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“Ok, I guess it’s only for a couple of hours, it won’t hurt."

Cody is such a ghost nerd. He has never seen a ghost, so I guess I can understand all of the anticipation he has to go to the Alamo. Today, all he could think about was the Alamo.Today was the day of the ghost tour that took place at twelve, after all. Midnight, I thought. Just the perfect time for a ghost sighting. It is now ten, and Cody and I are going over supplies.

Cody is such a ghost nerd. He has never seen a ghost, so I guess I can understand all of the anticipation he has to go to the Alamo. Today, all he could think about was the Alamo. Today was the day of the ghost tour that took place at twelve, after all. Midnight, I thought. Just the perfect time for a ghost sighting. It is now ten, and Cody and I are going over supplies.

“Camera, candy, computer, backpack, music, spray paint, check."

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“Can we go home now," I asked.

"No, said Cody."

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~~"No, said Cody." “We have to wait, be patient."~~That’s when I heard it. Creeeaaakk. It was very faint. At 3:00, I felt like I was being watched. So did ~~cody~~. When we looked around, nothing was there. Though, I did think that I saw a dark humanoid figure in the corner of my eye. Creepy.

"We have to wait, be patient."

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At 3:30, two figures that looked like soldiers from the war swooped down at Cody and I, As we both screamed.Moments later, everything was dark. We woke in a noisy, warlike place. We looked ourselves and saw that we were dressed like the ~~texas~~ soldiers. Soon, we were spotted by the Mexicans.

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That’s when I heard it. Creeeaaakk. It was very faint. At 3:00, I felt like I was being watched. So did Cody. When we looked around, nothing was there. Though, I did think that I saw a dark humanoid figure in the corner of my eye. Creepy.

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At 3:30, two figures that looked like soldiers from the war swooped down at Cody and I, As we both screamed. Moments later, everything was dark. We woke in a noisy, warlike place. We looked ourselves and saw that we were dressed like the Texas soldiers. Soon, we were spotted by the Mexicans.

The battle was over quick, and the Mexican soldiers had us backed up in a room, the same room that we spray painted, and it still had the spray paint on it. I knew what I had to do. I begged for mercy at the ghosts, and then everything was bright. I continued to say sorry for my actions, but Cody did not.

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 “Ok, I guess it’s only for a couple of hours, it won’t hurt."
-Cody is such a ghost nerd. He has never seen a ghost, so I guess I can understand all of the anticipation he has to go to the Alamo. Today, all he could think about was the Alamo.Today was the day of the ghost tour that took place at twelve, after all. Midnight, I thought. Just the perfect time for a ghost sighting. It is now ten, and Cody and I are going over supplies.
+Cody is such a ghost nerd. He has never seen a ghost, so I guess I can understand all of the anticipation he has to go to the Alamo. Today, all he could think about was the Alamo. Today was the day of the ghost tour that took place at twelve, after all. Midnight, I thought. Just the perfect time for a ghost sighting. It is now ten, and Cody and I are going over supplies.
 “Camera, candy, computer, backpack, music, spray paint, check."
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 “Can we go home now," I asked.
+"No, said Cody."
-"No, said Cody." “We have to wait, be patient."That’s when I heard it. Creeeaaakk. It was very faint. At 3:00, I felt like I was being watched. So did cody. When we looked around, nothing was there. Though, I did think that I saw a dark humanoid figure in the corner of my eye. Creepy.
+"We have to wait, be patient."
-At 3:30, two figures that looked like soldiers from the war swooped down at Cody and I, As we both screamed.Moments later, everything was dark. We woke in a noisy, warlike place. We looked ourselves and saw that we were dressed like the texas soldiers. Soon, we were spotted by the Mexicans.
+That’s when I heard it. Creeeaaakk. It was very faint. At 3:00, I felt like I was being watched. So did Cody. When we looked around, nothing was there. Though, I did think that I saw a dark humanoid figure in the corner of my eye. Creepy.
+At 3:30, two figures that looked like soldiers from the war swooped down at Cody and I, As we both screamed. Moments later, everything was dark. We woke in a noisy, warlike place. We looked ourselves and saw that we were dressed like the Texas soldiers. Soon, we were spotted by the Mexicans.
 The battle was over quick, and the Mexican soldiers had us backed up in a room, the same room that we spray painted, and it still had the spray paint on it. I knew what I had to do. I begged for mercy at the ghosts, and then everything was bright. I continued to say sorry for my actions, but Cody did not.