cliches aren't the only things to measure how good or bad the pasta is.
1 cliche= - 1 point
An unlogical beginning = - 5 points
A no-hook beginning = - 5 points
Dumb wording = - 10 points
Dumb hero/heroine = - 10 points
Unoriginal/overused idea = - 5 points
All-powerful villain = - 10 points
Terrible ending = - 10 points
Bad plot = - 5 points
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What this totals up to and why:
40 cliche uses = - 40 points
An unlogical beginning ( If Kyle had the five or so minutes to write the letter, he would have the minute to destroy the disc) - 5 points
A no hook beginning - 5 points
Dumb wording ( It was when I read that message while looking at Sonic when it hit me, I realized {dumb word choice} right there and then.
This Sonic was a monster, a pure evil, sadistic, all-powerful, nightmarish, demented monster... and all of his victims, including Tails, Knuckles, Robotnik and possibly Kyle, are just his little toys, and the game is the very gateway into his chaotic, nightmarish world and the very Hell his victims are trapped in.) - 5 points
Dumb hero ( It took Tom 10 minutes of watching animals getting killed to figure out Sonic.exe was a monster? Dumbass) - 5 points
Unoriginal/overused idea ( Haunted Game pastas were way overdone by the time this pasta came around - 5 points
All-powerful villain ( I AM GOD) - 10 points
Terrible ending (A SONIC plushie? Really?) - 10 points
Bad plot - 5 points
Total score = 0/100
Your pasta score total, JC-the-Hyena (Terrible choice of a name, by the way) is in the score class of "Was written by a brain dead 2-month old pussy.